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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderul...the description is 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...do update fast na...luv ur writing...😛
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Superb update... Please update soon... <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nany.. Plz preview ur post ur story in a proper view? Its really getting difficult to read it. I always copy them on MSWord, edit them wid proper font,color n dialogues of different charactor in separate lines n then read them. But now i m via mbl n can't do same n have to wait to read them..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: D4BALH

nany.. Plz preview ur post ur story in a proper view? Its really getting difficult to read it. I always copy them on MSWord, edit them wid proper font,color n dialogues of different charactor in separate lines n then read them. But now i m via mbl n can't do same n have to wait to read them..

hey ,realy sorry for this but i update through sellphone and most imp thing is i am so busy with my study and other jobs . I have no time for this lekin phir bhi me ye kar rahi hu so dear realy sorry and if you have any sujetation to make it good in few time i'll try again sorry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome.supab, lovely...keep posting soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahahahaha!!!
loved it!!! 👏

please continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part=4 they both are shock to hear this but its not meant that they are not happy ,they are happy but its embrasing for this because its only two day dadi demanding for parpota and send them for farmhouse. Both think same . They are lonly in room.and smile at eachother. *ram shyly*= priya thanks for this but kuch jyada jaldi nahi hogaya. *priya laugh* =ram me kabhi kuch nahi karti hu sab aap hi karte ho . *ram laugh and become naughty *= ye baat to sahi hai and she pin priya and kiss her on her lips very very passinatly that priya moan but she ignore her all pain and return him his kiss with same passion.and priya run her fingers in his thick hair and ram ,he is lost in this beautiful moment and try to open her hook priya push him her eyes closed ,breathing hardly = ram ham hospital me hai. *ram*=priya me ghar jake marne wala hu to thodi strenth le raha hu. *priya*=ram esa kuch nahi hoga0and move but ram stop her and seet on hir knee and kiss her stomach and say emosnaly thank you priya .priya also sit on knee and say=ram i love you and give him kiss. *ram smile *=priya ghar chale sab wait kar rahe hoge and they leave for farmhouse after giving eachother kiss . (they both reach to fh and all are waiting for them and anyone ask question ram say =priya pregnent hai or ham hospital gaye the .all congratulate them but no one tease them.and they climb stair but at that time neha come=ram kahi bhi suru ho jaoge to ye hi hoga and then see at priyas swollen lips and raya turn and all are laughing and whistling and raya shock.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*ram naughty me feel same😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really hard to digest that Mr. Kapoor is so passionate, are yaar, kuch to sharm karo, Priya was right kahin bhi shuru ho jate hain, are yaar they are not teenagers not young couples they are quite grown up aur thodi si to control honi chahiye na...but the write up was very gud, continue pls

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