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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
@ part - 22

Raya married. Nuts-karthik coming for marriage and Vikram's parents doing kanyadhaan its soo lovely and beautiful.

Ohh...Ram's punishment is really scary, but they deserve it.

So their journey together started soo gracefully. Their fight is soo real till cute.😆

And the flight part was soo lovely. Enjoyed it totally.

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
@ Part - 23

Awesome update. Very cute start with Priya blushing for choco exchange.

Awww...her back pain and the treatment is lovely.😉 Oh hoo...I too hate dogs.🤢

Priya is totally fallen for him. Awesome it is going...Waiting for more.

Thanks Neel for the pms.

O M adhu o madhu na manasu naadi kaade

im missing you badly baby

im glad you liking the storyyy

and loved the both parts

yeah Rams punishment is really scary and they deserves it

priya blushin for chaco exchange

lol you too hate dogs ..

you are welcome

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

Originally posted by: deekshasxn
omg what a FF di yaar

finally i got a time to read it

part 1

wha kya entry thi priya

and the way they kiss was superbly awsome... 😳

are yaar par ye rajiv kuch na kuch gad bad zaroor karega...

But jaha par raya wha par gad bad na ho toh uske bina umki kahani hi adhuri hain...

Going to read 2nd part...

Ufff

maza aa raha hai kyo ki is ff ye dono pehle se hi married hain

toh milne milane ka jhanjhat khatam hai...

Originally posted by: deekshasxn
part 2

nightmare phir se

hmmm possesive ram...loved it

okay its rajiv damm...

Sudhirji is dead becoz of him...,...,

now going to read ahead... Part 3

Deeksha welcome to read this ff

aww Im glad you like this

Thank you so much for redaing

yeah Rajiv will do something

Im so happy and waiting for your comments ..

yeah in this donon pehili hai married hain

second part ..

yeah sudhir is dead bcz of him

and hope you love in future also

Thank you

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Malati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

Hi Neel

Is the DOC free now?? she is still tied up kya??

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#994

PART-24

Ram woke up when the alarm was buzzing up . He closed it with his right hand ,and the beautiful site he saw in the morning was Priya cuddled to him like a puppy and sleeping away to glory.

He smiled hugged her timidly. Feeling her softness he enjoyed the morning.

At the same time the door was knocked. Ram making her sleep on her side, he answered the door and seeing doctor he asked him to come in. The Doctor came and checked him.

Doc: Mr.Kapoor you have recovered well, but, still you have to follow my prescription for five more days. You are so lucky Mr. Kapoor, your wife was terrified seeing you like that, she
almost cried.

Ram felt very happy hearing it.

At the same time hearing the noices
Priya stirred In her sleep . She immediately got up remembering about Ram, when she turned to his side, she saw that Ram was sitting and listening to what doc was telling.

She checked the time and gasped thinking how she could sleep like that.

Seeing her awake,
Doc:Good morning Mrs.Kapoor.

P: Smiled little , good morning doc , how is he doing?

Doc : He is fine, but you have to continue this prescription and... he
was hesitating to tell something

P: Doctor is there any problem? tell me, what is that you are hiding?

Doc: Nothing Mrs.Kapoor we need few blood tests as we want to know the exact diagnosis so...

R: Looked horrified.

P: Oohh itni si baath.. we will do it

Doc: Smiling broadly, thank you so much. Then I will wait for
you people in my hospital. Come with in an hour, so that I can take all the
tests.

P: Sending him off , came to their bed. She asked Ram to dress up and she too will get ready and come.

R: Jaana zaroori hai kya?

Priya rolled her eyes at him ,yes we are going and its final. Now come and freshen up, she pushed him into the
washroom . She went to freshen up in another room. Both got ready in no time .Priya forcefully took him to hospital.

Doctor met them, immediately he ordered a nurse to take his samples.

Ram was shivering with fear but he was controlling himself .

Priya felt his nervousness, she asked him to look at her, Ram looked up into her deep brown eyes. "I am afraid of
injections ,I don't want this can we come again."

She caressed his cheek with her back of the hand. If you do this we will get to know what happened with you, I cannot see you suffering, please for my sake, only this time ..

He saw something in her eyes while she was asking him but he couldn't understand what exactly it was. But he very well knew that whatever her feelings were, they were true and were only for him..

The nurse disturbed their love magma telling "its finished sir".

Ram stunned to hear that it was over and he didn't feel anything. When he looked at Priya, she assured him by
smiling with her heart . He hugged her and placed a tender kiss on her forehead.

That moment of togetherness was witnessed by doctor, he blessed them with happy life. He sent them off giving some medicines and advising rest.

