Fanfic My Dil goes Hmmm SA UPDT Chap 3A on pg 10!

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alicia

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Really nice part dii! Cant wait for next!

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hy gud attempttt do rite fast 😳

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Originally posted by: animateash
hy gud attempttt do rite fast 😳

Thanks!

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Nehal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

really nice job...pls keep writting ...and pls do it asap cant live without reading 👏

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hey rite fasttt d next part eager 2 readdd 😳 😳

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hi!!

superb update!!!

plz continue soon.............

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Posted: 17 years ago

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thiz wat alwayz happens wen the fanfic is really nice and wen people want to read it...the writer always have some imporatant work coming up...no offense but tats wat I have noticed.....srry to those who didnt likewat I wrote 😭

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plz write soon were all waitting 😭

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Alicia

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Chapter 1B

As Aastha came down, Divya smiled at her princess. " Good Morning Aastha!" said Divya with a smile. " Mom.... Don't call me with that name! You can say Pinks or Aas! I hate Aastha" replies Aastha. " I know beta! You have been saying that for past 5 years. You say that line everytime I call you Aastha!" says Divya buttering her daughters bread. Kavya lets out a small smile." But you still keep on saying Aastha!" replies Aastha. "Oh Well!" says Divya. Aastha then takes a peek at the watch and shouts " Oh No Bro! We are late! C'mon its the 1st day of colledge. Aasthat eats the bread her mother buttered and hurrys out with her car keys while Kavya does the same. They both go to there own cars. We then see 2 cars parked by each other. They are both very different. The 1st one is the colour red . It is a very cool car. It is Fort Edge Suv. Next one is Pink. Its model is Honda Civic 2.2. They both are very different. Kavya and Aasta get in to there cars and quickly drive to there college. Then we see a college. Its name is " St. Johns College". It is the best college in the whole USA. There are less people come he. Mostly rich people go to this college. When the both cars arrive at the college. Everything suddenly stops, People have there eyes on the 2 cars. They all know who it is. "Its Pinks and Kavya! Wow they are very cool" shouts a guy with glasses.When Kavya and Aastha park there cars and get out of the car they see people staring at them. They look at the crowd and think "Not again!". This always happened whenever they came to college. People would want to see them. They then go to there friends. They have 5 best friends in the world. They are Anjali, Disha, Raj , Rohan, Anita . There gang is made up of 7 best friends. They meet each other. " So whats up?" asks Anita. " Right now there is sky above us" says Kavya while laughing. " Very funny" says Anjali rolling her eves. They all laugh except for Anjali. Just then the bell rings. "Lets go to our Biology class or that bald man is going to kill us" states Rohan. They all agree. The gang promised each other that they will be together in every subject. They will never part. So when the gang gets to the class. Anjali, Aastha and Disha sit in the front row and Kavya,Rohan, and Raj sit at behind. Then the teacher takes the attedance. But when last name is said no one answers. Just after second there is a noise on the door. We see a guy . He is heavily breathing because it seems like he has ran. He then catches his breath and says " Here!". Its none other than Shubh Ranawat.

Hey guys I wrote a long part because I know I didn't post for days. So I wanted to make it up to you. The promo is going to be posted tomorrow and Sorry for making you wait for update its just I have been really busy with all the work! 😉

Edited by desi344 - 17 years ago