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Posted: 13 years ago
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Exactly what I want to see in the show. Lucky me that I am the 1st to comment on both the posts
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Nicely written 👏...hope to see this in the serial too 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

continue asap !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
keep it going..very well written..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i too hope to see this in the serial...welldone...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Priya went home. Siddhant was sitting in the living room. Priya saw him, took out her phone and pretended as if she was talking to Ram.
Priya: Ram aaj mujhe phir se Ashwin mila tha Ma, Papa ke yahan. Maine uski taraf dhyan nahi diya, to usne mera rasta roka aur mafi mangne laga. Aur bar bar keh raha tha ke use mujhe Sid ke bare mein kuch kehna hai. Ram main to wahan se nikal gayi par woh mujhe bahut tang kar raha hai. Aap hi usase baat kijye.
She made sure Sid heard all of her fake convo and then she went up to her room.
The convo was enough to panick Sid. He immediately went up to Mamaji and told him what he had heard.
Mama: Arre woh Ashwin kya batayega, aur Ram uspe wishwas to bilkul nahi karega, isliye aaram karo.
Sid: Nahi mama, pehle to thik tha, pur Nutz ke saath jo hua iske baad pata nahi mujhe lag raha hai ki bhai Ashwin ki baton par dhyan to diga hi aur priya usko hava bhi de sakti hai. Mein aaj he Ashwin se milke, usse kuch khila pila ke uska bandobast karta hoon.
In the meanwhile, Priya had called up Ashwin and informed him what he was supposed to do.
Sid called up Ashwin and asked him to meet him at a restaurant. Ashwin pretended to be reluctant at first but then gave in and said he can come around lunch time. So the meeting was fixed for 12pm. Ashwin informed this to Priya. Priya immediately got to work and called up Ram.
Priya: Ram kya aap muhje lunch par le ja sakte hai?
Ram : Sure, meri biwi ke liye mere paas hamesha waqt hota hai. Kahan chalogi?
Priya: Hotel Blue star. mei aapse 11.30 ko wahin par milti hoon. Thik hai?
Ram: Your wish is my command.
They hang up. She reaches the restaurant around 11.15, Ashwin is already there. They make sure they choose tables such that She and Ram can hear Ashwin and Sid's convo, but at the same time, Sid won't be able to spot them. She then asks Ashwin to leave for a while and come back only around 12pm. Ram shows up exactly at 11.30. They both seat themselves.
Ram: Aaj ekdum se lunch ka plan?
Priya: Haan aise hi, meine is restaurant ke baare mein suna tha to socha aap ke saath aaj plan banati hoon. Aur waise bhi ye to ek bahana hai, mein to aap ke saath waqt bitana chahti thi. I wanted to make up for the 2-3 days we lost fighting with each other.
Ram gave her his famous smile and held her hand, and gazed deep into her eyes. All he could see there was love for him and he felt on top of the world.
Around 12pm, Ashwin met up with Sid and they walked in to the restaurant. Priya spotted them and said:
Priya: Ashwin Sid ke saath yahan kya kar raha hai?
Ram: what? tumhe galat faime hui hogi.
Priya: Nahi Ram woh dono ise taraf aa rahe hai.
Ashwin led Sid to the table which Priya and he had decided upon.
Priya: They are sitting on the table next to us.
Ram: Let me go and checkout. Mujhe tang karke baat nahi bani, to mere bhai ko tang kar raha hoga.
Priya held his hand and stopped him from going.
Priya: Ram Sid is a big boy, woh apna khayal rakh sakta hai. Aur yahan se to hame unki saari baten sunayi deingi. Agar hume lage, ki Sid ko hamari jarurat, hai to hum jayenge use help karne.
Ram listened to Priya although reluctantly.
Ashwin: Sid ha bolo kyun bulaya hai mujhe yahan?
