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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Hey My guess is Right, That is Karthick
How sweet Ram is, He brings Karthick & Nuts for Priya
So Vikram Parents done Kanyadan for Priya
Vikram accepted Priya as his sister, nice to hear this
Vikram said "anything for you sister "
Aww finally RaYa married
Priya Scared hearing the word First night
Neha don't miss any chance to tease her
Neha":Shaadi ke baad pyaar hote hote hohi jaatha hai winking at her"
OMG! what a gift Ram gave Priya for their First night, I never expect this๐Ÿ˜†
Aww Ram help Priya ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ram massage her head too , How so sweet ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Morning Nuts come to RaYa room & tease Priya ๐Ÿ˜‰
Priya Missing Ram
Ram was in office tension scold Priya & hurt her too
Priya never expect this from Ram
Feels very bad for Priya
Ram felt bad & guilty for his behavior
Because of him, Priya not eat anything & slept
So now Priya start ignore Ram
Ram feels very bad now, because him Priya didn't ate anything from yesterday night
Ram send flower & Sorry card for Priya
But Priya is missing & Ram become more worried
When he reached home, then only he knew what had happen
He also rush to Airport
Flight scenes very cute
specially that chocolate scene ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks for the Lovely update ๐Ÿ˜Š
Continue soon ASAP ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much for the lovely comment dear
sory for late reply
yes your guess is correct .Its karthik and nuts
Vikram aceptd priya ss his sister and his parents did kanyadan for her
finally Raya married
haha obviously priya will scare na hearing first night
yah shaadi ke baad pyaar hote hote ho hi jaatha hai
..
haha see you never expected thats why its surprise gift to her ๐Ÿ˜†

They are facing so much teasing and Priya laredy missing Ram
in his nager he hurted her
noe priya iginoring the man
and Ram s=manfoying her
By the time priya reachd to airport
and he to joins with her

Thank you so much
Im gla dyou liked it

Thank you


Originally posted by: armanz

Mindblowinggg updateee Neel..
Will be back soon


Hayee hayee Choco woh bhi jhuta exchange ho rahe hain... good going Priya.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

Yes my jaan you are falling for him baby, you will know that soon. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Hurray Twins twins khelenge RaYa...Lol woh Nuts ke kids hain I know but RaYa ke nephews honge na.. ๐Ÿ˜†

Oh my yeh sab planning tha.. fot RaYa honeymoon.. they are in trouble but I am loving it. Hope they will become one soon.

Oh toh Ram has planned his business accordingly..good very good.

Lol small room no couch..cosy moments first touches..

Kyaaa she is suffering with back ache.. poor gal..Ram ke haanthon se massage karwane ke liye body bhi correct time pe kaam karna band kiya hain.. ๐Ÿ˜†

Itna dard hai ki she went and hugged him. Bechari..

Wah wah Ram ji massage achi tarah karo.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Remembering a song.. main zandu balm hua darling tere liye( yaha Amrutanjan likhlenge) ๐Ÿ˜†

Ahaa a very good RaYa hug wala morning Kartik.. ๐Ÿ˜†

Oh madam ji is sorry but why ji aap toh biwi ho..appke hubby ne bhi bol diya.just enjoy his touch. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Ahaa she enjoyed bath remembering his touch. very good improvemnt Priya.. single se mingle hone ke symptoms hain.. ๐Ÿ˜†

The way she was eyeing him, he caressing her and tucking the hair..eyelocks. So the couple are going young than their siblings.

So Ram has house over there and RaYa will love sep.. Loved that.
Johnnyy beta Priya ko darr hai aapse ๐Ÿ˜†

So romance gonna happen on king bed.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

And madam ji slept in lap ahem ahem.. aur phir Ram ji ko kiya tempt kiss karne ke liye . phir bhi Ram ji Control control kar rahe hain..

Lol she didnt allow him to touch as she played with dog..
But Nuts got good chance to tease her.

Oh so enjoying together.. good.

Oh no he got drenched so he is sick..poor man he is on bed now. Priya isnt leaving him giving warm cozy hugs even now.. loved it.

Wify ka hug bukhar gayab... ๐Ÿ˜†

Amazing write up
Loved it to bits...unhe jaldi ek kardo
Thank u so much.
continue soon.



