Fanfic My Dil goes Hmmm SA UPDT Chap 3A on pg 10!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: BROOKE
yeah why not . this is da first ff of aasta and shub .. pls pls continue !!!

Its really exciting right! When I came to the forum and so no Fafic I thought I will do 1 so Here we are!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: 26javey26
plz cont.

Thanks! I will Continue!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hey Guys! I know you are excited and I will post Tomorrow Ok!!!! Thanks for your replies! It really means a lot to me. Please keep replying! 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

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ok can't wait for the first part

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Posted: 17 years ago

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ooo pleejjj do cont jaldii reeee 22 xciteddd 😳 😳 snce dis is first fanfic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

pls hurry..i dont have the pactients to wait
im dying to read the first part
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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: rkath
ok can't wait for the first part

Thanks! The part will be posted in few hours!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: animateash
ooo pleejjj do cont jaldii reeee 22 xciteddd 😳 😳 snce dis is first fanfic

I m trying my best sorry! Thanks for telling me u like the fanfic.😉

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@desi344

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: neh91
pls hurry..i dont have the pactients to wait
im dying to read the first part
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I am going to post it now! Thanks for reply1!😊

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@desi344

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Chapter 1A

We see a huge mansion. We go through a door we see a women in sari setting the breakfast table. We see her face its none other then Divya Nanda. She is the popular business women. She handles and balance her family and business together. She had been widowed when her children were barely 10 years old. From then she never married again. Her husband had suicided because he had no money and a lot of loans. She supported her children without any help and now USA's richest lady. She cares a lot for her children Kavya and Aastha. She moved from India and came to live in USA to make her children out of sorrow. We then see her calling someone " Kavya Beta are you ready yet and check on Aastha, beta" says Divya. We then see a guy coming downstairs.We see his tattoo, steel chain and glasses. We then see his face its none other then Kavya Nanda. Kavya cares a lot about her mother and sister. He was 10 when his dad suicided due to loans. He loves his mother and sister more than his life. He is the coolest punk in his college. "Good Morning, Mum" says Kavya. "Beta is Aastha up yet" asks Diya. " I will go check on her" assures Kavya. Kavya goes to a room. We see the room . It is pink. It is decorated with handsome punks and rock bands. " Come on AAs get up" says Kavya. " Let me sleep " says the girl. Kavya then gets an idea. he goes to the desk and brings out a cold jug water and splashes on the girl. The girl gets up and we see her face. Its none other then Aastha. Aastha cares a lot for her brother and mother. She is the coolest girl in the college. All the boys drool over her. She is known as Aas or Pinks. She adores pink. She hates Aastha as she thinks its a wierd name. She then gets up from bed and starts running after her brother. " you?!?!?" says Aastha. "I had to do that you wont get up" says Kavya." Be more nicer Kavya!" says Aastha." I need to get ready" says Aastha. " I am at breakfast table come soon!" says Kavya leaving. Aastha and Kavya love going to otheer countries and having fun. They have a lot in common. They both hate India as it reminds them of there sorrow. Whenever the hear India they began to cry. They remember seeing there dad hanged to the fan.Will they ever be able to like India again? Will they get over there sorrow? Will they find someone who will change there lives? Find out after the following parts!

Guys, I m sorry this part is small.
I am going to divide this part in to A & B.
I have a lot of work thats why I am sorry. Please
reply if you like my work. Sorry
you guys had to wait.

Edited by desi344 - 17 years ago

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