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Posted: 13 years ago
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writing this part assuming that nic and co are out of KM and nuts in Sharma house...

He couldn't believe himself that he's going to be a pappa.There was strange feeling inside him. Yes, he had considered Nuts and Rishab as his child, cared them like his child but didn't know why was he experiencing dis strange feeling dis time? he spoke to himself " my child!!! my own baby!!!"



Then he went near to priya who was still laying on the bed in a half conscious mode. He tried to sit besides her and stretched his hand to touch her. He brought down her head on his lap and asked in a very soft and cared way :- " Priya? Hw are you feeling now?"




Priya :- "han Ram. I m feeling much better. Btw hw did i came on the bed? when did u call the doctor? What's the time now Ram?."

Ram :- " it's half past twelve priya."

Priya :- " oh shit!!!, then my whole day plan went into vain, Dr. revealed all the surprises i had planned.I haven't wished you yet."

Ram :- " oops, i haven't wished you as well. Btw i had planned surprise for you too but i forget all the things when i found you on the floor unconsciously.We both forget to wish each other lets celebrates now. Priya, i am so sorry, i couldn't make our 1st anniversary celebration in a grant style. Nuts case and then family issue spoiled our special day, na?"

Priya :- " Don't worry Ram, we are together even after Niharika ji created problem to separate us.btw did u have your dinner?"

Ram :- " no, even you has not eat nothing.. come on, come on.. lets have our dinner.. "

Both went to the dinning hall where priya had decorated dinning table wid cake and candles. Ram became happy after seeing all this..


Ram :- " you did all this for us?"

Priya :- " ya,i was going to tell you our baby's news tonight but before i did, you got from Dr."

he went near to her.. make her to stand..

Ram :- " priya, you gave me biggest gift of my life.. thank you priya for everything, thankx for gifting me papa tag.. Happy anniversary priya".
Priya :- " Happy anniversary Ram."



they cut anniversary cake and feed cake to eachother then gave passionate hug to eachother.. finished their dinner and went to their room.. ram sat on the bed wid laptop immediately after reaching bed room...

Priya :- " Arre Ram... is dis a time for work.. close your lappy and lets sleep."
Ram :- " i have very urgent work to finish.. have to finish it right now..."
priya :- " it's too late Ram.. come on, close your lappy if you are not doing then i m going to close it myself"

she dragged laptop to close but found internet site named "EMPLOYMENT.COM"..

Priya :- " Arre!!!! what are you doing in dis employment site at this midnight.. if we need employer then don't it the duty of HR manager of our company."

Ram :- " it's for my personal work. i m searching servent for our house"
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priya :- why do we need servant? We already had plenty of servants in our house.."

Ram :-" ya, but i need maid dis time "

priya :- " why?"

ram :- " i m looking for nanny" main toh office me raheta hoo dinvar. need nanny to our future kid and tumhe care karne key liye vi toh kohi chahiye na..ghar mey koi vi female servent nahi hai.. koi female to chahiye na tumhare khayal rakhne key liye..

priya :- " if you don't get angry then we might get one women to take care you, me and our baby .."

ram :- " Arre!!! wow!!! koun hey?"

Priya :- "ma, Krishna ma"...

i realized that writing is not the task that i can do... so quitting writing wid this first post..
Edited by D4BALH - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by salsaly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very intersted end count soon
ramdevsan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
its supab,lovely, pics is lovely too...keep posting more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!..this is really very nice..
superb concept..i loved it!!!👏 👏
thank u sooo much for posting such a lovely OS..keep posting more😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monamie111

wow!..this is really very nice..

superb concept..i loved it!!!👏 👏
thank u sooo much for posting such a lovely OS..keep posting more😳


he he... i ended this story at that node so continuation is impossible now.. may be after 2-3 weeks.. but i think i won't write anymore.. i found writing very difficult...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My child! My own baby!
Looking for nanny
P: If u don't mind we have one woman to take care of me
R: Who?
P: Ma...Krishna Ma...
Amazing lines dear. Do think of it. U can do but yes at ur interest. But nice updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you are great writer...pls continue if you really can...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb one Dilli...how did you manage to get such clean snapshots?...I was really amazed at the pictures...its up to you whether you continue to write after this one or not...but please tell me about the pictures - they were very clean and not pixelated...the story too was good...hats off bro
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ravichitra

<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">My child! My own baby!
Looking for nanny
P: If u don't mind we have one woman to take care of me
R: Who?
P: Ma...Krishna Ma...
Amazing lines dear. Do think of it. U can do but yes at ur interest. But nice updates
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Thank u very much for highlighting post's lines.. These compliment give courage in writing..

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