At the evening reports came and all were normal, it was viral fever so doctor said that will be fine with medicines and rest. Priya was happy hearing that. The days were passing so lively for Priya & Ram. Daily one or other time she used to encounter Johnny and show fake anger towards
Ram, but she didn't say anytime to keep that dog away from him as she very well knows how Ram is fond of dogs.

Soon he joined office. Priya was cooking for him and sending box to
office. Sometimes afternoons, she herself used to go to his office to have lunch with him. Evening she used wait like a small kid who would wait for her father. When she would see him she used to walk towards him, take his brief case and ask nonstop
questions .

Their days were turning into month and their closeness crossed a level, reaching up to Ram kissing Priya on her cheeks and she gladly accepting it.

She used to feel lonely when he
was not around her. He was being busy in his work but his thoughts were surrounded by Priya. Inspite of having much work he was coming home early in the evening just to be
with Priya.

Both would play for sometime. Priya plans a perfect new game when he arrives at home. That day it was hide
and seek, so Ram was blindfolded by a cloth and Priya is teasing him moving along side. Finally Ram caught her and both laughed like kids.

The next day Priya was talking with Apeksha who was super happy hearing from Priya after a long gap and that too seeing her so lively, she felt so many changes in Priya's
voice itself.

So Apeksha immediately asked her to login to skype and when she saw Priya she was thrilled to find so many changes in her. She was wearing a saree, her maang was adorned with sindhoor and her neck was dangling with black beads.

The way Priya was telling about her trip and each and every line was filled up with Ram only. Apeksha found out that Priya was in love with him. But when she asked her, Priya denied it
telling that they were just friends. In the meantime Priya heard car's screech sound.

She said Apeksha one minute and ran to the front door to receive her man, the system was on a table facing entrance so Apeksha could clearly see what was happening.

Priya took Ram's briefcase from him, Ram gave some thing to Priya, she smiled shyly, both walked towards the sofa hand in hand, he was telling something Priya was smiling listening to it, he sat in the sofa Priya went and brought coffee for him. She told she was talking with Apeksha showing the system she went to continue her chat with her coffee mug in her hands.

Apeksha: Priya remove your earphones and drink the coffee, no problem.
Priya smiled keeping it on loudspeaker ,she was enjoying her coffee asking Apeksha where she was working ,how were others etc.

Apeksha saw Ram was leaving, she asked Priya,

Apeksha: Can I ask you something?

Priya: Since when did you start seeking permission, yes go ahead.

Apeksha: "Are you In love with Ram?"

Ram who was climbing stairs he paused in his tracks , he leaned to the wall to hear Priya's feelings.

Priya: Startled with Apeksha's question , May I know why do you feel so.

Ram was keenly observing her .

Apeksha: Hmm Priya , I know I'm younger than you but don't I know how the girl will be when she is in love , we are almost talking from past an hour and in every word in every line in every of action of yours I have seen Ram. I mean you made
me to see how he was taking care of you . how he was liking your company , how he was trying to fulfill your silliest wishes, how you are waiting for him. The way you just ran to him when he came from office, it showed how desperately you
want to be with him, I mean you are loving him ,you can lie to me Priya but your action speak a lot . I'm not forcing you but take the decision at right time and make your life colourful . Ram is such a gentle man , don't miss him .For me you looked like typical biwi winking at her, I have to go now. Will listen your love story later on telling this Apeksha signed out.

Priya was left staring at Apeksha's offline symbol and she just didn't know what to talk. she remembered her days with Ram, yes indeed Ram filled her life was with happiness. After all these years she was happy with Ram the way she used to be in her father's arms.

She slowly walked to the room , Ram was sitting on his bed reading some magazine , she slowly walked towards him , "can I sleep here?"

Ram was bewildered with it but he nodded yes , she kept her head on his lap, when his concerned voice stroke her ears "what happened baby " she started crying in between sobs. He understood that she was missing her father. He caressed her hairs , kissing her forehead he manofied her. His heart was jumping with joy that Priya has some feelings for him .

He caressed her hairs, she cried her heart out, in the same position she slipped into sleep. After an hour or so she opened her eyes and found herself in his lap. She immediately got up saying sorry.

Ram smiling, took her in side embrace, its okay come we will go out for dinner today.Both went to dinner, they were enjoying themselves and Priya was lost in thoughts, really how she was behaving like a wife and has she fallen for him? She knows that he is a very arrogant and angry person. Even he showed his anger on her also so many times but later he used to come and manofy her. She was unable to decide what she feels for
him.

