My Take for Monday episode updated LAst Part

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy guyzz this is my first attempt to right any thing so plzz Bear it and sorry in advance for my mistakes

It start from the kiss aftr the kiss Ram hugPriya tightly priya also hugd him back suddenly she realize wht she is doing she backsof and says Mr. kapoor I knw ki aap mjhe kaisi aurat samjhte hian aurr main aapke layak nahi hun and she moved to her couch . Ram was stunned he knws priya was really hurt by him but he nvr thaught his 1 mistake will make him loose his most precious gift of life . Ram also sleeps with heavy hurt .

Next morning whn ram wakes up he dsn't found priya he calls Bansi kaka And ask him Abt Priya

Bansi kaka tel him tht priya has left fr her classes and gives a letter to ram.

Ram reads a letter

Mr. kapoor mjhe nahi pata ki mere apko infrm karne ya na karne se apko koi farq padta hain ya nahi lekin apki tarah main bhi apna farz pura karoongi main apne ghar jaa rahi hun kuch dino k liye kynki meri behen ko meri jarurat hain aurr aap sayad mjhe apni behen aurr apne Family matters me invlv nab hi karna chate ho .

Ram was hurt he didn't knw what to do or what nt to do he calls vikaram and tell him to meet him at his office .

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy plz let me knw whether i shld cntinue or not
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its good. u can continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u shd continue gud weekends are a torture and certain members are our saviours join the brigade of loitta and veena our beloved writers.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ram's Office:

Ram lost in his thought's vikram came to meet him

Vikram : Kya hua ram tu itna paresan kyn hain main samjh sakta hunk al se jo bhi hua hain un sab se tu upset hoga but to aise Devdas ki tarah kyn baitha hut u Ram Kapor hian jo sab kuch thik kar sakta hian

Ram : Vikram mjhe Natasha aurr Ayesha ki ladai sejyada tnsn Priya ki hain yarr Natasha aurr Ayesha ki prblm solve karne k liye to maine media walo se baat kar li ahin unhe job hi paise chaiye wo pay kark sare telecast ban karwa diye hain .

Vikram : Ram tu priya k bare mein itna mat soch use apne dil ki baat bata de aurr wo tere pass aa jayegi .

Ram : Yarr wo mjhse baat tak nahi akr rahi mjhe kuch bhi nahi bolne de rahi yarr mjhe samjh nahi a raha main kya karu main use khona nahi chata .

Vikram : Ram tu yaha mat baith jaa uski classes mein jaa use mil aurr use apne dil ki baat bata

Ram : Thanxx vikram main abhi jata hu

Ram reaches Classes :

Ram searches for priya and came to know that priya has left for home ram is upset and came back to KM

KM:

Ram reaches His room and find out that room has again changed there is no photo frame of Ram & priya and his old frame was back ram call Bansi kaka

Ram : BAnsi kaka kisne mera room me changes karne ko bola

Bansi kaka: sir priya mam ne Jane se pahle bola tha ki iss room ko fir se waisa hi bana diya jaise pahle thaw o bhi aaj k aaj unhone hi sabhi workers ko bheja tha

Ram : aap jaiye and thinks ye priya bhi na Mjhse bhi jyada gusse wali hain Chal Ram abb pahle usse mana par usse is room me lane se pahle ye room fir se waisa kar jaisa usne kiya tha

Niharika see that room was again changed and priya was not their in KM and nw make a plan to use all this for her favour

Niharika : Ram kya hua Priyaa aaj ghar nahi Ayi ?? aurr ye room tumne fir se pahle jaisa kyn kar dia ?

Ram : wo Priya aaj apne ghar rookna chati thi kal itn akuch hua to wo apni family k sath rahna chati thi

Niharika : Hmm ram Ye Ayesha ne bhi na Nutzz ehsaan ka is tarah se thanx Bola hain aurr abb ye priya bhi uska sath de rahi hain jabki usse tumhra sath dena chaiye tha sorry Ram maine tumhari shadi galat ladki se karwa di .

