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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanxx for the pm.
Awesomeeeeeee update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...thx for the pm
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Originally posted by: sunshiine21

I reallly hope the judge agree!! I can't wait for the next part... Love it, well written Thanks for the PM! x


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Posted: 14 years ago
really appreciate for your update thanks any way for pm pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh thank u for update
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Next episode will be in next 30 min....😉
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I can't wait for it as usual. Lol
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Just give me for 10-15 min
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Posted: 14 years ago

Episode 57:-

It start with shravan in office working and looking at saanchi ….

Shravan thought for a moment and he called saanchi to come to his cabin…

Saanchi comes to his cabin…

Saanchi:-Haa shravanjee Kya kaam tha…

Shravan:- Nothing important…

Saanchi:- Okay Then I am leaving… I have work to do…

Shravan:- wait a min… I am having headache… will u do me a favour…

Saanchi:- what

Shravan:- can you get me some painkillers and coffee( if possible)

Saanchi:- okay I will tell someone to bring it for you….

Shravan:- why r u talking so rough…. I could have told someone else too… But I thought it will be great if you stay here so that I can talk to you ...

Saanchi:-Abb kya baat karni hai….

Shravan:- Just like that…. Sit here….

Saanchi sits after lil hesitation…

Saanchi is quiet….

Shravan:- yeah I wanna ask what shreya likes …Please advise what should I gift to her….

Saanchi:- you know shreya…

Shravan:- I know but I don't know what she likes…. Infact I don't know about you also….

Saanchi:- Hmm Yeah how will know about me … You never had time for me…..

Shravan:- I am sorry for it…

Saanchi:- anyway leave it… It was past… Shreya is passionate about fashion designing and modeling…

Shravan:- Thanx… I need one more help…

Saanchi:- what now…

Shravan:- Moreover you know that I am quite bad in shopping…. Earlier you use to do shopping for me… I was thinking if You can with me for shopping and help me in selecting gift for shreya… Please don't say no./…

Saanchi:- I will think…

Shravan:- whats need to think… We will go tomorrow during lunchtime….

Saanchi:- If Tara comes then she will feel bad and say something.,,.

Shravan:- Don't worry about her… Main Hoon Naa … Let her say….

Saanchi:- okay…

Shravan:- Thankyou saanchiji ( first time shravan addressed saanchi as saanchi jee…)

Saanchi:- Abb Jaao kya…. Ya anything else…

Shravan:-Nahi…

Saanchi leaves… shravan smiles ….

After office, shravan goes to meet shreya at caf….

Shreya was already waiting there……

Shreya:- Jiju aap phir late…. Aise saanchi nahi patne waali…

Shravan:- I am sorry… I got late from office…

Shreya:- okay jiju…

Shravan and shreya sits at one table…

Shreya:- Now tell me how can I help you…..

Shravan:- First tell me what you will take coffee or tea…

Shreya:- coffee… will be fine..

Shravan calls waiter and ask him to bring two coffee…

Shravan:- I stayed with her for 6 months still I don't know about her… what she likes and dislikes First tell me everything about her…

Shreya tells shravan everything about saanchi…

Shreya:- This is what I know about her… Rest of thing you have to find about her…

Shravan:- Hmm …… I know that she always tell you everything… Did she ever told about what she think about me… Especially I wanna know what she think now and what she do at home…

Shreya:- She has habit of hiding her emotions… As far as I know , she use to care and think about you before she got married…. In fact she created heart decoration and ballons before marriage to reply when you said I love to you in shop… But before she could show that you told her that you doesn't love her and love someone else…. She was quite hurt then… But still she use to care about you… But during 6 month period you hurt her which she never told me but I can read from her eyes whenever she use to come home….Nowadays she keeps quiet and doesn't say anything to anyone… Her smile seems to be faded nowadays…. She doesn't sleep also in night also and sometimes I have found her staring outside window…. She seems to be quite upset… It will not be easy to win her heart back…

Shravan eyes are filled with tears to hear this…

Shreya notice this…. and ask:- Jiju r u ok…

Shravan:- Hmm I am sorry…Don't worry I will bring back smile on your sis face and infact my wife…

Shreya :- I trust you jiju…. I have to leave now anyway its getting late….. For now its enough… If you need any help let me know…

Shravan:- Thank you….

Shreya:- r u coming to my marriage or not…

Shravan:- why will I not come… I will definitely come… How can I miss your wedding.,… you are my sis…

Shreya:- Don't forget to bring my gift…( in naughty tone)

Shravan:- don't worry you will get surprise gift…. Should I drop you….

Shreya:- No… I will go for now… All the best….jiju…

Shravan:- Thanx shreya

Shreya leaves.,……….. Meanwhile evil jiju was passing nearby …. He notice shreya and shravan meeting…. He hates shravan verymuch and thinking to take revenge…. He says to himself:- I will find out whats going on…………

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Posted: 14 years ago
Damn nice. I didn't know people could be so creative. I wish I could be this creative I my compositions.lol. Very very very nice

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