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It was 2 a.m early morning. Very carefully Shravan turned the key and let himself into the room.. Sachi was in bed, deep asleep. Shravan wanted to thank her for making his date with Tara so beautiful . He took off his jacket and knelt down beside Sachi and wanted to wake her up . But seeing her in deep slumber , he decided not to , He switched off the bedside lamp . The room was engulfed with darkness for an instance as his eyes took time to get adjusted . Gradually moonlight lit up the rooom through the light airy curtains of the window. Shravan once again looked at Sachi. The moonlight lit her face with a silver glow. Her long hair encircled her face and her hands were carelessly folded over the blanket . She looked pure and beautiful. Shravan could not take his eyes off her. He got up and sat on the bed beside her and adjusted a strand of hair which was on her forehead. He noticed the mark of dried tears on her cheeks and wondered why she was crying.
Suddenly he felt an urge to hold her very close and say "Thank YOU dear for giving me this wonderful night. "
He took out a single rose from his trouser pocket and quietly put it beside Sachis pillow .
He got up , undressed and lay down on his side of the bed . Soon he was deep alsleep.
Both of them have forgotten to make that row of little cusions in between .


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Posted: 15 years ago
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DARN SUNAINA... You're awesome at this! You've written an amazing and absolutely mind-blowing sequence here. I hope this happens in real (sigh)...

Hey, just like others are doing.. maybe you should start writing a BHPH track of your own in this forum (for readers like me)!!!! I bet you'll be a great hit... if you're interested in something like that.

Anyway, thanks for sharing this with us dear!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! absolutely loved it !!!! pls continue if you can

i could just imagine everything, their room, their expressions, the night..........lollllllllllllll


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Posted: 15 years ago
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yea that was very beautiful....i support u to write more like this.....lets see if this really happens tonight??😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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As the first rays of sunlight caressed Sachi's eyelids she moved her head and wanted to change side.

She could not.

She was captive. She opened her eyes to find out what held her. To her surprise, she found that she is cuddled in Shravan's arms. Without the rows of cushion separating them, each of them have drifted towards the other in their sleep.

Sachi's lips curved in a smile. She snuggled a little more into the embrace and brushed her nose slightly over Shravan's chest .

"Uhmmm"

She liked it .She liked the smell on his body.

"Kaash - it remains like this every morning - forever "

Sachi sighed and looked up towards Shravan's face.

How innocent he looked !

"Kaun sochega , inke dimmag mein kidnap jaisa ajeeb plan pakte hai"

Shravan started to murmur something .

"Oh no! aap aur ekbar 'I love youTara' nahin bolenge. Mera ajj ka din hi bekaar ho jaega."

"Sachi - mujhe abhi nahin uthna." Shravan grumbled and turned to the other side.

Free from his embrace and happy that Shravan has uttered her name , Sachi sat up and looked around.

Then she spotted the solitary rose bud beside her pillow

She picked it up and held near her nose to breathe in the fragrance. At that moment she felt that the fragrance respresented Shravans love for her and she wanted to take all of it . She did not want to share him with any one.

Edited by sunaina02 - 15 years ago
bsingapury thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmmmmmmmmm
in dream land....already........want some more because don't want to come back........
Shipra_S thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Sunaina...that's awesome girl!!!!😛......Please do continue if you wish to.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhh..................so beautiful.....kaash is an excellent topic sunaina....n story makes us so wistful
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sunaina its awsom,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

plz contnue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sunaina i loved ur post..
"kaash" the original serial aisa hota 😊
keep going with ur FF.. good job!!
Edited by swethavaradh - 15 years ago

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