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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow,such an awesome update. Continue soon please.
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awwiieee😍 plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you for your encouraging comments – it does help and motivates

Since we have 3 days to kill without BALH I thought of taking a cue from the Thursday episode and wrote this FF. All yours ..

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Priya and Ram starts from home after saying bye to everyone..

Scene 1 :

Priya is little emotional as she has to go away for so many days from her parents to a new place .. she hasn't gone abroad earlier so she is bit nervous also

In the car, from home to Airport Priya is quiet and watching outside .. her face is little low …

Ram is busy making phone calls to office and giving instructions and he in between looks at Priya .. Ending a calls he asks Priya tum theek to ho? Kya hua?

Priya : Just nods her head with tears filled in her eyes ..

Ram: Arrey ye kya .. Kal tak to tum bilkul theek thee ab kya hua ? Ghar Wapas Jaana hai?

Priya : Smiles and shook her head ..

Ram : gives a naughty smile to her

They reach airport … complete all formalities .. check in, immigration, security etc etc and waiting at lounge .. Priya is quiet and reading a book

Ram looks at her and says – Very nice ..jaise Rishabh ne mera laptop lene ko kaha tha vaise he mujhe tumhari books bhi chhipa deni chaiye ..

Priya – (kerps the book in the bag and smiles) kya hua ?

Ram – Priya Maine kuchh decide kiya hai .. Khas kar tumhari kal wali baat ke bad

Priya – kaun see baat ?

Ram – Wahi jo tumne kha - Hum jayenge ,, ghoomenge, phirnge,, Sight seeing karenge,, Khayenge, Piyenge aur wapan aa jayende

Priya – To ?

Ram – Agle das din main tumse Jhagda bilkul nahee karoonga ..gussa bhi nahee Karoonga aur Chillaoonga bhi nahee

Priya – Arrey wah achanak ye kaise

Ram – Arrey bhai – Hum apne honeymoon ko issi tarah to special bana sakte naaa

Both had a big laugh

Ram says – Shukar hai tum hasin to sahi – warna ghar se nikalne ke baad se you were very quiet

Priya – Smiles softly

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Scene 2 :

In the aircraft – Priya is trying to look for seat and then tries to keep her luggage in the overhead cabin and finds it difficult then Ram helps her – says – Lao Mujhe do .. and smiles

Priya - Thanks.

Ram: Waise tumhe pata hai na hum sirf 10 din ke liye jaa raheen hain.. tumhara itna saara saman dekhe mujhe lagaa….

Priya – look at him angrily and say – huh .. ab yahaan per aapki cupboard ki tarah koi restriction hai kya?

Ram – just laughs

They settle in their seats – (Premium Class) -

Ram busy with Laptop and Priya with her book

In between Ram thinks something and smiles – Priya notices and asks – Kya hai?

Ram says - Nahee mujhe who lift ke same corridor me hamari ladai yaad aa gayee

Us din me aur aaj me 3-4 maheene hi hue hai lekin aaj hum sath me ghomne aa rahe hai

Wahi soch rahaa tha

Priya- Sach me .. mai kitni buri tarah se lade thee apse .. then makes a sorry face and says ok sorry for that per aapne kaam he aisa kiy athaa

Ram – Just nods in agreement and smiles - did not say anything

Ram - Waise Priya maine pichchle 25 saal me jabse business take over kiya hai koi bhi holiday nahee liya bus kaam ke liye hee country se bahar ya doose cities me gaayaa hoon isliye bahut ajeeb sa lag raha hai aur shayad achcha bhi

Priay – Kyaaa apne kabhi holiday nahee liya ? Friends ke sath bhi nahee ?

Ram – I never had many friends .. Priya

Priya – hmm Kamal hai.. phir to shyad ye plan achcha hee hai you will get some change

Flight is around 14 hours and via Singapore..

After a while

Ram – Priya.

Priya – hmmm.. kya

Ram – Do you want to do some shopping? at Singapore.. we have some gap in between our flights

Priya – Shopping ? Mujhe kuchch nahee chahiye .. mere paas sab kuchch hai jo mukhe chahiye

Ram – Laughing - Wah Kya biwi hai …

Priya – Matlab ?

Ram – Mujhe to lagta tha ladkiya sub kuchch hote hue bhi shopping karti hai and tum to ultoi at kat rahee ho ..

Priya – so what ? Main doosron se alag hoon

Ram – Smiles and mocks – Who to ho?

