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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 7


after few mins...

ram : ha chhoti bol

natasha: bhai neitik ke liye meine jo dress material mangwaye the aap leke ayenge na???

ram : ha baba... i will..

after that ram attends a call which made him green...

a very sad priya everymonth after PREM's treatment,, visit a baby store for buying gifts for prem...

she reaches to the store whre somebody realy lovable was present already...
ya it was her beloved ram kapoor who visited the shop to buy dress material for her natasha and kartik's 3 mnths old child
neitik...

priya was selecting her gift when her voice '' i think u shld pack this '' came to ram...
hearing smthng knwn he turned back ... he was suprized ,, shOcked and on the other hand very happy to see priya ... he gave a
painfull smile after 5 years long wait...the were in a few inches


sir what would you like to take??

ram : PAck This one......

His voice came as a wave to priya , it was only her's sound , this sound was only for her,,,, she took a few seconds to realize
it ram's voice but lesser time than that she took to turn back...
she turned back... yes it was her man, after a 5 yeared loOong wait she had his glance, not knowing how to react she
just fixed her eyes on ram , the same thing happend with ram...
their trance was broken when a lad called .. sir, mam can u plz visit to the counter please???
Priya was the first to say... "yes"
she just wanted to come out of the situation , to avoid such circumstances
she hurriedly made her way for the payment...
ram followed her...
after they completed their payment both standing beside each other,,,
ram first dragged the convo... excuseme... i think there is a terrace up... can we go there??
manager: yes for sure sir...
ram : kya hum log ja sakte hain priya ???
priya : hesiteted but doesnt wanted to miss the moment after years...she made her way to the terrace
TERRACE

The scene starts with ram and priya standing side by side ... very hesiteted ram and priya though wanted to talk a huge,, cant' just drag the convo first...
both looked other sides from each other,, priya did'nt have the guts to face him

Ram : Tumhe kahi jana hain kya ???
Priya : (after a sec) nahin , mutlub haan... classes!!!
Ram :( taking a bit) oH ! yaha bhi ?? Mutlub yaha permanent ho??
Priya : aah !! ya....
Ram : oh ! meine socha...
Priya : (interrupted) kya?
Ram : shayadh honeymoon pe ayi hogi !!
Priya : Kya ????????? Kyun socha aisa??
Ram : sindur, mangalsutra,,, and ...
Priya smiled...
RAM : kitne din hue tumhare successfull shadhi ke??
Priya : aah !! 6 mothns >
RAM : (he nodded) pati kya karta hain??
PRIYA: business...
ram smiled : Ya business...
Priya : aap yaha??
Ram : haan yaha kuch kamke liye...
Priya : hann!! wo to mujhe pata hain kuch kAM ke liye aye hain australia...but iss baby store pe??
Ram : aah !! oh !! let me show u smthng...( he opened his phone )... see (showing her neitik's photograph) bilkul mujhpe gya hain r8??
Priya :( stunned she pointed) aap ka????
Ram : (bravely and confidentaly) yah !!!
this single word made her mind ful of pain , this was a terrinble big blow that ram hve'nt waited for her... he married again...still she behaved cassual
wow !! u also married again... good... kitne saal hue shadhike ???
Ram : tin...
Priya : again turned her face away from ram to hide her pain...
Ram : tum is store pe??
PRiya : Yeah ! wo ek bacche ki birth day thi is liye...
Ram : Oh !! good...
Priya : i think abhi hum e jana chahie...
Ram : yeah ??? but mere car pe chalogi??
Priya : no, i use monorail...
RAM :) (SMILED) monorail ?? would u mind, if i go with u ???
Priya : giving a sigh ( no i wont' )

will be continued


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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
this is too good!! 👏
lekin
😲
itna suspense!!!!
please write another part right now yaar!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
yaar in ki misunderstanding jaldi door karo warna😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
OMG I M SPEECHLESS,SO TOUCHING.PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ..intresting ..

when they will come to knw they two were not married again and waiting for eachother
now eagerly waiting ..plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Its to good but clear the misunderstanding.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
😛beautiful...y are they lying to each other😭...do continue soon...suspense ko pls thod do na...WAITING for ur next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
PART 8

MONORAIL...

THEY HAD A SIT TOGATHER...
AFTER A LONG SILENCE...Ram noticed priya thinking smthng...

Ram : Kya soch rahi ho??
Priya: aap ki patnika nam 'N' se shuru hota hoga na?
Ram : wow ! yar tumhe kaise pata ??
Priya : (releasing a deep breath) wo apka nam ram hain..aur apke bete ka naam
Neitik... not bit of R,A or M...
Ram : is it your new hobby ??
Priya : what?
Ram : playing with letters?
Priya:(smiled)
RAM : (after a few minute) a6a ek baat kahu., dnt mind...
Priya : nahin kahie...
Ram : agar hamara aj koi beta hota to kya nam rakhti...
Priya : Prem...
Ram : rose his eyebrows... WOW !! achha priya...
Priya : ha?
Ram : i want to meet ur husband..
Priya : kya? wo ac2aly hes out of town..
Ram : its ok , i want to mt ur family...
Priya : oh !no Mr.kapoor... i cant' take you home...
Ram : y??
Priya : aapko jake achha nahi lagega...
Ram : no trust me.. i won't mind anything...
Priya : i ust dnt want u to cme with me...
Ram : y not??
Priya took her bag in her arms,, and being very disturbed she just started waiting for the
door to open...
Ram : holded her hand...
Priya : kya fark parta hain??? ha?? hamare raste to ab alag ho chke hain na...humne ek doosreke liye wait nahi kiya...aapne we shadhi karli and so did i...i
love my behalf now more than you... and i knw aap bhi,, bcz tin saal se ap uske saath hain,, obviously aap usse zyada pyar karte hain...
Ram : ek second... yeh sab tum mujhe suna rahi ho ya apne apko? ha?? to tumhe kya lagta hain?? i still love you?? mein abhi bhi tumse pyar karta hu?? jisne without any reason
mujhe akela kar dia?????what u want to listen ... yes i love my wife... is it okaY???
Priya : jaanti hun!!! ofcourse i ditched you na... why would you love me... ? why would you wait for me???
Ram : to did u waited????
Priya : wohi to kahe rahi hun tabse... ram priya ka chapter khatam... aur iske baad hum log kabhi nahi milenge... not again...
Ram : i m going with you...
Priya : m not married okaY????? Kya farak parta haIN...but dont be afraid i dont love you...no , mr.kapoor...
Ram : (stunned)kya mein asakta hun tumhare ghar??
Priya : i live with krishna ji and apeksha...
thE door opened ,, she hurriedly made her way out of the monorail... ram followed.,,, ram started asking... can i join you... i dont have any problem..
priya didnt' answr... ram repeated can i?????
Priya :as you wish...

WILL BE CONTINUED
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
wowww this is soo touching dear .. i just waited for this part and waiting for next part tooo

plzplzz update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
part 7's comment... pls dont cr8 a misunderstanding here... continue asap... thanks 4 the pm !!!


Edited by salsaly - 13 years ago

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