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avivakirk

@avivakirk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Maris Another of your exquisite creations.👏..How well you defined the moments...Words just flowed like the stream ...Very well painted picture of words and colours.The myriad of words just made the whole RAYA holi scene so picturesque...Emotions were bang ones...Liked your imagination abt them lost in their world of colours with Bansi kaka's food totally forgotten...Their world where only they existed with everything faded out from their view ...Only them and their maelstorm of emotions...More detailed feedback later.Good job Maris!

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: avivakirk
Maris Another of your exquisite creations.👏..How well you defined the moments...Words just flowed like the stream ...Very well painted picture of words and colours.The myriad of words just made the whole RAYA holi scene so picturesque...Emotions were bang ones...Liked your imagination abt them lost in their world of colours with Bansi kaka's food totally forgotten...Their world where only they existed with everything faded out from their view ...Only them and their maelstorm of emotions...More detailed feedback later. Good job Maris!

thanks, Danke and dhanyawaad.. Your comments are more beautiful than my words.🤗.

After seeing the episode, this is what immediately flashed in my mind. Such a situation if it happens will be realistic and adds more color..

One thing it clearly shows BALH has really pervaded my wakeful and sleeping thoughts, that sometimes the line between reality and fiction is blurred so much..Gone really crazy about BALH. .

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awww Maris u trying to kill anyone or trying to send anyone to asylum? I think i am gonna be first one to need an asylum for this continuity from the episode to ur OS

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maris

@maris08

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ravichitra
Awww Maris u trying to kill anyone or trying to send anyone to asylum? I think i am gonna be first one to need an asylum for this continuity from the episode to ur OS

Chitra already am kind of going mad due to BALH. Can you please be specific in saying whether this OS is good or otherwise..😕

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LalitaLahiri

@LalitaLahiri

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Maris, its awesome... and the name of the OS is just so nice..."Colors of life"...

Loved it...

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow beautifully written maris very touchy 😳 and romantic

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Good job Maris...would love to see such scenes but as the fuss is buzzing round (the monday episode), donot think any steamy scene we can catch up so early but nevertheless some good RaYa moments we deserve.

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Monamie

@monamie111

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow!!..awesome awesome awesome Maris!!👏👏👏

it was sweet, simple and lovely😳..i hope they will show something like this on Monday😃

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maris

@maris08

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: LalitaLahiri

Maris, its awesome... and the name of the OS is just so nice..."Colors of life"...

Loved it...

Thanks lalitha.. 😳😳😳

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maris

@maris08

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
Good job Maris...would love to see such scenes but as the fuss is buzzing round (the monday episode), donot think any steamy scene we can catch up so early but nevertheless some good RaYa moments we deserve.

Jiggs I know no such steamy scenes will ever be shown on BALH again, atleast in the near future..

Neither does my OS has one.. Everything is only suggestive and left for the readers imagination..😳😃

But as you had said good and cute raya moment in the show and in our members' OS and FF are always welcome..😃