Raya cute moments*A COMEDY OF ERRORS*Pg.45 (01.01) - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ... thanks a lot for sharing ya ...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey shamma glad u read all the updates and replied too next one asap hope u keep enjoying and some day highlight the whole update lol!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi jalebibai glad u read all the updates and replied too next one asap hope u keep enjoying it dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome, Ashima! Your writing is so good, I can picture Ram and Priya enacting the scene!
Can someone tell Ekta to hire this girl or better still give her a new love story to write😊
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A little later..Its evening ram peeps out of his room to find the hall empty..relieved he walks down the stairs and quickly making his way across the room and into the car..he was more than glad that no one stopped him in between! Its a scene at the restaurant..ram brings the car to a halt and parking it he walks into the restaurant frowning at the thought of priya making it late there..but as he enters he finds priya already waiting there for him! Balh track plays in bg as ram walks upto priya feeling a little embarassed that he Underestimated her lol exchanging a nervous hi the two get seated face to face and an awkward silence falls between them..breaking which priya says at last-kya hua..aapne itni jaldi mein bulaya..RAM Looks up at priya and begins-humare ghar ek bahot ajeeb sa choreographer aaya hai jo chahta hai ki sangeet mein main aur tum perform karey..A SHOCKED PRIYA STANDS UP SAYING-WHATT?..RAM WAS AMUSED At how priya's reaction was just like his but he was too tensed to grin and as priya sits back as she notices the other diners staring at them ram says-Mera bhi bilkul same reaction tha..its not about dancing with u..main toh dance hii nahin karna chahta..i mean..its my worst nightmare..PRIYA WAS finding it hard to curtail her amusement at how ram was reffering to his inability to dance..age and his health both were against it and priya replies-aap theek keh rahey hain Mr. Kapoor par ab kya karein?..RAM SAYS-kuch na kuch plan toh banaana padega! PRIYA snaps back-oh please Mr. Kapoor..last time jab humney plan banaya tha toh u ende d up proposing to me!..(priya finds ram gaping at her and says)..i mean atleast for the world..aap..aap chinta matt kariye..main kuch sochti hoon..BALH TUNE PLAYS as ram looks at priya gratefully and says a thanks heaving a sigh of relief..and as the two reach the parking..the two stand silent..ram offers priya to drop her back home to which she agrees after some insistence.. as the two sit in car ram drives priya smiles to herself stealing a glance at ram making her plan
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really nice meeting that was again they r making plans...you know what is going to be happen...but at-least first meet without any fight.Nice update 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update Ashima!! Yayy they met and had the their first date and that too without any arguments!! 👏 Can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal

Hey shamma glad u read all the updates and replied too next one asap hope u keep enjoying and some day highlight the whole update lol!


Hehe Ashima...shaadi ki baad when we have a really romantic scene, tab pura highlight karunga!! 😳 😳 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG
Loveee your idea.
Please contineee😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey trinket i am so overwhelmed yet humbled by ur words! It is my dream to be a script writer for ekta but aisi kismet kahan anyways hope my work lives upto ur expectation dear!

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