Lalita's take : 25th March 2012 :CHAPTER 5 UPDATED

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naveendh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

it is realy awesome,...interesting...keep posting soon...

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Nancy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Thank You Lalita Ji for updating😳

what a beautiful update it was again👏

i just love the letter bit and "My Love" and Priya not able to shred it..Aww😳

loved the special hug after so many days😳

And, do i need to write ki i just love ur Takes❤️ keep giving us these frequently and yes, update this one sooon😛

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crazyfats

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Thanks Lalita. For the update & for honoring my request. It was a treat reading it.
Keeps one wanting for more.

Is there a superlative for Incomparable?

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sparky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Done with chapter 5... and what to say except a wonderful part... so it was Apeksha who called Ram about wrong happenings in office... i totally forgot about her... but who hit Ram in office.. it is still a mystery.. and hope his phone dint have any misuse...

loved ram's letter to priya and later their hug... it was exactly show how keen they were to meet each other, to be with each other... once again an awesome part...

luv

p.s. just a suggestion why don't u give it a name "Separation : My take"

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azk92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

amazing. that was just amazing. you really capture the emotions and make us feel them. 👏

i've been a silent reader for a long time and don't post very often but that was just too good to not say anything.

you are such a talented writer!

it gave me that butterfly feeling in the bottom of my stomach that I haven't been getting from the actual show in the last week ever since the morning after holi.

will be waiting for an update 😊

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jainneha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

😃 ah u are brilliant u are one of this fff writers of this forum thanks!

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shra28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

amazing di amazing!!!!👏👏👏
the move of story is flawless!!!!

am loving it more than the actual story being shown in the show!
i always wanted to see atleast read raya romance aise chup chupke! nd today u did it!tht was a fantastic update😊plz plz keep on updating frequently!😃

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saniya9919

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Beautiful update Lalitadi. That was a passionate hug.☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️They missed each other so much.😛 This is what I like or expect from the seperation or misunderstandings... the longing for each other & the passionate lovey-dovey moments in the end...Hope humarey serial mainbhi aisahi ho. The 'Tedhi bindi' part...naughty Golu .😉

Pleaseee Di 'evil trio' ki especially 'Sweety' ki band bajado...