Thank you so much Vijji
lol jhuta exchange ๐Ÿ˜†... Yeah she is falling for him helplessly ๐Ÿ˜†

yeah Raya will play with the twins hopefully you all get surprise in next update and im going to wait for you ppls responce for the twist ๐Ÿ˜›
Yes ye sab plaanning hai .. they are in trouble but its a lovely loving trouble ๐Ÿ˜‰
yeah first only he lanned his business
haha she is suffering with bachache bcz of ling journey .. OMG rofls agree iwth you
Ram ke haanthon se massage karwane ke liye body bhi correct time pe kam karna banda kya ๐Ÿ˜†
bechari.. she has so much pain
lol he has done very well that masage

Remembering a song.. main zandu balm hua darling tere liye( yaha Amrutanjan likhlenge)
Lol
Rofls
aap tho biwi ho so subkuch asani se hojayengi ๐Ÿ˜†

yeah she ejoyed her bath remebering his touch ..
haha yah couple are going themselves young than their siblings
romance gonna happen oin king bed or karthik ka chota bedroom
muze nahi patha but sure romance is going to happen
Ram has house over there and they are in a lovely bond
and enjoyoing their holidays to the core
and Ram falls sick but soon he wil be laright with his lady love
stay tuned ofr next update
Loev you
thank you so much for the beautiful comment
wify ja hug bukar gayab๐Ÿ˜†




Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Awesome Update๐Ÿ‘
I have no words to Explain
RaYa scenes are magical
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much
im glad you liked it
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

thnks for pm

nuts teasing priya lovd it


and their bonding very true
aksar aisa hi hota hai arrangd or compramised marrgs mai

its near to reality lovd it


so now priya hav to know her feelings waiting for more raya scenes

๐Ÿ˜ƒ


lovely update

but y she is having back pain its hav any past



Thank you so much lakhsss ..
yeah akar aisa hi hotha hai in arranged and compromised marriges mai

thank you
and im glad you liked it
no she dont have any past relating that
its just that they two have their owncare towards them
so she has written that part

Thank you

Originally posted by: 123fiza

Awesome update...
ram took care of priya ..thats so adorable..
both hav gone for honeymoon...
cute scene when priya said i hate u ram ๐Ÿ˜‰
loved d update..
waiting fr their confession...
thanks di..
cont soon


Thnak you so much sweety
akaruski biwi hai jo
he will take care na ๐Ÿ˜‰
lol..yeah she said "I hate you Ram"

Thank you
hopefuly their confession may come in next part
will try y tp update soon

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

aweee

Do dil mil rehe hai
magar chupke chupke
superb ..
now want their confession soon
thank u di for ur pm


Thank you sanjuuu

those lines were apt for this story

Thank you
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: fan_forever

Very nice Update dear, content n length bOth were great. .. Long update wth raya romance. .. wowwie

Eagerly waiting fr Next uPdate


Thank you so much kakul
Im glad you are folowing the stories

Thank you so much
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Lovely update

yeh honeymoon trip Ram ke bahut work kar raha hai...๐Ÿ˜† Ram is enjoying a lot.
small rooms, no couch, Priya's backpain sab Ram ko help kar rahe hai. even Priya is also enjoying with Ram...she is also dreaming and blushing. Priya bhi attention paane se kush hai.
so Priya afraid of dogs
and she hug Ram because of fear
dog is also helping Ram ๐Ÿ˜‰.
Priya is comfortable with Ram and she also started having feeling for Ram.
she becomes worried when had fever..and never leave him for a second.
hope they have successful honeymoon trip...and they will unite soon
enjoyed reading this update.
thanks for PM...waiting..


Thank you so much sandy
you are right
Ram is enjoying alot ..with this honeymoon wala trip pe
haha yah priya bhi attanetion paane se kushi hai
she is afraid of dogs .. and she hugged him with it ..
Hug waly smiley is simply superb ๐Ÿ˜›
๐Ÿ˜† dog is also helping Ram ..
she also started feeling for him but it was not eveident to her yet
hope fully they will get succes in this trip
Thank you
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: jodude

lovely update...๐Ÿ‘

ohh nuts-karthik ka plan hai ye...nice..
priya afraid of dogs...hehehe..and she hugged ram...๐Ÿ˜†
love the amrutanjan part,,,,,๐Ÿ˜†
both r falling for each other...cute...
continue soon...
thnks for the pm..๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much jo
yes its nutkar plan
she is afraid of dogs
im glad you liked amrtutanjan part ๐Ÿ˜†
will try to update soon


Originally posted by: haribol79

thanks for the update...

loved the way story is moving...

