my imagntn about raya UPDTED ON PG 30 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Great update... enjoyed it a lot.. loved the way Ram and Priya tackle serious issues in a light vein.. in ur takes 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love it...
thanks 4 this lovely update... 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Veena didi...aap ne phir se kamaal kar diya...update as soon as possible 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
ur post is awesome veena as always..i love to see this in balh too...keep rocking.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Are veena yaar bahut badiya update hai...tussi great ho aur tera deemag bhi great ho...
keep continuing asap...
Edited by kaviya10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: kaviya10

Are veena yaar bahut badiya update hai...tussi great ho aur tera deemag bhi great ho...

keep continuing asap...



kaash mere deemag k keede kisi trh ekta k paas transfer ho jate yaar...


love u all
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Thanks once again to ur deemagi keedas for continuing khujli to you... lovely update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so frnds i am here once again with khujli ...uff nujhe lagta h meri khujli sun sun k sabko khujli ho jayegi...😆

khair hamari kahani yani ki meri aur mere deemag k keedo ki...khtm hui thi niharika pr jo ki inki separation ki puri taiyari kr k baithi h to aaj usne ye kaam bhi shuru kr diya jaisa ki aaplogo ne dekha ki kist trh raampriya k beech misundrstanding create krne ki koshish ki ja rhi h...to hm is topic ko hi aage badhate h...here it is.


raampriya in room

raam...tum aram karom ata hu

priya...mujhe kuchh baat krni thi aapse

raam...baad m baat krte h abhi mujhe kuchh kaam h

aur raam chala jata h tabhi priya ka phone bjta h aur use uski family k arrest hone k baare m pta chalta h...aage ka scene to aaplogo ko pta hi h ...right now we hv to move on hospital scene...

in hospital...

niharika ki bato se frstrate hokr raam chala jata h tabhi priya aati h aur raam k baare m puchhti h to niharika use bhido baate suna deti h...to priya bhi wha se chali jati h aur 3 idiots apni gltfhmi pr bewkufo ki trh has rhe hote h

udhar raam ghar pahonch jata h aur apne room m frstration me tehlrha hota h...tabhi priya aati h aur raam k samne aake khadi ho jati h

kahani yha se shuru hoti h

scene 10...

raam... kyun mere samne aa ke khadi ho gyi ho jao ab tumhe kuchh nhi krna h

priya... raam aap aise kyun baate kr rhe h

raam...kyun ab m aise bate bhi nhi kr sakta ,ab mujhe wo bhi tumse hi seekhna padega ki kaise baate krni h

priya...raam mne aisa kab kaha?

raam...nhi waise bhi sabko to yhi lagta h ki m whi krta hu jo tum kehti ho

priya...raam please mere kehne ka ye mtlb nhi tha aap mujhe glt samajh rhe h..

raam...m tumhe glt kaise samjh sakta hu tum to kabhi glt ho nhi sakti ho glti to bs meri h tumhari sunta hu to meri bhn apni jaan dene ki koshish krti h tumhari nhi sunta hu to tumhe bura lagta h m to do pariwaro k beech m pis rha hu kiski sunu kisjki na sunu...kya karu m pagal ho jaunga m

priya...raam aap pehle shant ho jaiye...kuchh nhi h apko is trh se pareshan hone ki jarurat nhi h..(priya ko neha ki baat yaadaa jati h ki raam apni family ko lekr kitna pssassive h to priya baat kosambhalne k liye aur suljhane k liye khud hi shant ho jati h aur raam ko bhi relax krne ki koshish krti h qki usko ab ye samajh m aa rha tha ki is situation ko handle krne k liye aram se aur pyar se kaam lena hoga)

raam...i am ok

priya...aap pehle freshnup hoke aiye phir dekhte h ki kya hoga

raam fresh hoke aata h priya apne hantho se khana nikalti h

raam...mera mn nhi h

priya...please mera gussa khane pe mt nikaliye

raam...are aisa kuchh nhi h m chhotiki wajah se pareshan hu kyun krti h wo aise

priya...theek h jo ho gya so ho gya ab aage aisa kuchh nhi hoga...aur phir apko chhoti ka khayal rkhna h to pehle apna khyal rkhna padega na to please chhoti k liye kha lijiye

raam khana khane lagta h aur priya use dekh k sochne lagti h ki ab use hikisi na kisi trh sachhai tk pahonchna hoga

