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Posted: 13 years ago
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Are yar koi niharika ko ham sab ke bich lao ,im sure sab uski ache se band bajayege.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4

both of nihari KA and dr. pa TIL (together K A T I L ) left priya and locked her in the room ,wIth niharika headed to ram





niharika managed to place the divorce paper on the center table of ram's room,,, so as per her plan ram saw the papers...
he was shocked to see those , obviously he created a scene and ofcourse cant' blv her eyes... he dialed priya , but i don't think
priya's phone was with her to answr the call... he directly went to the sharmas but nothing was found... he was completely dissapointed
his heart broke into pieces... but vikram was the one to sense something worse...
(ACTUALLY I DONT' WANT TO DRAG IT NOW... BECAUSE MY ORGINAL STORY HAS NOT COME YET,, SO LET RAM'S EXPRESSION ON YOUR IMAGINATION
I m going directly to my deciced story )

a weak later

it was the previous dark room whre priya was being locked, a bright light came when inside as the door was opened ...
somebody opened the door... the lady inside was just looking for the scope...
she found it siddhart... she starts pretending as was still sleeping , sid made a call to niharika to inform possitive result...
he was facing his back to priya...
when he cutted the phone , priya banged him from behind with a vase and came out of the place...
she ran with all her might,, it was difficult but she managed to reach mr.kapoor's office

she was realy restless... a low and dipping voice Mr.kapoor...
RAM : tum ???? kyun ai ho yaha pe ha???? is there anything left to say ??? left to do???
priya : mr.kapoor aap meri baat sunie plz...
ram : kuch nahi sunna mujhe !!!! kuch nahi !! tumse to hargis nahin...meine galti ki jo tum jaisi aurat ko meine apni zindagi mein jaga di
priya : i know mr.kapoor indino aapko mere khilaaf bohot kuch...
(somebody hold priya's hand from behind )

niharika : tumhaari himmat kaise hui yaha aane ki ??? ha??? meri bete ki zindagii barbaad karke,, phirse nataak karne ayi ho ???
priya bursted : bandh kijie nataak aap...yeh nautanki bandh kijie...atm machine banake rakhe hain mr.kapoor ko...
nakab utarie apna yeh... !!

ram : shut up !!! shut up !!!!!! just get out of my place... don't even dare to show me your face...
niherika banged her on the floor... just leave my son's life...
ram turned back ...

priya : Mr.kapoor plz meri baat suniye...
niharika : mein tumhaari baat sunti hu priya ... come... she always dragged her out...

ram annoyedly threw the materials in the table,, and also her pic with a painfull cry

same condition was going with priya...when she was forced to get out of her behalf's life
she was threatened by her family and hsbands life... she had no other option than to leave the place and callth trusted krishnaji

WILL BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hats off to ur imagination ananya ji.. Very eager to read the nxt part.. Pls update asap.. <3 <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5

ram annoyedly threw the materials in the table,, and also her pic with a painfull cry

same condition was going with priya...when she was forced to get out of her behalf's life
she was threatened by her family and hsbands life... she had no other option than to leave the place and callth trusted krishnaji

priya's voice trembled bcz she was flooding
mein kya karu ma.. i cant get any way ...
krishna : priya ,shayadh tumhare paas aur koi optio nahi hain... tumhe ramke khatir ram ko chhodna parega...
priya : nahi ma... aap aisa mat kahie... plz...
krishna cutted the phone...

the next scene started... when she had a flight to australia with krishna ji... and started her journey out of ram's life

australia....

it was krishna ji's terrace... whre priya was standing alone in a yellow salwar...breaze was flowing high it touched priya's sole ... she could realise her new life...
she could realize the dissappearance of her lovely past... she was completely in tornado... when she felt something ichy... she hurriedly rushed the nearby basin
and vomitted a bit... she again came to the same place and started to forcefully enter a new life...

5 years later

the same place , a same yellow salwar lady ... breaze were flowing much more heavier than before... priya 's hair was not to control... but who could control ??? she was in
her dreams of ram... still now she loves him ... far far far more than she did in 5 years before without any
contact bcz niharika hve ruined all.. this was exactly 5 years of their wedding though broken but still she can't accept their divorce... she in was in a trance of ram
when it was broken with a sound "ma!"

priya turned back..." PREM ??" aap yaha pe ??? aap ki drawing khatam hogayi ??? (She came near to him ) aap sirhiya chhadke kyun aye ??? mana kiya tha na meine ???
dard to nahi horaha hain na... (she said it looking to her 4 yeared prem's small leg which was crepped with bandages and looking at his sticks ...)

prem : no ma ... mujhe bua leke ayi...
priya looked up when she saw apeksha in front... she gave a relaxing smile...her eyes started flooding again

apeksha : priya stop it... dekho ...plz
priya : hmm... (she put prem on her hands and started moving downwards...
a few minutes later
priya : ma !! me aati hun... aaj prem ko doctor ki paas..

ma : aaj ??? par...

priya : haan wo agle hafte doctor nahi the na... to iss hafte ...

ma : oh !! take care... by prem

prem : by dadi... he kissed krishna and apeksha...

WILL BE CONTINUED.




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lavi_961

Hats off to ur imagination ananya ji.. Very eager to read the nxt part.. Pls update asap.. <3 <3


THANZ AND UPDATED
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Nice story...very touching too...keep it up...😳😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh god. 5 years hogaye ,ye ram kar kya raha hai ,please continue and kill niharika.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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vat an updates dear...

but vat happen to Prem's leg... i hope its not permanent
update soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have read all u r parts in one go and u have a great imagination power.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
wow, please continue soon.. 👏

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