Priya and doggy was hillarious...poor baby is so scared...

Alast Priya kept her word... Hugged Ram... continue soon..


Thank you so much

Im glad you liked it
haha
priya and dogggy things happen very commonly in society also ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

will try to update soon

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha

mind blowing update

thnks for pm
continues soon



Originally posted by: akilagoud2

superb update
continue soon
thanks for pm


Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Awww very nice part Raya r coming closer now waiting for ram to recover from his illness



Originally posted by: priyajan12

just one word

beautiful...


Originally posted by: youandme272000

Lovely cute update... ๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by: punijesus

awsome update:):) Really a good one.. super like


Originally posted by: punijesus

Awesome awesome update๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š really a good one. super like๐Ÿ‘


Originally posted by: contactcharu

awesome update
hope RaYa confess their love soon
pls continue soon


Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Awesome update di!!!
superb job!! Just cant express my it in words!!!
Plzz continue soon!!
And thanks 4 pm!!!

Originally posted by: sampa123

too good..pls cntinue soon

Originally posted by: Sandy198

lovely.. lovely.. lovely update :-)


Originally posted by: sssabcd

full of raya scenes and therir teasing... Ufff... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
wat an adorable pair..

Thanks fr pm..pls continue soon..





Thank you so very much guys ๐Ÿค—
Im glad you all liked the update
im so so happy seeing your comments
will try to post the update soon
Once again thank you
stay tuned for future updates

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx fir the pm.
wow ram is all set for being a hubby ๐Ÿ˜‰ helping priya in all senses, nd priyaji is now not questioning him for anything, n she is very comfortable with him niw.
prita konkutte se darr laggta hai ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ram ne kutte ko kitna thanks kagpha hoga kyunki priya toh tam se chioki hui thi ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† chalo kutta hi mediator sahi iss baar ๐Ÿ˜† the way she was sepaying don't touch me, it's so funny hihihi, she is ok with his touch but not oknwith touch after kutta lolz rofl superb doc

omg ramji bheeg gaye baarish me, let's se priya ji ka dil ka haal kya hai? ๐Ÿ˜†


Thank you so much malu
Lol Ram is all set for being a doting hubby ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰\she is habituted for him so not questioning him

Lol ... Yes Ram has to say many thanks to his kutta ..

๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†kutta hi mediator ๐Ÿ˜† im laughing like naythings eeing t his line ..
she is okay with his touch but not after kutta ๐Ÿ˜†

Im glad you liekd the update


Originally posted by: sinalbest

Hi Di..๐Ÿ˜Š

Yipee.. Finally Raya married..๐Ÿฅณ
loving the flashbavk.. Raya together..๐Ÿ˜Š
awesome part di..
sry for late...

thanks for pm ๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by: sinalbest

Hi Di.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

@ part-22
Awesome part..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
finally Priya Falling for him..๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
hats off to u di.. die hard fan of ur writing..๐Ÿ˜Š
bt late ho jata hu..

thanks for pm..๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much sagar
im glad to see your comments
even in your busy schedule dear
raya rae married
and now priya is faling for him

aww Thank you so much bhaii
its okay for late replies also

Originally posted by: rajhallur

hey again wonderful update by ur side...


arre both ate their jhoota in the form of chocolate ha ha ha...

the way ram took care of priya it shows the true caring nature of a husband...

she got an ever loving husband...

hey hey there is no couch inn karthik's home in bedroom... ha ha hona bhi nahi chahiye...

they started their honeymoon...

priya is slowly slowly falling for ram without knowing to herself...

she is liking to be always in his man's arms... beautiful..

aree yaar in dono ko milwado jaldi... they desperately wanted to be together...

jaldi hi milan karwado.. un dono ko jyada mat tadpavo yaar...

beautiful update... waiting eagerly for their next step in their relationship...

so that we can get one moore hot ... sensuous.. romantic update ...

untill then bye...



