raya scene part 3 update 26-03-2012pg 4 by ASHA - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks u all a lot ...for liking my simple ff...all of u are very sweet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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perfect too gud girdharmona luved it AWESUM 👏 PLZZZ write the nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i try to right a rain scene of raya...

.both raya are in same car...suddenly rain started...priya became happy...
p- driver gadi roko ...mujhe niche utarna hain.
r- priya tum pagal ho kitni tej barish ho rahi hain,bimar ho jaogi.
p-kuch nahi hoga savan ki pahli barish hain,iska maja hi kuch aur hota hain...(priya gadi se niche utar jati hain enjoying rain)
r- andar aa jao bimar ho jaogi...
p- gadi ke pas aati hain...)aap bhi aa jaiye maja aayega...(reqesting with innocent face)...please aayeye na...
( ram came from car only due to make priya happy)
(firstly he irretete ,,,,,,,then he also love it...enjoing it a lot...)

p- (look at ram,,,,,,)kitne kush lag rahe hain...jabrdasti inhone apni khusiyon ko daba ke rakha hua hain...mein aaj vvda karti hu inki kushiyon ko kisi ki najar nahi lagne dugi...
(smile , & also start enjoying rain with ram)

r- suddenly look at priya,,,,,,,smile...looking at her lovingly...kitni innocent, pyari lag rahi hain...ek bache ki tarah barish ke sath khel rahi hain,,,,,,,,,,ek alag hi khushi aur chamak iske chahre me aaj dikh rahi hain...me aaj vada karta hu kabhi iski muskurahat kam nahi hone duga...
( both enjoy rain fully,,,,,,,,& then came back to km..)

in raya room...


(both change their clothes...)(priya take a towel firstly dry ram's hair...& then start drying her hair..both lie down on their bed comfortably ...priya use ram hand as pellow...)

p- kesa tha aapka barish ka experience...
r- (smile, ...)bahut accha tha...pata hain kyon...kyoki..mujhe aaj tumhare chare ma aalag hi khushi dekhne ko mili...

p- (smile )me khush isliye thi kyoki aap mere sath the...barish ke mosam ko aapke sath ne aur khubsurat bana diya tha...
r- (smile )me tumhe vada karta hu,,,tumhari khusi ke liye mein khuch bhi kar sakta hu...
p- kuch bhi...
r- ha kuch bhi...
p- to chale phir barish mein bhigne...
r- kya...
(both laugh...)
r- vese ek aur bat kahu...barish ki bundo ne tumhari kubsurti ko aur nikhar diya tha...

( priya became shy...put her head on his chest..)
p- mr kapoor me bahut lucky hu jo aap mujhe mile...
r- (smile, ,,,,,,,,,,,put his hand on her head)mein tumse vada karta hu...mein hamari khusiyon ko kisi ki nazar nahi lagne dunga
(both smile...&priya feel safe in his arm...both sleep in same position...)
Edited by girdharmona - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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YAAR SOME MORE ROMANCE U ADD THIS SCENE TO MAZA AA JATAHA their is no crities 😉but l really enjoy the scene 👍🏼keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
superb romantic scenes.. love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Both the scenes are too good. I can visualize them ! Keep up good work dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3


The next morning, ...Priya wakes up early.. watches Ram's face as he is sleeping contently'... Rests her head on his chest and suddenly' hears a loud snore'. (laughs)'. "Kharate marna kab chodenge Mr. Kapoor?"'. ...

She untangles herself from his arm and goes to the washroom to freshen up'..

when she comes back, Ram is still in deep sleep,

Priya --calls out to him to get up'.

Ram- just mumbles in sleep about not wanting to get up'

Priya... goes upto him and rests on his chest (similar to the one after the C nite)'. And sprinkles water from her hair on his face'..

Ram's face breaks into a smile as the episode of enjoying rain last nite comes flashing into his memory and he feels the water drops to be rain'.

P -- Mr. Kapoor, neend mein kyon muskara rahe hain, chale uthaiye' der ho rahi hai'. ... Waise bhi hum aaj kal neeche bahut der se jaate hain, dadi ghussa karengi'. ..(She ...starts moving away, saying this, but Ram envelopes her in his arms)

R-- ' Patni ji, pehle toh Good morning, aur yeh kya, kal raat ko hi bola tha na, mujhe Ram bulao, phir se Mr. Kapoor, kyon???

P-- ' Aaree (goes silent..), woh to aapne bulane ko kaha isliye maine kaha'. Warna ...maa kehti hai ke, pati ka naam nahi lete''

R -- '(teasing) Aacha, toh kya bulate hai?? Sunte ho?? ..Cmon Priya, kaun se zamane ...mein rehti ho, mujhe koi problem nahi hai toh phir tumhe kya problem hai

P '-- (avoiding eyes) Acha chaliye, der ho rahi hai, jaldi se uthiye, aur fresh ho jayiye'

R- --tightens his grip on her waist ' Naaahi, aaj kaam par jane ka mood nahi hai'.

P '-- yeh kya bat hui, kyon nahi jaana.
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R --' Bas, nahi jana, waise bhi, main company ka malik hoon, toh apne liye, ek din ki chutti ...toh le sakta hoon, kyon??

P--- ' haan, le toh sakhte hain, lekin sochiye, aap itni badi company ke malik hai, itne ...saare log aapke liye kaam karte hai, aap hi office nahi jayenge, to woh log kya ...sochenge'..

R ---' Unke bare main chodo, mat socho, ek din ki hi toh baat kar raha hoon, aaj main ...tumhare saat bitana chahta hoon'

P---- ' Aacha ji, lekin, main to Aaj maa ke ghar jaa rahi hoon' so , sorry, aaj aapko ghar pe ...akele hi rehna hoga..

R--- ' Kyon, Kyon??? Yeh sudden program kab banaya'

P--- ' Abhi abhi, jab aapka bhi 'sudden progam' ghar rehne ka bana!!

R---- ' hey, hey, this is not fair'.. main ghar pe ruk raha hoon, tumhare liye, aur tum mujko hi ...chod ke jaa rahi ho??

P--- ' (fiddling with his kurta button) meri baat dhayan se suniye, main humsha aapke saath ...hi hoon, jab bhi meri yaad aaye, bas apni aankhen band karlena'. Iske liye, aapna ...kaam mat miss kariye'

R ---' Theek hai, tumhari koi bhi baat aaj tak tali hai'. Main office jata hoon, lekin ek sharat ...pe' tum maa ke ghar jao, lekin main lene aaunga sham ko.. tum waha nahi rukogi'.

P---- ' (shy) theek hai'

Ram holds her for a little longer, kisses her forehead, saying a silent prayer thanking God for having her in his life, and finally releases her'

Edited by girdharmona - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome imagination...loved it very much...thanks for posting...kam se kam itna khushi to mili hai...yeh serial wale yeh sab dikhaye ya na dikhaye...lekin aap ne dil khush kar diya ji...aap ke is talent ke liye aap ko dil se salaam karta hoon ji...bahut khoob...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
You have captured the romantic moment fantastically.

Lets hope for more moments like these before the twists and turns in the story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
so lovely scene i want this scene in drama 😳😆😆
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