In the mean while they got a call from Karthik that Nuts was not well . Raya reached the hospital , Nuts being taken for delivery, all the three were waiting for the good news. They said they need to name the babies as they will register ASAP. Karthik asked
them to keep the names as he was stressed out seeing Nuts in pain.

Ram & Priya both were fighting as who will name the first baby .. The nurse stopped them , Please
write the names on this papers and I will pick up one chit and that name will go to the first boy.

They liked the idea . Raya wrote and the nurse picked up first one .
"Minu " who has written this one .. Priya shrieked meee ..that was my chosen name ..
Second one "Monu", this was written by Me Ram slowly said ..

Nurse smiled at the pair : You both thought almost same names, except
one letter , they both realised that and they had a brief eyelock
[From writer : Dear readers, whoever is following this story from first, they would have easily guessed what's the twist over here. If not you will get to know in future ]

Both had such a gala time with the two tiny boys in their hands. Nuts was discharged, the week just passed like that .

Ram was going to his office from Nut's home only and Priya was taking care of the boys very well. It was too tough to handle the twins at a time. Maids were there but still it was difficult, in the meantime Ram & Priya lost their time being with each other.

Ram & Priya were missing eachother like hell, they were able to meet only at bedtime, by then they were tired off and were falling asleep. Ram was unable to control his feelings towards
her. It was getting hectic day by day, seeing her near to him and they were almost sleeping in eachothers arms. He doesn't know how but it was getting really tough to control his hormones whenever she was there. So he was being angry for unknown reasons. Priya was feeling bad for his behaviour but she thought it was because of his work stress.

They so wanted to be together but the time was not appealing for them. Ram told to Priya that they have to attend a business party and as they may get late they should go to their home and in the morning they could come back. Priya gladly accepted it and she got ready for the party in a pretty pink saree. Ram could not take his eyes off from her, but he had to as they were getting very late. Priya
kissed the boys and left from there waving bye to them.

It was one of the lavish party and Priya met with some of the Indians and they were just complimenting her beauty and praising her saree, Ram escaped from the girl talk. Priya was observing his each action, what he was doing and Ram too was doing the same. Few kids were taking photos with Priya as they were for first time seeing an Indian girl wearing a saree, they just loved her and she was talking with them, but he was observing only her.

In the mean while Nancy one of his business associate's wife came to him and asked for a dance, as they were close he accepted and was dancing with her. Priya looked for him and when she found that he was dancing with some random girl she felt suffocated. A teary line appeared in her eyes, still she stood there seeing the man but each passing second Ram was behaving more close with her and she was all over him.

One guy approached Priya and asked for dance, but she bluntly refused saying, "I'm sorry I can't," he insisted her saying when your husband is dancing with some other girl and enjoying with her why can't you join? common lets move. He tried to hold
her hand, she pulled it back , giving an angry glare she walked off from there, when the cool air touched her face, she felt relaxed.

Priya's monologue :
She felt throbbing headache thinking about Ram and the girl. Does he have some relation with her or was she his girl friend ,that's why he didn't want to go for marriage..

Uff Priya what are you thinking , if he roams with one girl or a dozen girls, what it is with you, why you are bothering so much?

She pressed her head with her both hands to relieve some pressure, again her thoughts surrendered and slow tears escaped from her eyes. Oh god why I'm having tears, wiping away them she closed her eyes and remembered the moments she has spent with the man. Now seeing him with someone else her heart was aching, an unknown insecurity hovered around her . What it is, why I'm so much drawn to him, It is just compromised marriage and why I'm feeling like this..

Do I love him ..No nooo noo it shouldn't be love, how can I love him, what if he is also like others .. OMG Priya what you are thinking, how he is looking after you and how bad you
are expecting him.She leaned on to the railing when her heart realised she is indeed in love with him, she wiped her tears and zoomed into the party only to find her man was
giggling away to glory with three women around him.

Her temper raised, she walked towards him. She called out Ramm..
He smilingly turned towards her and found her fury eyes before he could ask something, she coldly asked him, can we go now?

Ram looked at the women and Priya and at the party, "the main thing is yet to start and I have to be there when the inauguration happens."
I don't know That Ram , are you coming or not, she asked more adamantly. He tried to explain but she was firm in her decision.

As he doesn't have other choice, he left with her when the women insisted him, its okay they will manage without
me, shaking his hands with them he walked towards the car.Priya followed him.

His ziffy speed made Priya scared, when the car halted in front of their home , she felt nervous seeing his raze she was afraid too. He nagged the car door and immediately climbed the stairs to their room, removing his coat shoving his fingers in his hairs, writhling with his tie, he looked mad , damn mad.

