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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
this part was good too dear...u penned up ur thoughts nicely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Very emotional part,lvd it.plz post next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Super dear,yaar thoda emotinal to hona hi chahiye, always sweatmoment ho to maza nahi aata by the way tell me how u write 5 parts in one day? I also wont to write but no time. Please give me ur some time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
part-6

in KM ram sent all forces to search priya , he sat on her fav couch ,touching the edges of it ,feeling priya's presence around him , he looks at the mirror and remebred she always come with wet hair infron of that and drying the hair by standing there...
he heard a sound of laugh coming from the balcony ,he went to see ,she is swinging and laughing ,he went there to touch her to feel her ,he elated to see her back,
i love you priya , i can't live without you ,he hugged her ,he himself fell on swing ..there is no priya ,no love ,where is she , where is my love ,if she saw this newspaper what she will think ...bapuji plzzz why you left me alone here , i need priya back to my life ,plz send her back to me ..
im dying to see her once

the bg plays
Bade achhe laggte hain

Ye Dharti ye nadiyaa ye raina Aur Tummm...


Mere sukh dukh mein rahthe ho,

thum banke hum saaya,

tere apne banke aaye meine bhi sar jhukaaya,

Bade achche lagthe hai saath thera... ye dilaase, humdardhi aur thum...


he shatterd on the bed ,took her photo ,why you left me priya why ,the restlessness takes him to slumber ,he clutched her photo and slept off .
3days passed but there is no sign of priya anywhere ..
dr.patil:krishu ji she is very weak and temperature is not coming down .may be
priya squealed in pain ,krishu ji ran to her ,beta what happen
ma stomach pain its getting worse ,are you in your cycle priya ? ha ma 2nd day but she rolled down on the bed with pain..
dr.patil cheked her ,krishuji im suspecting it maybe appendicitis,i will arrange ambulance we have to leave now
they left for the hospital ,the doctors decided to do surgery as fast as possible otherwise her condition will get worse,
they are preparing for the surgery they need sign on consent form ,she vomited 4 or 5 times ,literally the pain dragging her more its excruciating her,
priya shall i call to ram she asked her slowly ...why ma ,or your parents no ma dont call me anyone ,i dont have any...im 5n ,lekin ye consent form pe sign
ma plz you do otherwise i will do by myself ,socho priya agar kuch ,cutting her in the middle plz ma whatever happens also even if i die...
krishu ji closed her mouth by her sound ,plz priya tum aaram karo mai abhi aayi...priya controling herself to talk with him or see him , she asked the phone from a sister and called to ram just to listen his voice ,
its ringing ..ringing
he attended the call [a weak gasp escaped from his mouth]hello
she breaths heavily while listening his voice ..
hello ,koyi hai ..helloo
she falls silent he guesed her ,priya
she startled by this ,she just listens him carefully ,priya i knw its you ,plz i can hear your breath sounds priya ,plz where are you
controling her sobs she disconected the call ,switched off the cell and gave it to her .plz sister if anyone calls to this number dont tell you have given to me this plz.
she just noded her head as aproval left from there ,they have taken her to the surgery .


Edited by luvsakshi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Nany

Super dear,yaar thoda emotinal to hona hi chahiye, always sweatmoment ho to maza nahi aata by the way tell me how u write 5 parts in one day? I also wont to write but no time. Please give me ur some time.



Nany this writer is too busy somehw she got 3 days holidays , after the epi i used to ask her how was it , how you are expecting the next parts ,when she said to me i feel its gud and wants to share here so i asked her to write but when she started writing its not ending as soon as she thought.
but this track she wants to give an end and wants to continue with her other ffs ,so im bugging up like hell to write up ..guys as she told the lovely moments will come but its in coming updates .
thank you very much for your lovely comments .

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Simply awesome.. Pls pls update sn..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its just super .continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
aww priya..!!! she is in pain...😭😭...use teek kardo na...🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
OMG Priya is going through so much of pain 😭 😭
again an emotional heart touching update
plz update soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-7
ram cald to someone and came to know where the call came from,when he heard the word, he panickd and rushed to the hospital
enquired did anyone joined by priya kapoor's name ,his hands are shaking and praying god that she should be fine .the reseptionist told sir there is no name noted as priya kapoor ,he sigh reliefd and turns to go stopped by the receptionist ,sir but on priya's name 1 patient admitd and she is in operation theater for appendicitis.
he almost ran there ,his fists are tightening with angry ,his face become red ,he is fuming with anger by seeing krishu ji infront of OT[operation theater]
how dare priya ...she is talking with his ma after the promice also he spuns to go from there a sister flashed to krishu ji ,mam we need blood as she lost somuch of blood.will you go and bring [BT serial ka style] he took the paper from sister,krishuji was shocked to see him on the spot,he ran to the blood bank within 5mins he reachd there with blood packs ,gave to sister sat desperately on the chair eagerly waiting for the finishing of the surgery , its almost 3days she didnt even look her once.
plz god save her , he called to sudhir &vikram ,the surgery finished ,the sharma's too reached there aswell as nevik.
doctor came out he and krishuji reachd the doctor at the same time ,as doctor knows krishuji,he told her mam aap ka beti zyada week hai ,our aneamic bi,we will keep her in icu and observes for some hours if she feels good than we will shift to room.
ram asked doctor how much money also he will spent on her plz save her , koi jarorat nahi hai mr.kapoor priya paid the bill already and she deposited extra money also for furthur treatment .everybody has tears on their eyes ,they shifted priya to the ICU.
the sister came out and asked who is her mother?
shipra and krishu ji mai hu at the same time "she confused and left from there" and informed priya that there are two ladies
whom i should call mam, sister call krishu ji plzzz
again she came back cald krishu ji ,priya mam is calling you can you plz come with me,shipra wants to go but invain ,the sister allowd only krishuji.
ram came with some medicines when he heard shipra telling to sudhir ,why priya is not allowing me to see her ,
what she gain consious,and she is able to talk now , he wants to go there but the sister stopped sir its restricted ,im sorry sir
he cald to some one he came and allowd kapoor and their family too ..
krishuji :with teary eyes kaise hai beta?
priya: ma i told you ki dont inform anyone ..who was outside ,i want to go from here plz i dont have anyone and i dont want to see anyone,plz ma let me take from here,
she is crying in krishujis hands ,wincing with pain haa ,sister came adjusted priya mam if you cry like this your pain will get worse ,as just now you arrived from OT,we cnt give any pain killer so plz control yourself ..
ram seeing her but his vision was blurred with tears ,sharma's went to see her ,how are you priya?how you feeling didi?
priya clutched krishuji's arm more firmly ,she glanced at all to glimpse of her LOVE but nowhere ..
she didnt utter anyword to them as she was aprehenced by them,priya kuch tho bolo beta ,tum galat samaj gayi?? we will clear this out when we reached home?
ma tell them i wont bother them anymore and i wont step in their house anytime, i wont trouble them ,she placed her hands on her stomach wincing with pain and krishu ji asked sister to plz give some thing to calm this pain ,ma you will reduce my physical pain by giving painkillers ,what about my heart ma its hearting me alot ,plz tell them to goaway from here i dont want to see anyone, i loved everyone but no one loves me back , yes ma i dont have anyone ..crying bitterly..
What you are talking priya ,YOU DONT HAVE ANYONE,look at me and repeat those words again ..
she astonished to see him by her bedside near to krishuji ...


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