Lalita's take : 25th March 2012 :CHAPTER 5 UPDATED - Page 14

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so so loved it you write really well the story line is nice😃 and i really enjoy to read this👏👏👏👏
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as usual superb di love ur naughty ram
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👏Just WOW😃 Love it, now waiting for the next one.. Please update asap. You are amazing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aawww . That was sooo cute. Loved it . Wish he had sent them looking for Apeksha in some hotel across town. Then he would have had time to do more than just give her a hug in that hot red nighty! 😉

Now waiting for the mysteries to be solved. Par itni jaldi bhi mat solve kar dena... want to read many more of your updates.

I was going to tell you to add the page # in the title, so we could find it, but later realized that you did put it on the first page.
You could add the # in the title next time - something like (chapter 6 - Pg 19) .Just a thought.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mem1

Aawww . That was sooo cute. Loved it . Wish he had sent them looking for Apeksha in some hotel across town. Then he would have had time to do more than just give her a hug in that hot red nighty! 😉


Now waiting for the mysteries to be solved. Par itni jaldi bhi mat solve kar dena... want to read many more of your updates.

I was going to tell you to add the page # in the title, so we could find it, but later realized that you did put it on the first page.
You could add the # in the title next time - something like (chapter 6 - Pg 19) .Just a thought.


Gita,
thadapna aur thadpana bahut achhe feelings hain yaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mem1

Aawww . That was sooo cute. Loved it . Wish he had sent them looking for Apeksha in some hotel across town. Then he would have had time to do more than just give her a hug in that hot red nighty! 😉


Now waiting for the mysteries to be solved. Par itni jaldi bhi mat solve kar dena... want to read many more of your updates.

I was going to tell you to add the page # in the title, so we could find it, but later realized that you did put it on the first page.
You could add the # in the title next time - something like (chapter 6 - Pg 19) .Just a thought.



That was a nice idea ! I could have said that Apeksha had said that she'd already landed in Mumbai ... would have loved to see Taklu making the rounds of as many hotels as he could... why didn'i I think of that 😭

Will add chapter number & page henceforth... I was trying to hyperlink...but didnt manage :-(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lalita Ji
Any chance of update??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lalithaji simply awesome. This time you have again outdone yourself. Beautiful, unexpected and excellent. And please please don't torture us for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
very interesting ( romantic, intelligent and in keeping with the charecters ).APPLAUSE !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lalita we r waiting !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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