When priya came to the room , he turned to her "what was that?" he asked her straightly .
Nothing , she tried to shoo aaway the talk ,wanted escape from there , she turned towards the door, before her Ram reached the door and latched it. Now he was moving dangerously towards her, her breath hitched, her heart was beating erratic oppsite to her breast bone.

Priya very well knows he was mad at her but she didn't expect to see him like that. Ram's fury eyes got more red with anger and he bursted on her
"Do you even know how important this party was for me l, I told you already what it was and how imp it was, what the hell you did there haaa.. why ..what happened to you to come home urgently? Aren't you feeling well or something is bothering you? What the hell happened to you that we had to come from there? Do you know how important my speech was over there , and how the ladies will manage without me?

That's it ... Priya's nerves irked listening about the women from her man ..
"Enough , you do have concern for other ladies but not for your WIFE, right, she pressed the wife making him cringe with guilty.

He asked "WHAT?"

Yes you heard it correct , Am I a doll or what , you asked and I came to the party leaving the kids with Nuts alone, wanted to spend some quality time with you, but you pointing at his
chest, you were just loving it when the girls were all over you..

Tears started to trickle down .Ram got more mad by hearing it from her.

What are you talking Priya..,, what is it ..damn you are my wife but that doesn't mean you can restrict me from doing all these things. I have told you already its compromised
marriage and I wont interfere in your life and you shouldn't interfere my life and see now you are crossing your limits.

Grabbing her arm tell me Priya, what are you feeling? Ha what exactly are you feeling? You think you can do whatever you feel, God only
knows what all the assumptions media is taking about my absence. You don't care about me . You just don't care about me and you don't have any feelings for me, you don't
observe me or my schedule ..Give me space Priya please I want peace.

Priya was all numb seeing him closer that too with anger look and the heat of his voice she couldn't take it and her tears just slipped from her eyes, You are hurting me, she was able to spell in between her sobs. He released her arm from his grip. She just lounged herself on the floor crying bitterly ,
I'm so sorry Mr.Kapoor, I didn't mean to disturb you, I know its compromised marriage and I know you do took care of me and I do take care of you. Don't accuse me without
knowing anything , yes you are correct I didn't care about
you, that's why when you were in pain my eyes had tears ...
When you were suffering with fever my heart fluttered ,when you were angry my knuckles go white thinking your BP may raise, from the day I enetered your life , I was looking
after you only , and I was only observing you and you are telling I don't observe you.

Should I tell how many sweets you had in the party or should I tell how many pegs you had in the party?

Should I tell how many times you stared at me or should I tell you how many times you wiped your sweat from your face?

What should I tell you , tell me Mr.Kapoor .. when you will accept that I do care about you? When you are angry you don't think about the other person , when you are angry you just want to blast on the
other or what else I should tell you
and how I should tell you that ... in all these compromised marriage ..I have fallen for you.. she sobbed hard.

Ram looked shocked.

Yes I love you .. I'm in love with you .. she smirked a bit , he came near to her ,she stopped him saying Nooo , don't come to me ,he was still about to touch her , she said "stop it, don't, I don't have any problem whether you love me or not, I don't have any problem if you think I wont care about you. Wiping her tears , don't worry about me , you want peace na and we two cannot deal this , I think we both need some space , I will be in Karthik's home , when we are going
to India , until that time you can live your life with out any disturbances . saying this she walked off to the door.

Hello dear lovely readers . so what all you thinking what will
happen next ???

Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#995

Resss

First of all am extremely sorry for forgetting to give my comment. Thanks to you Neel that you reminded me abt SMH comment that I checked Ishq re and sooo soo sorry yaar I didnt comment here too.. But now am doing that.. Maaf kardo mujhe.

Coming to the update fetching for one word to praise this comment and I found this "Stupendofantabulously mindblowing fantastic" update...I am just in love with the writer's style. Her way of narration, easy flow of words and superb description make me visualise every scene so easily and smoothly.