Sid: Tumhara moh band karwane ke liye. Meine suna hai ki tum Ram ko batane wale ho, hamare purane plan ke bare mein? To yeh bahut he bura idea hai. woh tumhari baat nahi manega aur tum phir se haar jaoge.
Ashwin: Agar aise baat hai Sid, to tum kyun dar rahe ho. Mera aacha ho yeh soch kar to tumne mujhe yahan nahi bulaya? Ya phir tum dar rahe ho ki agar Ram ko yeh pata chala, ki tumne mujhe Priya aur Ram ke rishte mein darar paida karne ke liya uksaya tha, aur mujhe alag alag ideas diye the Ram ke man mein Shak paida karne ke liye, to woh tumhara kya hashar karega?
Sid: Mein Uss Ram se darta nahi hoon. Mein to uska bhai hoon, woh meri har bhool maph karta aaya hai aur aage bhi karega. Mein to tumhe help karne aaya tha.
When Ram heard what Sid had just said, he couldn't control his anger any more. He got up from his seat, walked up to Sid's table, held him by the collar and gave him a tight slap.
He dragged him outside the restaurant with Priya following them. They reached home. Ram dragged him in. Hearing the commotion, Nih and Mama came out.
Nih: Kya hua Ram tum itne gusse mein kyon ho? Aur Sid ko yun...
Ram: Ma aap sunegi, to aap bhi hairan hojayyegi. Aaj isne sari had paar kardi hai. Mein har baar iske galtiyon ko nazar andaj kiya hai, par aaj isne jo galti ki hai, mein use kabhi maph nahi kar sakta. Sid, tum abhi ke abhi, apni bags pack karo aur yahan se nikal jao.
Nih: Par hua kya Ram, kuch batao to sahi.
Ram: Ma, aapko woh Ashwin yaad hai, jisne..
Nih: Han to?
Ram: Sid ne use mere aur Priya ke bich darar paida karne ke liye uksaya tha. He was the one who was behind Ashwin's actions. Vikram mujhe baar bar iske galat kamon ke bare mein batata raha, But mein use ignore kiya thinking he is my younger brother, par baat aab had se gujar gay hai.
Nih: Ram kya tum Ashwin ki bataon par vishwas karoge? Tumhe apne bhai par wishwas nahi hai, woh aisa kyun karega?
Ram: Ma aaj agar maine apne kanon se Sid ko yeh sab kuch admit karte hue nahi suna hota, to mein bhi Ashwin ki baton par dhyan nah deta. Ma isse kaho ke meri aakhon ke samne se chala jaya, warna mein bhool jaounga ke yeh mera bhai hai.
Niharika had no choice but to scold Sid and see him being kicked out.
She instatly new that somehow Priya had something to do with all this. She gave Priya a look(only if looks could kill!!) Priya on the other hand gave her a nice wicked smile. She and Ram left for their room.
Ram was so upset with the all that had happened, he was chasing up and down the room when Priya entered. On seeing her, he instantly went near her and gave her a big hug.
Ram: Priya what have I done to deserve a family like that? Maine inhe itna pyar diya, kisi cheej ki kami nahi mehssoos hone di, aur inhone ne hi mere pith peeche ye sab kuch? Pehle Mere saagi maa ne, phir chooti ne aur ab Sid ne?
Priya:(consoling him) Ram mein janti hoon aap ko bahut bura lag raha hai, par mein aapke saath hoon aur hamesha rahungi. Aap dukhi maat hoyi ye. Mein janti hoon ki Sid ko apni galti ka ahesas hoga aur woh ek accha insan banke wapas ayega. Abhi aap shant ho jaiye aur office jayiye,Sham ko hum ek romantic dinner pe jayenge. Lunch to spoil ho gaya, par I will make it up to you at dinner.
Edited by shonuz_mom - 13 years ago
salsaly thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

this is such a lovely SS... pls do continue asap !!!






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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
nice update yaar👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful...nice way to expose sid..!!! nd nih ka expressions..😛..wud hav been fun to watch too...continue asap pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
just no words to say too good ...cant express it in words just out of the world cant wait for next update



so please please update asap

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