SS: After monday's Precap added part 3 on page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey all,
This is my first attempt at writing. Let me know if you guys like it and then I will continue.
Part 1:
Niharika calls Priya. Priya has been waiting for her call. Priya answers the phone.
Priya:Sasu ma pairi pouna.
Nih: How are you? I am so sorry Priya, that I asked you to leave this house. Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha, ki main tumhe acche taraha pehchan hi nahi saki. Please Priya mujhe maaf kardo aur ghar wapas chali aao.
Priya: Mein janti hoon sasu ma, mujhe ghar bulane ke peeche aap ka koi matlab hai.
Nih: Tumne thk socha hai Priya, mein apne bete Ram ki bhalai chahati hoon. Kya karoon, jabse tum gayi ho, uska kisi mein dil nah laga raha.
(Priya is happy hearing this) So uski khatir mein tumhe ghar bula rahi hoon.
Priya:Thik hai main aajaongi
Nih:Mein Ram ko bhejti hoon tumhe yahan lane ke liye.
Nih called Ram and gave him the good news. Ram couldn't believe his ears. He grinned ear to ear and left immediately to get Priya back home where she belonged , with him.
Ram reached Priya's building and got out of his car. He rushed into her building. He met the lady from Priya's building who had first predicted that Ram and Priya belonged together,
lady: Oh Ram ruko lift aa rahi hai,
Ram: Nahi mein sedhiyon se chadkar jaounga.
He ran up the stairs. He reached Sharma house and waited for a moment to get his breath back and then knocked on the door. Shipra opened the door and welcomed Ram, and then called for Priya. Just then Sudhir walked into the living room. Ram immediately touched his feet
Ram: Papa, Ma, I am really sorry for what I did. I should have atleast listened to you and tried to go to the root of the matter before taking any action. I know I have wronged you as well as Kartik and I hope you will find it in your heart to forgive me.
Priya almost had tears in her eyes, but she held them back. Soon Priya and Ram were on their way to KM. Ram was desperately looking for words to start a conversation, but couldn't find any.
On reaching KM, Rishab was there to welcome Priya, he informed her that dadi wanted to meet her. She went to meet Dadi. Ram went to their room.
Dadi: Priya puttar tu agayi, rab ka lakh lakh shukriya. Mera Golu tere bagair bilkul akela ho gaya tha. Ab use chod ke mat jana.
Priya: Aap chinta na karo dadi mein nahi jaoungi unhe chodke.
Dadi : Tu ja aab aaram kar le thak gayi hogi.
Priya leaves and goes to their bedroom. Ram has changed into his PJs and is standing by the window. She goes straight to the dressing room and changes into her night gown. She comes into the room. Ram is on his side of the bed, their eyes meet. Priya gets under the covers.
Ram: Priya..
Before he says anything Priya says:Goodnight Mr Kapoor. She turns her back towards him and closes her eyes. Ram moves closer to her and puts his hand on her shoulder and tries to get her to face him.
Priya: So jayeye Mr Kapoor, raat bahut ho gayi hai.
Hearing this, Ram moves over to his side of the bed and now both are lying with their backs towards each other. Priya is thinking about all the thngs she said to him in the past 2 days. She remembers how rude she acted right now and tears start flowing thru her eyes and a sob escapes her mouth. Ram hears this and moves closer to her again. This time he slides his arm around her waist and pulls her closer. She is now resting against his chest. She turns to face him. He wipes away the tears from her face.
Ram: I am so sorry Priya. I wish I could take away the pain I have caused you and your family. But please try and forgive me. I am ready to do anything to make this pain go away, but please don't cry. You know I can't bear to see you with tears in your eyes.
Hearing this Priya couldn't control herself anymore and she hugged him. He hugged her back. They stayed like that for a while, then Ram loosened his grip and looked into her eyes as if to ask her permission to kiss her. He saw the same desire in her eyes and he leaned down and planted a kiss on her cheek and moved on to her lips, and they shared a passionate kiss. Then they made passionate love that could only compare to the C night.
They slowly drifted off to sleep.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful dear. Portrayed their emotions and the scenes very well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aweosme supab...lovely...wish raya reunitw soon...we see our lovely raya again.
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dear !!! u write so well... i'm so touched... really... y havent u written b4... u r a talented writer... pls take ur tym & present lovely updates 4 us in future... big thanks frm bottom of my heart to u... here is a thank u pic frm me... hope u lyk it... !!!


thanks a lot dear !!! 🤗



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Posted: 13 years ago
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You wrote very well dear.
Lovely and emmotional update.
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it dint seem like it was the first time you wrote something...lovely...cud have made it a bit more long...feel like reading more n more ..dats y...do write more often...👏👏👏
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woww its lovely yaar ,you penned down so beutifully their emotions
thank you..keep coming them more

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Posted: 13 years ago
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If only it would happen like this on Monday.

