FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32! - Page 18

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Posted: 16 years ago
Recap:
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aanya leaves smirking...............😉
Rana: i think shes right.. i shdnt have left her.......she never siad anything..i
shd go apologizwe..and ask her to be mine again..........


Aanya: hello bhaiya??
Shubh: haan bol.........
Aanya: kaam hogaya.........
Shubh: thnkyou so much.shes gonna be so happy!!!!!!11
Aastha: who is gonna be so happy??
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Shubh turns around shocked........
Aastha: shubh???
Shubh: um...woh..... aanya. aanya kush hogi....
Aastha:....oh.......par kyun.....??
Shubh: woh.um........ gift hai...........
Aastha: ( thibks) toh mera shaq sahi tha...shubh and aanya...
Shubh: aastha...kaha khogayi??
Aastha: weoh..kuch nahi.............
( thinks) mein itna .... dukhi kyun hoon??/ shubh kissise opyaar kartha
hai...toh mein kyun dihki hoon???

Aastha's Room:
The phne rings........
Aastha goes to see who it is....
UNKNOWN

Aastha: unknown???? hmm....
Aastha: hello??
Rana: aastha???
Aastha: tumahri intne himmat ki tum meri sat dhoka dek kar phone kar re ho???
Rana: plz aastha meri baath suno.......plz mein bohut gaalat tha..im really sorry......
Aastha: no rana..i cant trust u anymore.plz i dont.
Rana: aastha plz.mujhe ek aur moka dedo...plz aastha.i beg u........😲😆
Aastha: sirf ek moka.......
Rana: thankyou so much aastha......
Aastha shuts the phone even before rana is finished talking....
Aastha: kyun??? why did i do that??

kyun lagata hai ki jaise kuch galat hora he??jaise ki koi train chute re hai???
( thats because it is............😆)
next morning:

Astha tells everyone at the table that she and rana are back together
Shubh chokes on, his food.evryone luks at him
Shubh: what ? cant a guy choke on food???
Evryone leaves the table, so does shubh.....
when aanya is about to leave aastha tells her to see her in her room......
Aastha: Aanya, can u come with me to my room??
Aanya: k, sure.........
they go into the room.

Aanya: kya hai??
Aastha: tell me..
Aanya: what????
Aastha: as if u dont know.u and shubh...
Aanya: woah..dont even think about that........ i wouldnt be calling him bhaiya...
.and plus he loves........
Aastha: he loves????
Aanya: umm........
Aastha: tell me......
moment of silence...
Aanya: YOU!
aastha stands there shocked.....
Aastha: what r u saying?? are u out of ur mind???
Aanya: no im not.. cant u see he loves u?? since the day he saw u he fell in love with u
he has helped u so many times... he also tried to propose to u...
Aastha: he tried to propse to me???????/
Aanay: yes.... he had a ring, and a letter... but he could never give it to u.. cuz that day u
said u were getting married to that freak and then he left for india.........
Aastha fell to the floor......
Aanya tells her evrything.........
Aanya: aastha he really loves u, he never said anything because of ur happiness..........
Aastha walks out of the room.... not saying anything.....
AAstha goes to her room and goes to the balcony.... she strts remebering all
the times with shubh...

how they met, the car moment, there first eyelock, there dance together.......

Afternoon:
Rana comes to the door....
* ding dong*.............😆
Deepa opens the door......
Rana: hell.....
Deepa; i know.... come in.....
Rana( thinks) wierd ???
Rana sits in the living room sofa... he luks at all the photos.......
Aanya stays in her room... cuz if she comes out shell be caught.....
Deepa goes to Aastha's room....
Deepa: aastha, woh......
Aastha walks out of the room.... teary......
Deepa shrugs..a nd goes to see if shubh was in his room..... he was....
Deepa: bhaiu?? woh freak aya hai.....
Shubh: shut up..
Deepa leaves...

Aastha is downstairs saitting NEAR, not next to, rana....
Rana is talking and talking and talikng , while aastha is lost in her thoughts.....
" thats it.... i cant listen to this freak... i luv SHUBH!!!!!!......."( thinks)
Aastha: rana, i got a surprise for u.... come outside to the lawn.........
Aastha gets madhav kaka to call everyone outside..........
OUTSIDE:
Aastha: okay...today ive realized who i love...today i will express my love......
Shubh strts to leave.......
Aastha: shubh, where u going??
Shubh stps for 1 minute, and turns around, looking down...
Aastha: i ...............LOVE........................................................SHUBH!!!!!!!!
Rana luks digusted.......
SHubh luks up shocked...........


im so sorry im so busy.school work is soo tiring........

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i know im very mean...........😈...............................😆



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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwww....awesome update...update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzz..i cnt wait!
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww so cute made my bad love u for that n i understand u hav schhol work trust me i hate hmw myself but still try to update soon when ur done with ur hmw =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sejal719

aww so cute made my bad love u for that n i understand u hav schhol work trust me i hate hmw myself but still try to update soon when ur done with ur hmw =)



aw..glad u liked it.oh adn thx for understanding...i hate hmw!😡...........lolz😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
great ff. please continue soon,and can you pm me when you update?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monadarling2628

great ff. please continue soon,and can you pm me when you update?



thx.kk i will........😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy...
tnis is the first time i am readin ur ff.. and i must say... it rocks!!!
i have been very eager to see an ff in this forum... i even asked if i cud start one but no one replied...😭
but thanx to u i mite even start one now...
lol...
great work... continue soooon

~~Ss0j
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey u encouraged me enuff to post a part of my other ff in which shubh n aastha is ther... wil cont with other cute parts of shubh n aastha if i see ppl r intrested...

if u hav tym... do read.. the topic i started jus now...

heres the link....

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/babul-ka-aangann-chootey-na/1053893/a-bit-of-an-ff

thanxxxx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: giggling gurl

heyyy...
tnis is the first time i am readin ur ff.. and i must say... it rocks!!!
i have been very eager to see an ff in this forum... i even asked if i cud start one but no one replied...😭
but thanx to u i mite even start one now...
lol...
great work... continue soooon

~~Ss0j



thx.yeah u shuld start one.......... thx again!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: giggling gurl

hey u encouraged me enuff to post a part of my other ff in which shubh n aastha is ther... wil cont with other cute parts of shubh n aastha if i see ppl r intrested...

if u hav tym... do read.. the topic i started jus now...

heres the link....

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/babul-ka-aangann-chootey-na/1053893/a-bit-of-an-ff

thanxxxx




will definetley check out. i bet its wonderful..........

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