OS: A night to remember - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Shilpi.. aawesome as always.. though have to say commenting on your beautiful write ups for Dutta was a special privilege..reading this OS, just drove hom ethe point with finality that Tasha will no longer b there for us na? heart breaking.. sorry, aaj mera mood hi aisa hain!
anyway, coming to this part.. i could see all your trademark ways in this OS..and i have to admit that though I havent watched even a single epi of this show, i could visualise Ram so vry well, probably cos he is a v good actor,plus your descriptions and mannerisms for Ram are so genuinely real..a very light scene tha..like a halki si breeze..i was ROFL reading Ram's thoughts every time Gauahar came close to him..though the python takes the cake!! though the dishes Gauahr ordered were just out of this world dear.. hahaha..it was so good to see theose conspiratory glances Ram and Priya shared..like in cahoots with each other..that duffer VArun did not drop her?! do u know what..i liked the fact you ended on such a note..left it to our imagination on how they might meet, or what might have happened if he had given her a lift.. lekin hulchul toh hui hai ram ke mann mein..
i dont think i can invest anymore emotions in any Indian sopas now after our collective experience recently..i will be happy to just read your stories and conjure up my own Ram and Priya through your words.. once burnt twice shy na..
great going..still have a lump in my throat thinking no more tasha from Rimpi..chalo.. it was great reading.. and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Shilpita, it was really a treat to read the OS. Absolutely lovely and mouth-watering treat. Now leaving me yearning for more.
I wish the meeting at the restaurant would have been like this only .. would have been a treat to watch.
BTW, ChamCham powder ... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Can't stop laughing now!
AM waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shilpita like always awesome OS dear
love it
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the awesome OS Shilpita😊... I enjoyed this version more.

Both Ram and Priya make a down to earth but cute couple.

Python and Gauhar ...I like this analogy 😆. Varun and G so deserve each other.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so nice os well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great OS Shilpita, I enjoyed it a lot!!
Really cute and subtle chemistry between Ram and Priya.
Hope to see more OS's from you!!!!
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shilpi - so glad to see know names if not "faces" here on this forum. I'm still not over the LTL disaster - missing Mishal like crazy - our Dutta bhao...
...coming back to this OS - i saw your name here and quickly darted to read your take on the dinner date...caught up with the reruns on the weekend - loved the way you got them to meet, even though in the serial it will be a while till they meet...
continue writing... and please complete Imperfect Perfections...anxious to know what happens next...ciao
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it!!! Can't wait to read more of your OS'! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice!! Pls continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Only u can come up with such author's note😆.

Loved this OS & agree with Vandu,could see ur special touches thruout the story👍🏼
Ram comparing Gauhar with python,😆arre yaar jyada kuch nahi toh kum se kum python ki reputation ka toh khayal rakhna tha😆
I seriously don't understand this blind date type scenario 😕 & Priya's friends ,seriously girls,can u not come up with some better reasons to excuse urself,do u have to make it so obvious ,much to the discomfort of Priya.😆
This Varun was such thanda character & priya is so full of life,loved her line about love being something that can happen to anyone at any point of life.👍🏼 & Varun's answer to this was even rukha just like him.
But,i have to admit just like varun even i am bit uncomfortable in sharing my table with someone unknown.I feel like invasion of my & their privacies respectively.
Poor Ram,was so scared of Gauhar that got instantly ready to share,socha hoga chalo ye ladki kum se kum aur logon ke samne to decency batayegi,meri izzat safe rahegi🤣
Ram actually noticed Priya's non-reaction to varun's ogling,must have left him thinking how come this lady is diffrent from usual bunch.
The contrast in menus ordered by both -Priya & Gauhar says a lot about their personalities.
Kya baat hai abhi toh jan -pehchan bhi nahi hui & Ram ordered the same food like Priya,abhi se ye haal hai then what will happen after they will fall in love😆.I was suddenly reminded of Ram carrying those veg. bags & walking happily behind Priya,typical husband charcteristic,speaking from experience😉😆
OMG Shilpi -CHAMCHAM washing Powder🤣
Arre yaar, tune itni mouth-watering sweet ko itna jhaagwala bana diya😆
Both Varun & Gauhar are such shallow & superficial people.😕
Ek taraf woh dono aur dusri tarf hamare would-be love-birds.Ram actually asked her about food,i was like why do u care whether she liked or not😉
Finally that idiot left her alone & on the other hand ,like a gentleman despite hating every sec. in Gauhar's company ,Ram was going to drop her off safely to her home.
He felt something for her ,KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI Rambabu aap bahut jald samjhoge😆
I was thinking what Priya must have felt about this meet,& that's when i realised ur badmaashi to leave everything for my imagination.
Enjoyed reading this😊 & i am sure Ekta mata will give u enough situations to write such beautiful OS.

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