Good one and great job!
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very beautifully written... awesome yaar... pls updates karthi raho...😊 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you all for the encouraging words.
Part 2:
Next morning Priya woke up around 7am. She tried to move away from Ram's grip but invain. She ran her fingers thru his hair and that woke him up.
Priya: Good morning.
Ram: Good morning.
Priya: Chaliye uthiye, aapko shayad yad nahi hai lekin aaj monday hai aur aapko office jaana hai Mr Kapoor.
Ram: Mujhe to yaad hai, lekin tumhe shayad yad nah hai ki mera naam kya hai.
Priya blushed and said: ok Ram ab uthiye mein tayar ho jati hun aur aap ke liye breakfast le aati hoon tab tak aap tayar ho jaiye.
Ram let her go.
By the time Priya got their breakfast up to their room, Ram was ready and waiting for her. They had their breakfast together after a long time and it did taste more

tastier.
After Ram left for office, Priya immediately wanted to get back to work and act upon bringing Nih's true colors in front of Ram. She called up Vikram after making

sure that their bedroom door was shut.
Vik: Han bolo Priya,
Priya: Meine bahut soch Vikram, aur mujhe lagta hai ki hame pehle chote machli ko pakadna chahiye aur phir badi machli ko. Kya tum Sid aur Mama ji ke baare

mein office se aisa kuch pata kar sakte ho jisse hum Ram ko dikha de, ke he is upto no good.
Vik: Nahi Priya, Ram ko maine kai baar uske iradon ke bare me bataya hai, par har baar Ram use ignore kar deta hai. Hame aaisa kuch dhoondhana padega jisse

Ram ignore na kar sake
Priya: Thik hai Vikram tum office me pata karne ki koshish karo aur mein bhi kuch sochti hoon.
She disconnected the phone and was about to leave to go to Sharma house when her phone rang. It was Shruti.
Shruti: Kaisi ho Priya? I am really glad ke tum KM wapas chali gayi ho. Tum bahot lucky ho ke tumhe Ram jaisa pati mila hai.
Priya: Haan Shruti mein sach me bahot lucky hoon.
Shruti: Kaash Ashwin bhi Ramki tarah hota, but the problem with him is ki woh kisi ki bhi baton me jaldi aa jaata hai. Pehle usne mere papa ki baton me aakar,

tumse rishta tod diya aur baad me Siddhant Kapoor ki baton me aakar tumhara rishta todna chaha, pur ussase hamara hi rishta toot gaya.
By this time Priya was engulfed in her thoughts and didn't really pay attention to what info Shruti just gave her.
Shruti: Thik hai Priya phir mein rakhti hoon. and she hung up.
Priya still deep in her thoughts reached Sharma house. On the way to her building she again ran into Ashwin. She ignored him and started walking past him.
Ashwin: Priya, please meri baat suno.
Priya stops.
Ashwin: Mein janta hoon ki mein is layak nahi hoon, lekin mein tumse mafi mangna chahta hoon. Meine jo kuch kiya uske karan Shruti bhi mujhe chod ke chali

gayi. Sari galati meri hain, agar mein Sid aur mama ji ki bataon mein na aya hota to mein aaj Shruti ke saath khush hota.
The last sentence caught Priya's attention and she asked him
Priya: Kya matlab, Sid aur mamaji ki baton mein?
Ashwin explained to her what all had happened and how Sid and mama had encouraged him to go ahead and try and break Ram and Priya's relationship etc...

Priya's thoughts went back to her convo with Shruti and she remembered her also mentioning the same thing.
Priya thought may be she has got the goods on Sid and Mama, which she can use to throw them out.
Priya: Par ye sab tum mujhe kyon bata rahe ho?
Ashwin: Priya kya tum Shruti se mere bare me baat karke hamari sulah karva sakti ho? Please I really want to mend my relationship with her.
Priya: Ashwin mein Shruti se baat karungi lekin iske kya guarantee hai ke tum Sid ke baare mein jo bata rahe ho woh sab kuch sach hai? Agar tum ye proove

karte ho, to mein Shruti se baat karungi
Ashwin: Thik hai Priya mein usse yeh sab ugalwane ki koshish karunga.
Priya thinks quickly and comes up with a plan and asks ashwin to follow her instructions.

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