priya...chaliye ab aram kr lijiye phir subah chhoti ko dekhne bhi to jana h

priya raam ko sahara dekr bister pr litati h uspe chadar dalti h aur muskurati h pr raam ankhe band kr leta h...thodi der baad priya bhi fresh hoke aati h todekhti h ki raam so rha h ...priya uske sir k yha baith jati h aur uske chehre pr apna chehra jhuka kr use dhekne lati aur use raam pr itna pyar aata h ki wo pyar uski ankho se ansoo bnke nikalta h aur raam k chehre pr padta h ...raam ko bhi is ehsaas ka ehsaas hota h aur wo un ansuo ko apni palko pe sametne k liye tadap jata h lekin ankhe khol kr dekhta nhi h...phir priya apne ansu ponchh k aur raam k maathe kochum k so jati h tab raam ankhe kholta h uski bhi ankhe ansuo aur guilt se bhari hui hoti h...raam sochta h ki akhir is situation kokaise handle kiya jaye...phir raam dheera se priya k kandhe pe haath rkhta h aur priya bina ghume raam ka haath pakad kr so jati h...dono apni apni ankho k ansuo ko to chhupa lete h pr chhune k ehsas se ekdusre k dardkomehsus jarur kr leteh shayad ise hi sachha pyar kehte h jo do logo ko hr haal me ekdusre k hone ka ehsaas krata h...


in morning...

raam uth jata h pr priya soyi hi rhti h raam kuchh der tk use dekhta rhta h phir use jagata h

raam...priya utho subah ho gyi h

priya...are aap uth gye itni jaldi

raam...ha wo chhoti ko dekhne hospital jana h na

priya...are ha

raam...tum chal rhi ho na mere sath

priya...raam m chalungi lekin baad m yha dadi bhi to h unhe bhi to dekhna hai

raam ko thoda ajeeb lagta h pr wo kuch kehta nhi h aur frsh hone chala jata h

on dyiening table

dadi...golu puttr natasha ab kaisi h

raam...dadi wo ab theek h aap chinta mt karo

dadi...puttr m bhi chaluni use dekhne

priya...dadi aapki tabiyat to khud theek nhi h mr.kapoor h na wo sambhal lenge phir natasha jaldi theek hoke ghr hi to aayegi tb aap use jee bhr k dekh lena

raam...ha dadi priya theek keh rhi h m jarha hu hospital m sb theek kr dunga

dadi...aur priya puttr tu nhi jayegi kya

priya...jaungi dadi pr apke paas bhi to koi hona chahiye na

dadi...m theek hu aur rishabh h na yha tu ja raam k sath aur ye mera order h

priya...ji dadi

dono ek sath bahar nikalte h to priya khti h

priya...raam mujhe coaching m ek book deni urgent h m wo krk aati hu aap chaliye

raam... achha to tum dadi k samne dikhawa kr rhi thi actully tumhe jana hi nhi h hospital to seedhe seedhe kh kyun nhi deti itna natak krne ki kya jarurat h

priya...raam aap kabhi bhi dusro ki feeling ko samjhne ki koshish nhi krte h

raam,... ha qki m tumhari trh samjhdar nhi hu...agr natasha ki jgh aayesha hoti to bhi tum pehle apni coaching hi jati

priya...ab ye isme natasha auraayesha ki baat kahan se aa gyi

raam...tumhari hi wajah se aayi h

priya...theek h to chalti hu m aapke hi sath agr isise aap khush h to yhi sahi

raam...nhi mujhe khush krne k liye jane ki koi jarurat nhi h

priya gussa k car m baith jati h aur raam bhi...dono jarhe hote h donoki mobile samne rkhi hoti h aur ek hi sath baj jati h dono jaise hi uthane jate h dono ka hath ekdusre k haath m aa jata h dono ekdusre ko dekhne lagte h with background music

o re piya...


udhar hospital me nuts ko hosh ata h tosab usse milne jate h...niharika sid aur mama

niharika...nuts beta kaisi ho tum aur ye sab kya liya tumne mne aisa koi plan to nhi bnaya tha

nuts...mom aapjanti h...(beech me )

mama...natasha puttr itni si baat pe koi aise krta h tumhe kuchh hojata to

nuts...mamaji...(beech me)

sid...nuts tumhare jaisi samjhdar ladki se mujhe is bachpane ki ummeed nhi thi

sid ko dekhte hi nuts hyper ho jati h aur chillane lagti h..

nuts...tum yha q aaye ho chale jaooo


to b continue...

abhi kafilate ho gya h to baki story sundy afternoon me...till then enjoy...lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is awesome...ur imagination is supab...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nervously waiting for the next one. Loved the convo between Ram and Priya. Very realistic and something we can expect to see in the episode soon.
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