OS - broken promises - Page 2

Originally posted by: preety_219

This is so much painful yet beautiful OS.U made me emotional.

I wish & pray these type of tragedy never happens in anyone's life.Hope this violence is stopped.

This is a real nice story ,hope the next one u comeup with will have happey moments.😊

Ria,

Originally posted by: poetic

Ria,

Such a beautiful OS. Brought tears to my eyes. And also the memory of the blast. Yet again. And the loss of so many innocent lives. Destruction of so many families and yet lives go on for everybody.

True, I don't want to visualise anything like this now for Ram and Priya or theur future life, since they both deserve so much happiness.

But I will be looking forward to another gem from you soon.

😊

this is really a heart touching OS...i'm feeling so sad for the couple now.But one thing i must say your writing is superb i thats why we all are so touched with it

wish they will see some freshness in your next part and thank you for pm also

Originally posted by: riya01maddy

this is really a heart touching OS...i'm feeling so sad for the couple now.But one thing i must say your writing is superb i thats why we all are so touched with it

wish they will see some freshness in your next part and thank you for pm also

Originally posted by: Bolly*_Crazed

Love it !

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Very well written Ria!!

An incredibly emotional and thought provoking piece of writing!!

Thanks for the PM...😊

Originally posted by: nishi755

so beautiful os