my imagntn about raya UPDTED ON PG 30 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Wonderful update waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful yaar Veena...



pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
awesome...aesa lagta hqain aesa hi kuch balh mein bhi hona wala hain...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Very Intense drama. Great work.

thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
nice and very intresting imgination
continue soon the next part👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Hi Veena.. i dont know how i missed two parts continuously... but anyhow... u wrote superbly... the emotions... the love... dilemma of nuts how she should tell about niharika;s truth...

i m really shocked to see... how could a brother do this to his own sister...but then after all he seems to be true blood of Niharika, who never hesitated to hurt her daughter...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome veena, plz cont. soon. thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dono ekdusre ko dekhte rhte h...niharika itna bole rhi hoti h ki raam se suna nhi jata aurwo sabki frstration priya pe utar deta h

raam...priya jb mne kaha tha ki m dekh lunga chhoti ko to tumhe yha aane ki kya jarurat thi...kyun tum hamesha aise krti ho

priya...aisa kya kr diya mne aap mujhe glt kyun samajh rhe h m bs nashta to lekr aayi thi

raam...kya jarurat thi ...ab mujhe koi bhs nhi krni h bs tum abhi yha se jao please...

priya...lekin raam

raam...please priya

priya ko gussa bhi ata h aur rona bhi wo apne kamre m chali jati h raam bhi study m chala jata h..
3 idiots apni ghatiyapane pe bht khush ho rhe hote h...lekin in sbme nuts subse jyada pareshan hoti h use samjh nhi ata h ki wo kre to kya kare...wo niharika se kehti h
Nuts...mom aap aisa kyun kr rhi h

Niharika...baby tum khud bhi aram karoge aur apne deemag ko bhi aram do use jyada use krne ki jarurat nhi h wrna u know...

Scene 11...

Priya apne room me tehl rhi hoti h aur soch rhi hoti h ki agr nuts ne ye sb kuchh kiya h to wo apne bhai k khilaf jake ayesha ko kyun bacha rhi thi agr wo itne din se mer ghr walo se pareshan thi to ab tk kabhi kuchh kaha kyun nhi kisi se bhi natasha to aisi h nhi ki uspe julm hota rhe aur wo chup rhe...kuchh to baat jarur h kya karu m ...sabse badi baat ye h ki jb m usse bate kr rhi thi aur niharika ji aa jati h to usne mujhe bolne se roka kyun...oh ek to mujhe kuchh samajh nhi aa rha h upr se raam mujhse is trh ka brtaw kr rhe h m unki ye berukhi brdast nhi kr sakti...mujhe raam se baat krni hi hogi...

Priya study me jati h raam wha apni koi file dhundhne ki koshish kr rha hota h jo ki eventully fail hoti nazar aa rhi thi...priya kehti h

Priya...kya dhundh rhe h aap

Raam...kuchh nhi

Priya...please ab ye to hadh h ek seedha sa sawal puchha h uska bhi dhang se jawab nhi de skte h?

Raam...ha nhi de sakta aur tum jan k karogi bhi kya ...jao tum yha se m office ki imprtant file dhundh rha hu

Priya...kahin ise to nhi dhundh rhe h

Raam...are ye kahan thi kab se to yhi dhundh rha tha

Priya...yhi samne padi thi..aur aap file wile kuchh nhi dhundh rhe the kewl mujhe ignor krne ki koshish kr rhe the...wrna aapne to naam btaya nhi to mujhe kaise pta ki aap yhi dhundh rhe h mne to aise hi utha k de di yhi dekhne k liye ki kahin aap mujhe ignor to nhi kr rhe h

Raam...(thoda aur gussa dikhate hue)... Ha theek h kr rha tha m ignor to

Priya...to ...to ka kya mtlb kyun ignor kr rhe the

Raam...mujhe tumhe hr baat me safai dene ki jarurat nhi h

Priya...h jarurat ...m apki patni apke sukh dukh ki sathi hu mujhe apki hr baat ki safai chahiye...

Raam...mujhe nhi deni h

Priya...ram aap kyun mere sath aosa kr rhe h m kh to rhi hu ki natasha mere liye ayesha jaisi hi h m kyun uska bura chahungi ya koi bhi hmare ghr m kyun aisa karega uske sath...