Ram : Maa aisa kuch nahi hain Priya ek achi ladki hain aurr wo apni family ki care kar rahi hain to isme galat kya hain aurr jaha tak rahi NUtz aurr Ayesha ki baat to main sach ka pata jaldi laga lunga plzz maa abb agar aap bur na mane to maa aram kar sakta hu

Niharika : yaa baby why not main chalti hu tumhare liye kahana Lagwa du

Ram nahi maa mjhe bhook nahi hain aap jaiye aram kijiye

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sollypnj, ravichitra, , JAINEHA,BALHFAN


Thanxx guyzz

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was too cool loved ram's answer to niharika🤣plz update soon u are becoming one of my fav wriers 😃
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Originally posted by: jainneha

this was too cool loved ram's answer to niharika🤣plz update soon u are becoming one of my fav wriers 😃


thanxx yar this is my firts ever attempt to write any thing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vinan plz continue its really good👏 n a breath of fresh air during the unbearable weekend
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Next Morning Ram wake up With a smile and confidence which was needed by him to bring his Life back to bring his Priya back before Living KM ram called The interior Decorator and told him to do all the changes that were did by Priya earlier.

Ram drive his car towards the coaching Center because he wanted to reach classes Before his Hitler wife reach their he has to make some arrangement Ram reached coaching Classes And talk with the head of the coaching to make it off for all the Students & teachers except Priya .

Ram made all the arrangement which he wanted to make nd was nw waiting for Priya

Priya reached her classes and got surprised since whole building was decorated with Green color flowers she thought that it might be any function going on she enteredin the classes and found the arrow directing her towards the terries

Priya reached to terrised and got second surprised of the day whole terries was decorated With the Artificial Roses

She enterd in the terries and found ram standing their as soon she sees Ram she started walking frm their ram stop her

Ram : Priya plzz ek baar meri bat sunlo fir tum jo chao karna plzz ek baar main kya kehna chata hu sun lo

Before Priya Could say any Thing ram signled Some one and it start Raining only at their Place Priya was surprised

Ram : Dekha Priya tumne mujhe itna change kar dia hain wo har chig jo tmhe achi lagti hain wo mjhe achi lagne lagi priya jab tum khush hoti ho na to mjhe bhi khushi milti hain , maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main kabhi kisi se shadi ar paunga jab bhi vikram mjhe shadi karne k liye bolta to main uski baat tal jata tha lekin jab bhi Vikram aurr Neha ko sath dekhta tha to mjhe apni life me kuch missing lagta tha tumhare aane se dhire dhire wo kami kam hone lagi priya

Tumne mjhe jine ki ek nayi umeed di Offc aurr kam k bahar bhi ek jindagi hoti hain ye tumne mjhe sikhaya

Us din party me hi main tumhe apne dil ki baat batana chata tha lekin us gadhe Vikram k chaakar mein kuch nahi bol paya

Priya I love u I really really love u plzz mjhe akela mat chod k jao main tumhare bina nahi rah sakta priya .

Tumhi kahti ho na ki main Ek abche k jaisa hu to kyat um apne bache ko maaf anhi kar sakti

Plzz priya kuch to bolo for god sake tum mjhse abhi bhi naraz ho priya ??

Priya turned back and saw ram standing their all drenched hvng tears in his eye priya hugs him I love u Mr kapor I really realy Love u I love u too priya .

After some time priya broke the hug and asked Mr. Kapoor aap ko fulo se alrgy hain na aurr ye Barish apko to ye buri lagti hain na ''

Ram : Priya mjhe fulo se alargy hain iss liye to Artifical Fool lagwaye taki bina chike apni baat bol saku aurr tmhe mere kan bhi na khichne pade aurr rahi bat barish ki to jab se mjhe tumse pyar hua hain main wearied hi behave kar rha hun

Priya with anger says To aap ye kahna chate ahin ki main wearied hu

Ram nahi tum weaired nahi tum to meri pyari hitler ho and suddenly rain stops Ram realize it and says lagta han pani khatm ho gaya

Priya : what pani khatm ho gaya ??

Ram : haa wo tumhe barish pasand hain na to maine water tanks se barish karwai

Priya : Mr. kapoor kya jarurat thi in sabki kitna pani barbad kar dia apne ? apko pata hain itne pani me.. before she could say nore she was cut sort by Ram

Ram : Priya Vikram sahi kehta hain Biwiyo ko khush karna to namumkin hain main yaha romance karne ki koshish kar rha hu aurr tum mjhe pani save karne pe lecture de rahi ho koi mjhe goli kyn nahi maar deta yarr

Priya :: ok srry Mr. kapoor plzz ghar chale mjhe bhook lagi hain

Ram : haa chalo maine bhi break fast nahi kia hain aurr humara room hamara wait kar raha hoga chalo.

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