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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-9

ram comes home and starts finding priya.priya was in the
wash-room,she comes and answered "is nything wrong Mr.
kapoor?"ram:no.priya:re kuch kaise nahi,aap itna jorse
pukar rahe the mujhe laga ke kuch to hua hain.ram:nothing
like that but priya aj neha ayi thi kya?priya:ye bat hain,
ayi thi na,thodi der pehle chali gayi.she is so sweet.i think
isi liye vikram use itna payer karte hain.ram:haan.neha tumse
kuch kaha kya,hamare bareme?priya:Mr. Kapoor main janti hoon
koi hamare asli relationship-ke bareme nahi janti hai,maine
use kuch nahi kaha.ram become relaxed.ram:priya ye jaroori
hain kya har baat ki jawab aise ghumake dena...pehle itna
bara lecture suno aur phir jab samne wala bore ho jaye tab
jake point pe ati ho.pata nahi itne saal tumhare gharwale tumhe
kaise bardasht kiya.priya:excuseme...mere gharwale tab pareshan
hote hain jab main nahi bolti hoon.aur woh mujhe bardasht nahi
karte hain payer karte hain.apki gharwalo ki tarah nahi,sory to
say but apki gharwale to badi mushkil se najar ate hain.koi candle
leke dhundne jaye to mushkilse ek log miljaye to hi kafi hain.ram:kya,
kya kaha tumne?priya:aur vi hain khatam nahi hui hain meri bat.is
gharka sabse bada problem to ap hain aur isi liye sab apse dur
vagte hain,darte hain apse.re main jayda bolu aur jovi karoon
phirvi at-least sab mere pass to hain.ram:tumse to bat karna hi
bekar hain,kaha se kaha pauch gayi tum.mujhse bahut badi galti ho
gayi jo maine apse kuch kaha.suddenly ram's phone starts ringing.
ram:ha...bol vikram.vikram(in phone):ram neha chahti hain ke aj hum
sab uski favourite restraurent pe dinner kare.tu priya ko lekar
waha per pauch jana.ram:main aj kahi nahi jane wala hoon...kisi
aur din chale jayenge yaar.vikram:i understand ram...mujhe samajhna
chahie tha teri avi avi shadi hui hain tujhe vi to priya ke sath
time bitana chahie.main neha ko samjha dungi.ram:re aisi koi bat nahi
hain,hum aa rehe hain.

ram is thinking in his mind...ab isse bat kaise karoon?agar kuch
puchne jaunga to nakhre dikhane lagegi.shit!!...kya karoo kehna to
parega.ram called priya and asked for dinner.priya:agar vikram aur
neha ki bat nahi hoti to kavi han nahi bolti main.ram:main vi unke
liye hi tumse pucha...nahi to main aur tumhare sath...never.

in restraurent...ram & priya waiting for vikram & neha.after some
time ram call vikram.ram:tum log kaha ho yaar.hum kabse wait kar rehe
hain.vikram:ram suddenly neha is not feeling good to hum nahi aa
payenge.ram:kya?thik hain hum ajete hain,neha ko acha lagega.vikram:
no ram,please aisa kuch nahi karna.re tu pehli bar priya ko lekar bahar
gaya hain,use acha nahi lagega.ram:are kuch kharap nahi lagega.
vikram:please ram,tujhe humari dosti ke kasam,please continue your
dinner.ram:ok.but you know,i hate you.vikram:i know.ok,bye.

ram:priya woh log nahi arehe hain,neha ko kuch problem hain.priya:o
so sad!!hum use dekhne jaye?ram:uski jarurat nahi hain.hum dinner
kar lete hain.priya:ok.

suddenly a girl and a boy starts quarelling.girl:why are you so late.
boy:i was busy jan.girl:i know everything,dont try to make me fool.
tum us priti ke sath the na?boy:just shatup.if you cant trust me
to is rishte ko rakhne ka koi matlab nahi hain.girl:mujhe vi
koi shaukh nahi hain tumhare sathe rehneka.ja rahi hoo main,kavi
mujhe apna shakal vi nahi dikhana.boy:mujhe vi koi shaukh nahi
tumhara shakal dekhneka.just go from here.