Raam...please priya tumne phir se whi baate shuru kr di mne kaha na ki mujhe is bare me koi baat nhi krni h

Priya...lekin mujhe krni h akhir baat nhi karenge to sachhai tk kaise pahunchenge

Raam...ab kaun si sachhai janni h tumhe

Priya...raam jo jisa dikh rha h waisa h nhi aap kyun nhi samajh rhe h kahin kuchh to h jo hme samajh nhi aa rha h...please ram aap ek baar mere nazariye ko samajhne ki koshish to kariye m janti hu ki mere ghrwale aise nhi h

Raam...to kya tumhe mere ghrwale aise lagte h

Priya...raam mne aisa kb kaha

Raam...kaha nhi pr mtlb to whi tha na tum please jao yha se mujhe tumse koi baat nhi krni h

Priya...kaha jau m

Raam...mujhe nhi pta bs tu abhi yha se jao qki mera deemag bht khrab ho rha h agr kuchh ulta seedha nikal gya to...

Priya...kya ulta seedha raam jo kehna h aaj keh hi dijiye ...aap jo chahte h whi bta dijiye

Raam...is waqt m bs yhi chahta hu ki tum yha se chali jao

Priya...theek h to m yha se hi kyun is ghr se hi chali jati hu

Raam...ab is ghr se jane ki baat kahan se aa gyi

Priya...kyun jb aap mujhe dekhna nhi chahte mujhse baat nhi krna chahte h mera sath nhi dena chahte h to m chali hi jati hu na...

Raam...priya tum baat ko kahan se kahan le ja rhi ho

Priya...m baat ko whi le ja rhi hu jaha se ye baat shuru hui thi is baat ki shuruat natasha k ghr chhodne se shuru hui thi na to mere ghr chhodne pe shayad khtm ho jaye...aur aap ye mt sochiyega ki m hamesha k liye ja rhi hu m aaungi pr sachhai aur saboot k sath qki inke bina to aap kisi pe vishwas karenge nhi ...waise bhi hmdono ko hi ekdusre ki jyada nazdikiya brdasht nhi hoti h to kuchh din alag rhenge to theek ho jayenge...

Raam...priya ab tum glt react kr rhi ho mre kehne ka ye mtlb bilkul nhi tha

Priya...lekin mere kehne ka yhi mtlb h jb apko mere jazbat aur sath ko smjhna hi nhi h to jbrdsti sath nibhane ki jarurat nhi h m janti hu ki m sahi hu aur m apne aapko sahi sabit krk k hi is ghr me wapas aaungi...ja rhi hu m

Priya ankho me ansu liye waha se chali jati h raam use dekhta rh jata h pr roke nhi pata h shayad wo bhi yhi chahta tha ki priya sachhai aur apne aapko shi sabit krk hi is ghr me aaye taki kabhi uska haal uski ma jaisa na ho isiliye shayad usne priya ka ye challenge dil se accept kiya aur uske jitne ki bhagwan se prarthna ki...

Jb priya ja rhi hoti h to baar baar mudh kr dekhti h ki shayad raam aa jaye pr raam nhi ata h...3 idiota apne plan ko kamyab hote dekhte h to unhe ykin nhi hota h ki ye sb itni jaldi ho jayega ...priya ghr se bahar aa jati h aur ek akhri baar apne kamre ki trf dekhti h lekin wha bhi raam nhi dikhta h...priya jane ko jaise hi mudti h uske pichhe raam khada rhta h priya use dekhte hi ekdm se muskurate hue lipat jati h raam bhi use apni baho me le leta h dono bht der tk khamosh isi trh ekdusre ki baho me rhte h bas ankho k ansu bht hue ek dusre ko apne dil ka hal suna rhe hote h...thodi der baad raam bolt h...

Raam...jaldi ana m tumhara intezar karunga...

Priya...m jarur aungi raam bs ek bar ye sb kuchh ktm ho jaye ye duri nhi h bs ekdusre ko janne samjhne ka ek mauka h jo bhagwan hame de rhe h aur m janti hu ki iske baad hamara rishta aur bhi majbuti se sabke samne aayega...

Priya raam se dur hatne ki koshish krti h pr raam uska haath nhi chhodna chahta h...lekin use rkna bhi nhi chahta h dekhte hi dekhte priya chali jati h pr raam whi ka whi khada rh jata h raste ko dekhte hue...

Ufff...pta nhi ye raste kb milenge kaise milenge kahan milenge...pr milenge jarur...

To be continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one veena , continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Veena... raste jaldi milana yaar... par Ye Dooriya Rang Layegi... for sure...

loved it as always...:)

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