Priya – looks at him pretending to be angry

After sometime –

Priya – Mr. Kapoor ab kyoki hume itna time kill karna he hai to let us play a game?


Ram – Surpised .. What? Yahaan? Aircraft mein

Priya - haan haan yahee

Ram – Smiles Kya game ?

Priya – Hume bacpan be bahut kuch pasand hota hai jo ki bade hone paer bhi yaad rehta hai – that could be food item, some place, some people, some toy, some evet, some teacher

We will try to recall all that one by one instantly – this will take us back to our childhood aur hum ek dusre ke bare me aur zyada jaan bhi payenge .. aappko koi problem hai agar to rehne dijiye

Ram – ok lets try

Like this they start talking and laugh and keep communicating. Off course Ram had lot of food items and car toys items in his list and Priya had lot of books and teachers in her list.

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Scene 3 :

Both of them check into the hotel – it is late night

Both check the room – There is a bed room with king size bed –

In the adjacent room there is a nice sofa set with a medium size couch. Priya is happy to see it .. but says of yeh to doosre room main hai

Ram – Koi Problem hai tumhe ?

Priya – Mujhe akele room me sone me dar lagta hai .. Main kabhi bachpan se kabhi akelre room me nahee soyi

Ram says – Hmmm koi baat nahee hamare room ke darwaja to khula he rahega .. manage ho jayega

Priya – does not say anything

Priya – Main change kar leti hoon

Priya goes and opens her suitcase – and looks for her night gown and she is not able to find it she starts searching .. and find that some noodle strapped nighty and she creams yeh kya .. yeh kiska suitcase aa gaya hai .. yeh mera nahee hai

Ram – comes riunning – Kya hua?

Priya – Yeh Mera saman nahee hai ?

Pram – Kya kah rahee ho priya – this is our baggage – maine dekh kar liya hai –

Priya – is shocked as she realized what Neha and Shipra have done to her

Ram – Kya hua?

Priya – almost crying – mere paas night gown nahee hai? Main raat me kya pehnoongi

Ram – a bit embarrassed – bhool gayee? – itne logo ne tumhe help kiya phir bhe? – dekho shayad hoga – main help karoon may be u r to tired

Priya – Naheee—aap hath mat lagayiegaa

Ram – what is wring with you ? – little upset

Priya – with tears – woh.. who.. maa aur Neha ne kuch naye kapde mere suitcase me rakh diye hain – won main nahee pahen sakti

Ram – Kyon Kya hua? he goes and pick up the one on top of the suitcase

Priya – closes her eyes… tightly

Ram – sees the nighty and feels so embarrassed even looking at it.. Priya tum ye pahenogi ?

Priya- Yeh mera nahee hai – won Neha aur ma ane chupchap rakh diya jab main idhar udhar gayee

Ram – phir ? it is too late to go and buy one for you

Priya - mai dekhti hoon – she makes angry face for Shipra and blabbers

Ram – goes and stands near the window and looks at Priya and gives a naughty smile looking at her condition.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Wonderful part!!
Update ASAP it'll help kill the weekend
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for wonderful update

waiting for next plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
me too 😕 what she do wear the night suit or or no if wear then what ram reaction😉😉😉😉
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wow too good really nicely written great work :)
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On return form Australia Ram and Priya both are happy. Priya is happy as she had good time and got to know Ram better. Ram is happy as finally he feels that he got his life partner. His all insecurities that he had shared with an unknown person in that restaurant from other side of the rest room wall, have gone and he thinks Priya is the right person for him. However, he did not get right opportunity to share this feeling with Priya and he also feared if she says No to him. As Priya has been very open to him and they have become friends and she has been caring also but has never expressed any emotion of Love for him. He thinks, what Vikram had said that girls will never make a move so this risk of asking first will have to taken by Ram only.

While coming to home from Airport, Ram gets call from office and he immediately gets worried and tells the driver to drop him at office and tells Priya to go home.

Priya – Arrey – thoda rest to kar lijiye

Ram – Already switched to bad mood – Nahee Mera office jaana zaroori hai

Priya looks at him and feels sorry for him …

At home – After priya meets dadi, Niharika and others she goes to her room and unpacks and gets a call form her mom .. mom asks her to come home and tells her something then Priya says ok ok I will come – I have to come – when are you going etc.

It is late night and Ram is not yet back from office and Priya is waiting. Finally Ram comes and does not talk to Priya but thinking about office. It seems again some problem happened in office and one of his old employee was found guilty and Sid and Mamaji were pushing Ram to sack that person.