ram was laughing but when priya looks at him he stops laughsing.priya:
pata nahi log aisa kiyu karte hain.ram:kya karte hain?priya:wohi
jo avi ye log kar rahe the.ram:jhagra?usme kya bari bat hain,ye to
tum har roj karti ho.priya:very funny!!!main uski bat nahi kar rahi
hoon.mujhe aisa lagta hain ke sabke liye koi na koi banayi gayi hain
to phir kiyu ye log aise ek doosre ka time pass karte hain.aise galati
karte rehte hain.ram:aisa nahi hota hain,sabko apna partner dhundna
parta hain.nahito kuch pane ki jaga kuch aur hi mil jata hain.priya:
Mr. Kapoor main janti hoon main apki choice kavi nahi thi aur ho vi
nahi sakti...to ap ye bat clearly kehe sakhte the mujhe.ram:priya
you are taking me wrong,main apni bat nahi kar raha tha.priya:apki
jaisa jenious shayed nahi hoon lekin na-samajh vi nahi hoon.shadi se
pehlese lekar aj tak ye bat ap mujhe bahut bar keh chuke hain.i can
remember it,bacha nahi hoon main.i have no any demand from you so
you can relax,Mr. Kapoor.main car me wait karti hoon,ap khana khake
ajana.

priya left the place with crying.ram couldn't realise anything but
he feels that pain in his heart...here in the car for the first
time priya is also starts feeling a strange pain in her heart.ram
thinks...kavi kavi aisa kyun hota hain hum bolte kuch aur hain
aur samne wala samajhta kuch aur hain...!?!?!in the same time priya
thinks...kavi kavi aisa kyun hota hain hum jovi chahtehe hume
usse pura ultahi milta hain...aur us chees ko agar apna banane
jao to sirf dard hi milta hai...!!!


Edited by riya01maddy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
👏👏 keep writing yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
nice update... thnks...
wating for your next update...
last dialogues of RaYa... were gr8... seems there heart has accepted each other... its only they need to realise it... hey after reading your update specially last dialogues following lines came to mind...
hope you like it... as its 1st time i'm writting something... pls forgive me if its too stupid...
chaha tha humne jindagi se...
miley koi aisa jisse hum keh sake aapna...
ek arsa bit gaya...
kii humne jindagi se kuch aur maanga...
apni har dua...
mai hai bus usko chaha
phir ek waqt aaya
jab iss aas ka daman haath se chutne laga...
laga kii yeh to hai ek sapna
jiska pura hona khud ek sapna sa laga...
tab jindagi ne milaya
uss se jo mere khawabo se tha bilkul juda...
tab bhi humne
haskar jindagi ke iss fasele ko apnaya...
socha shayaad yehi tha...
meri aas ka sira jo chhutne laga tha...
par iss soch ne bhi saath na diya...
tab yeh maan hi liya kii jindagi hai bewaafa...
phir bhi humne...
isse samjhote ka naam dekar aapnaya...
najaane is jindagi se
kitne baar hum hue rusava...
har pal... isse bewaffa hi jaana
par kaun jaane kii samay mai kya hai chhupa...
lekin aaj hai jaana... jisse hum samaj rehe the...
bewafai... usi mai tha jindagi ka sabse bada tohfa...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
amazing simply amazing... wonderful... 👍🏼😍 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
@fan_forever... amazing... wonderfulll... 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
wow amazing just awesome..its so heart throbbing, i just loved so emotional n so real.. d last part was just fantastic..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
loved the update especially the last dialogues
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88



tnx for liking this part...i hope you also like the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: shamma92

nice update...thanks




hey shamma...nice see your comment and tnx for liking this
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Anamika163

👏👏 keep writing yaar




tnx dear...i will update next part asap hope you will like that also

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