Thank you so much Trupti
Yeah both ate their Jhootha in the form of chacolate ..
Ram is caring and priya is lucky to got a ever loving hubby
haha couch hona bhi nahi chahiye ๐Ÿ˜†
they started their honeymoon and priya slowly falling for him without her sences only
haha new sensation hai na she loved to be inhis arms ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
hopefully they wll meet soon
in true sence
Thank you so much
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

The story is getting inetersting bful di

awee am so excited I neva thought dat ishq FB would be like this
am loving this
Thankyou di๐Ÿค—


Thank you so much choti
haha yeah you might thought it will be sad Flash back
but that is also there but in last two updates of fb ..
until than you wil get beautiful story of Ray a

Thank you love you

Originally posted by: Alkona

Awesome...Superb Loved Every Moment of RAYA Romance๐Ÿ‘. Pls Update soonish ๐Ÿ˜†


Thank you so much
after ages im seeing your comment

Im glad you liked the updates
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

I am loving every bit of the story
Nuts Kartik used an excuse so that Raya can come to USA for some holiday
Hope Nuts is fine now
Ram Priya at his home now became their home aww she look terrifies by seeing the dog but Ram was their with Priya
Seems they both are enjoying their honeymoon cum holiday
Hope he will be fine as now she is with him where she belong and realise her feelings of love towards him
continue soon thanx for the pm
Sorry for late rpl


Thank you so much aanchal
no sorrys please

yah nuts and karthik planned this surprise honeymoon for the,
Nuts is fine ..

Ram has taken her to their home
Priya scared of dogs and its turned out a hug ๐Ÿ˜†
Hope he will be fine soon
and they will reunite in true sence
will try to updatesoon
and its my plesure
stay tuned for next updates ๐Ÿ˜›


Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 22
priya's emotion was portrayed very well..
as usual awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ part - 22

Raya married. Nuts-karthik coming for marriage and Vikram's parents doing kanyadhaan its soo lovely and beautiful.

Ohh...Ram's punishment is really scary, but they deserve it.

So their journey together started soo gracefully. Their fight is soo real till cute.๐Ÿ˜†

And the flight part was soo lovely. Enjoyed it totally.


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Posted: 11 years ago
@ Part - 23

Awesome update. Very cute start with Priya blushing for choco exchange.

Awww...her back pain and the treatment is lovely.๐Ÿ˜‰ Oh hoo...I too hate dogs.๐Ÿคข

Priya is totally fallen for him. Awesome it is going...Waiting for more.

Thanks Neel for the pms.
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg what a FF di yaar

finally i got a time to read it

part 1

wha kya entry thi priya

and the way they kiss was superbly awsome... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

are yaar par ye rajiv kuch na kuch gad bad zaroor karega...

But jaha par raya wha par gad bad na ho toh uske bina umki kahani hi adhuri hain...

Going to read 2nd part...

Ufff


maza aa raha hai kyo ki is ff ye dono pehle se hi married hain

toh milne milane ka jhanjhat khatam hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 2

nightmare phir se

hmmm possesive ram...loved it

okay its rajiv damm...

Sudhirji is dead becoz of him...,...,

now going to read ahead... Part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear readers
Im so sorry for being late ..
The writer has some busy scedule this month so The updates may get lil late ..
I will surely give the updates as soon as possible

sorry for the long wait ..

Thank you
Cheers
Neel ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hii friends.! just dropped in to check how are you all? Who missed me. miss you all
Edited by salsaly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: salsaly

Hii friends.! just dropped in to check how are you all? Who missed me. miss you all



OMG OMG
Whom im seeing

salsaly .. sweety after ages iam seeing you girl
Im so happy to see you back
Missed you so much dear

Thank you for dropping a msg ...

How are you , how is your studies going on ..

Hugs .. ๐Ÿค—
welcome back

sorry for very late reply
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashisri

part 22

priya's emotion was portrayed very well..
as usual awesome


Thank you
im glad you liked it


Originally posted by: jodude

continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by: priyajan12

waiting for the update



Thank you so very much
sorry for the late

wil try to update soon
Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago

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