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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Really what a beautiful song, it really does suit ur ff. I love d girl that sang d song too. She is really talented.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
lovely story!! thanks for the pm & waiting to read the next part!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Great story! Can't wait for the next part! 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'll update the new part by today evening


and yes maybe the next part by sunday morning just to make this weekend seem shorter and easier to bear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chalo tum log bhi kya yaad karoghe so here is the 6th part

6th PART

THAT NIGHT

Shravan was troubled

He had not at all liked the way Rahul had treated Sanchi and he himself had done next to nothing to help her

She was humiliated in front of him and that also for no cause as well as had gotten hurt and then also because Rahul was driving at full speed

But he hadn't said a word against Rahul, he had let himself be led away while the poor girl was hurt by the car as well as the words

He couldn't sleep, all his night he kept getting vision of Sanchi getting up painfully from the ground

He could also imagine tears in her eyes

Fitfull sleep and then he woke up at 2 in the night, he had dreamed again of Sanchi and todays happening and the last being that he was holding Sanchi by her waist in the temple as it happened in the temple

Shravan: oh God yeh kya tha mujhe ab us ladki ke sapne bhi aane lage, kya hua hamare bich aaj, do din mein itni baar main use mil chukka hun, aakhir mujhe kya ho gaya hai main baar uske bare mein kyun soch raha hun (why am I dreaming of this girl, what happened between us at the temple , in two days I have met her so many times , why am I thinking so much about her)

Shyad isliye kyunki mujhe pata hai ki aaj uske sath jo hua galat hua aur maine uske bare mein kuch nahi kiya (maybe because I know whatever happened today shouldn't have happened )

Use chot lag gayi hogi aur main bas dekhta reh gaya(she got hurt and I couldn't even help her)

Thinking like this he went to the kitchen to get water

As he was taking water out of the fridge he heard his Dadi's room door being opened, he went and checked to see his Dadi standing there ,

Shravan : Dadi kya hua aap itni raat kyun jag gaye?(grandmother why are you awake so late at night)

Dadi : tum bhi toh jag rahe ho beta , maine toh ek sapna dekha aur phir usi ko dekh ke uth gayi( you are also awake why? I just saw a dream that's why I woke up)

Shravan: daravana tha kya?(was it a night mare)

Dadi : nahi beta , accha sapna tha , puchega nahi kya tha?(no it was a very good dream , ask me what was it about)

Shravan : bataoghi khud hi mujhe , main janta hun, chaliye baithye aur bataiye (whether I'll ask or not you'll tell me right,lets sit and talk)

Dadi: maine dekha ki teri shadi ho rahi hai , bade dhoom dham se, bahut khush hai tu, (I saw that you were getting married )

Shravan: bas bas dadi aage mat kaho , main aur shadi , mujhe nahi karni shadi vadi, main nahi bandhna chahata sari umar ke liye kisi ke sath, accha hai aap is sapne ko bhul jao(enough grandmom you know I don't want to get married , it won't happen , you better forget this dream)

Dadi: toh kya tu kabhi shadi nahi karega? Sar umar akela rahega? Tujhe nahi lagta teri zindagi khali khali hai ki tujhe bhi koi chaiye tere har khushi aur dukh baatne ke liye( you won't ever marry , don't you tink your life is a little empty , everyone needs a special person to share their happiness and sorrows)

Shravan smiling: aap ho na meri Dadi(you are there for me )

Dadi: chal hat !!!!!!!! accha yeh bata tu kyun itni der raat jaga hai , tujhe kya hua……..maine apni baat toh bata di ab tu bata( go away, ok now tell me whats keeping you awake so late at night)

Shravan who was smiling suddenly stopped smiling and then said: Dadi mujhse ek galti ho gayi jisse kisi ko chot pahunchi hai( I made a grave mistake grandmother)

Dadi: kya kiya tune ? kisko chot pahunchayi, kya hua khul ke bata(what did you do, whom did you hurt)

Shravan then told her everything

Dadi: yeh tune bahut bura kiya beta , us phool se bacchi ko itna keh gaya Rahul aur tu chup raha , aur use chot lagi hogi ,tune uski bilkul bhi madad nahi ki, mujhe tujhse yeh aasha nahi thi….aisa kaise hone diya tumne Shravan( that very bad Shravan ,I did not expect this from you)

Shravan: dadi pata nahi kyun aaj main chup reh gaya aur ab mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai Sanchi ke bare mein soch soch ke main kaise use sorry bolun Dadi , aur kya karun main?(I don't know why I did that , how should I say sorry to her)

Dadi: tumne galti ki hai tumhi sudharoghe , khud socho. Ab main chali sone tub hi ja aur soch( you should repent your own mistakes)

Shravan also started leaving the room when suddenly

Dadi: SHRAVAN

Shravan: han dadi (yes)

Dadi : tum mujhse poochoghe nahi ki maine kiske sath tumhari shadi hote dekhi(she was smiling in a very mysterious way)(won't you ask about the girl you were getting married to)

Shravan: accha aapne ladki ka bhi chera dekha , par mujhe koi interest nahi sapna tha Dadi bhul jao use( so you saw the girl's face in your dream too, no I don't want to know)

As he turned his heart went Dhak Dhak

Shravan: KAUN THI WHO DADI?(who was she dadi)

Dadi: she turned and said- tum khud jaan jaoghe beta mujhe toh ishara mil gaya hai , tumhe bhi mil jayegha(you'll know yourself soon child)

Shravan : Dadi Dadi

Off yeh ab kuch nahi batayenghi, jaane kise dekh lia hai, kaun hai who, aur isse pehle toh Dadi ko meri shadi ke sapne nahi aaye , phir achanak se kyun(now she'll never tell , i wonder who she saw ...why is she seeing my marriage in her dreams now?)

God: that's because my dumbo child your grandmother has realized before you who is your soulmate so she knows and I don't know how much effort I'll have to put up to make you two realize that for youself.hmm this story is going to take a mighty long time to come to track lets see Mr Shravan how you say sorry to Sanchi , it all depends upon that.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
awesome ankita,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

its so beautiful,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
ah...dear Ankita...ur story is shaping up very nicely......i love this matured n responsible Shravan....no need to say about Dadi n God....lovely characters...keep up the good work girl!!! thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Gr8 update...i always loved dadi and her bittu relation. Loved the way god called shravan his 'dumbo child' lovely writing ankita...cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Hey Ankita... Its superb.... hope this weekend will end soon with u r ffs and precap of BHPH...

Thanx a lot...
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey ankita.. it was awesum..... thanx for the p.m..

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