In this update the way RaYa relation was progressing towrds oneness was so elegant and excellent.
She taking care of him, He losing himself in her eyes and forgetting the scare he has, they spending time together, the silly games they played, the lil things they did for each other they were so realistic.. Their relation progressing from strangers to mandatory living under a roof to friendship to love...ofcourse they havent realised or expressed love yet but others are able ro derive it from their behaviour... It was beautifully narrated. All kudos to the writer.
So minu n monu are Nuts n Karthik kids... hmmm what happened to Nuts n karthik wil knw in future.. but I think the dreaded one has happened already...
And the ending with the party scene reminded me of Balh episodes 160 to 162 where she was eager to be with him but couldnt bear his closeness to other women (J Haan 😆) and so made him come from the party. His accusations, harsh words and compromised marriage n giving space hit the final nail.. So came the much loved confession (Epi 162 mindblowing Sakshi made me her fan instantly) OMG what an update... i read again and again... enjoyed a lottt..
Thanks darling for this mindboggling update (Neel told me u r my darling 😆 lekin aajkal darling dont wanna use that word, u know the reason)
Neel muaah gal for not saying anythng even if i havnt given my comment. Thanks for pm... Plz continue soon.

Edited by armanz - 10 years ago

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rosinagoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#996

I am waiting long for this Update

Neel, you updated but forgot to give PM 😉

Coming to Update

It's Awesome Update, I loved it 👏

Priya taking good care of Ram, Ram fine now. That morning scenes are beautiful

That hospital blood sample scenes are cute, I can imagine that scene while reading

Glad Ram not have any health issue

Johnny still encounter Priya 😆

Now Priya start feeling for him, but she little confused

Priya & Ape conversion is good, she make Priya to realise her love for Ram

Priya happy now, she feels her father's presence in Ram.

I love that scene, that Priya asking permission for sleep in Ram's Lap, After that sleep are beautifully written 👏

Ram is happy that Priya have some feelings for him

Wow! Nuts give birth to two baby Boys, (To the Writer: I know what is the twist is here, two days before i discuss with Neel about it too 😉 )

I love the Names Monu & Minu.

Ram & Priya missing each others because of Nuts Kids

The Party scenes are superb, it's make Priya's to express her feelings to Ram.

Ram angry on Priya because her, he miss the important event

Priya burst out scenes, you will written 👏

When he heard her feelings, he is very much shock

I think Ram stop Priya before leaving the house, will see what writer have for us 😉

Thanks for your future PM Neel 😛

Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago

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youandme272000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#997

Nice progression...
Waiting for d nxt...

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Suriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#998

gud progression of stry.. 👏
pls continu soon..thsnks fr pm.. 😊

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Dhristi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#999

Beautiful part dii aapne mujhe season 1 ki yaad dila diya amazing di hope ram will also confess his love for her pls continue soon

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1000

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Hi Neel
Is the DOC free now?? she is still tied up kya??

Hey malu .. she is bit free now

updated ishq 😛

Originally posted by: armanz
Resss

waiting

Originally posted by: rosinagoor
I am waiting long for this Update
Neel, you updated but forgot to give PM 😉

Coming to Update

It's Awesome Update, I loved it 👏

Priya taking good care of Ram, Ram fine now. That morning scenes are beautiful
That hospital blood sample scenes are cute, I can imagine that scene while reading
Glad Ram not have any health issue
Johnny still encounter Priya 😆
Now Priya start feeling for him, but she little confused
Priya & Ape conversion is good, she make Priya to realise her love for Ram
Priya happy now, she feels her father's presence in Ram.
I love that scene, that Priya asking permission for sleep in Ram's Lap, After that sleep are beautifully written 👏
Ram is happy that Priya have some feelings for him
Wow! Nuts give birth to two baby Boys, (To the Writer: I know what is the twist is here, two days before i discuss with Neel about it too 😉 )
I love the Names Monu & Minu.
Ram & Priya missing each others because of Nuts Kids
The Party scenes are superb, it's make Priya's to express her feelings to Ram.
Ram angry on Priya because her, he miss the important event
Priya burst out scenes, you will written 👏
When he heard her feelings, he is very much shock
I think Ram stop Priya before leaving the house, will see what writer have for us 😉

Thanks for your future PM Neel 😛

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Rosi

i havent forget to give pm 😆 but i gave it late 😉

yes priya is taking good care of him and she feels her father in him

bahuth kam hotha hai thes type of relation but here she felt like that

and she slept in his lap ..

their party and the twins 😉😛

Im glad you got the twist ..

will see how many willl get the twist ..

thank you im glad you liked it

and after partty Ram s outburst she didnt take it and she outburst her feeling

hmmm hope we will see how its going to be ..

Thank you

hope you got my late pm 😆 Now

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
superb part
thnks for pm

Originally posted by: sssabcd
gud progression of stry.. 👏
pls continu soon..thsnks fr pm.. 😊

Originally posted by: youandme272000
Nice progression...
Waiting for d nxt...

Originally posted by: dhristikpd
Beautiful part dii aapne mujhe season 1 ki yaad dila diya amazing di hope ram will also confess his love for her pls continue soon