Priya : Arrey aap aa gayee .. itni der … you need some rest

Ram – Please Priya – our honeymoon is over and let us get back to reality . I am really occupied today and he goes to the bar at home for drinks

Priya – (Thinking) – aap kyo nahee samajhte ki main bhi aapki problem me share kar sakti hoon.. at least you should share with me as we are friend now

2 days go like this.. Priya has been trying to talk to Ram but he is just not available

Niharika is happy to see all this

4th day Ram asks Bansi kaka – Kaka Priya kahan hai ?

Bansi Kaka – Madam aaj savere bahar gayee hai aur aapke liye letter diya hai – he gives letter on breakfast tray

Ram reads -

Mr Kapoor – Appke paas sunne ka samy nahee hai isliye leter likhna pada

Meri Mom Ayesha ko lekar dehi ja rahee hai 4 din ke liye

NUTS and Kartik are is also out of country for their work and Papa is not well – unko bukhar hai and I am needed with him to look after him so I will be there for next 3-4 days ..

Maine maa and dadi ko bata diya hai

Take Care

Priya

Ram suddenly realises that he has not been giving time to Priya since they are back due to his office issues. He is angry also as Priya did not tell her anything on this.

He leaves for office and gets busy in lot of issues. Sid is acting funny.

On his way back to home he tells the driver to take the car to Priya's dad house. From the gate of the apartment he calls Priya -

Priya – Hello (Little angry tone)

Ram – Priya – Main bol raha hoon

Priya - Haan to boliye

Ram – What are you doing?

Priya – Kya kar rahee hoon matlab? Aapse baat kar rahee hoon

Ram – woh to pata hai .. ok tumhare pap kaise hain? Unko doctor ko dikhaya

Priya –He is still running with high fever .. doctor has seen him

Ram – (Softly) Do you need any help Priya

Priya – Nahee muhe kisi se koi help nahee chahiye

Ram – Khana kha liya ?

Priya – Nahee aab papa ko dawai de di hai – he has gone to sleep main ab khaoongi

Ram – Per tumhe to akele khana khana achcha nahe lagta hai na

Priya – To kya karoo – Padosiyo ko lekar aana padega – Koi hai hee nahe

Ram – Do you need a company for diner?

Priya – Kya? (Doorbell Rings)

Priya – open the door – there is Ram

She is very happy but within seconds she suppresses her happiness and becomes serious

Priya – Aapp yahha ? ess Samay ? 11 baj rahe hai ?

Ram – Arrey ye mera sasural hai.. tum apke papa ke damaad se aise baat karti ho ? and smiles

Priya –keeps staring at him angrily

Ram – achcha ab mujhe apni badi badi aakhon se darana band karo aur mujhe khaana do – muhe bahuit bhookh lagee hai

Priy a- Smiles- aap yaha khana khayenge ?

Ram - Aur Kya?

Priya – Vegetarian hai

Ram - array tumhare haath ka to main ghas phoos bhi khaa longa

Priya goes to the kitchen

Ram come behind her – close to her and says – Sorry Priya

Priya – Active ignorant – Kisliye

Ram – Who maine tumse tee din theek baat nahee ki aur tumhari baat suni bhi nahee

Priya - Mujhe to aadat hai.. aap to hamari shaadi ke baad se aise hi hain phir uyeh sory kyon

Ram – tasting food from bowl and say oof Mirch hai

Priya – aha.. Papa abhi jag jayenge aap jakar dining table per baithiye

Ram – Main dekh kar aaya hoon – tumhare papa dawai khakar so rahe hai

Priys – smiles

Ram – TO maafi mili ?

Priya – Mili – per iske liye aapko yahaan taka ane ke zaroorat kyat thi – Main to 3-4 din me wapas hi aa rahee thiee

Ram – Tab tak kaun wait karega aur mera kya hoga

Priya – Kya matlab

Ram – Priya – I am missing you very badly .. but I know you have to be here per mujhe tumhe her din dekhna hai – kya karoon?

Priya – Miss to main bhi karti hoon aapko – lekin aap to bus kaam kaam kaam Kya karoon?

Ram TI kya main roz yahan diner ke liye aa sakta hoon

Priya – Aa sakte hain

They eat together lovingly

While going Ram comes close to Priya's ears and says – Priya – I am waiting for you to come home - I need to tell you something which I have never told anyone..

Priya – just smiles at him and her face goes red

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the update...KOI TOH JAAGA..FF update kare ke liye...😆

Nice one..continue soon..
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
so lovely.it seems as we are realy watching it in balh.keep updating.

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