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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -De.De-

@ Forfriends and Gabriella - thank you guys for liking it. 🤗


our pleasure 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tami_

am too late 😛to comment even I start using them before but I have to say just 2 words and have nothing to comment




My Pleasure hunniebee. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys, thank you for liking my other stories so much, appreciating them a lot. Thank you. ❤️ Love your feedback. ❤️ I'm back with a drabble. It's a VivekTasha Drabble, Vivek centric.

She's Gone

Vivek is sitting on the sofa in his living room while trying to process everything that happened in past few hours. Tasha is dead! Gone, forever. Tears are flowing from his eyes like insane river; tonight he is not going to stop them from flowing. Just few hours ago she was alive, talking and now she will only live in their memories, his memory. Everyone is shocked, upset and grieving over her death but her death affected Vivek more than anyone else. When Tasha took her last breath it seemed like someone just pulled soul out of Vivek harshly and left his body without soul. He waited, for a miracle to happen. It's funny that as CID officer he was thinking about miracles but he badly wanted Tasha to open her eyes again, her heart to beat once again. He kept waiting and waiting but nothing happened. Abhijeet's comforting hand on Vivek's shoulder brought him back to reality, showing his hope for miracle is gone. Before he turns around to leave, he looks at her one last time. ACP sir has moved from her bedside, Vivek goes close to her near her bed. Slowly he moves his hand towards her and ever so gently touch her face and closes his eyes.

'I love you Tasha.'

His voice was barely above a whisper. Vivek don't even remember how he dragged his soulless body from hospital to his home he just remembers all this time his mind was filled with only one thing: Tasha. Never imagined this is how he will tell her what he wanted to tell her for so long.

'Why Tasha? Why did you leave me?'

Vivek doesn't remember for how long he sits in the same position, for how long he cries over her. He doesn't remember when his eyes close due to burning sensation. Her voice takes over his thoughts once again.

"If you are taking them as well Vivek, I'll not come with you."

"Don't worry we'll escape from there later on."

"Wow, this is amazing place, Vivek."

"You like it?"

"I love it."

"It's a new ice cream parlor in this town, everyone is praising it a lot these days, so I thought why not give you treat here."

"Thank you Vivek, I have been planning to come here for days."

After Vivek had promise Tasha an ice cream treat, ALONE, he brings Tasha to new, the most talked ice cream parlor in town. Tasha gets so happy to be there, she didn't know Vivek will bring her here. After they get comfortable, they place the order.

"I didn't know you were this serious about the treat."

Vivek looks at her with shock expressions.

"So you thought what?"

"No no, I meant, Wow... this is amazing place. You didn't have to do this. It was just..."

"I wanted to do this, I wanted to..."

Vivek stops in middle causing Tasha to get curious.

"What?"

"Erm, nothing... just that... I was serious about the treat, with us two only."

Tasha remembers her words and her cheeks starts to flush. She can't believe she had actually expressed her desire to Vivek of going for treat alone, in front of her seniors present there that day. Vivek enjoys her expressions, seeing her cheeks change their colours.

They sat there for 3 hours there and talked. 3 hours, without any interruption, they talked about anything and everything. Dreams, hopes, future, interests, family... it was so easy for them to keep talking to each other; it seemed there was so much to share with each other but less time. Her smile, Vivek loved her smile when she smiles a sparkle in her eyes appear, he loved that. He didn't know when was the last time he enjoyed so much or spoken this much to someone.

Vivek escorts her to her house after the treat, they bid goodbye and Vivek turns to leave when Tasha's voice stops him.

"Vivek.."

He turns around.

"Yes?"

"You know, we should so this more often."

Vivek feels his cheeks going red. Tasha sees this and laughs, she secretly loves his cheeks going red.

"I mean... the ice cream treat. I love ice cream and this parlor serves the best ice cream so... we should eat ice cream more... often."

Vivek smiles and looks at her face.

"Yea... we should."

She smiles. 'The sparkle in her eye', he smiles and leaves.

Vivek opens his eyes, looks around it's nearly morning now, he doesn't remember falling sleep. But only remembers seeing that sparkle in her eyes which would appear whenever she would smile. He is going to miss her smile and the sparkle forever. She is gone but she also has taken Vivek's soul and heart with her. No one could make him feel the same again ever. No one can be like Tasha.

Enjoy guys. :)
Edited by -De.De- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
WOW its nice love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its really good...keep writing such wonderful topics...👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Cho Chweeet! and touchy|thanks DD
Edited by adgadgadg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Truly love love loved it!😳Thanx so much for creating a scene between our dear officers🤗...plz do make more soon.Your creation seems so real that it should've been part of an episode and also it doesn't even feel like our two noble officers have left us after reading this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@tasharose:sooo true!
i read dd's works and never feel like reading some melodramatic ott script.its soo realistic!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just one word

BEAUTIFUL

loved loved ur creation very much
i always had desire to see vivek's emotional part which was never brought out in the show
but u brought it out with relation to tasha which added four moons to vivek's part
i too went in flashback remembering the tears of vivek at tasha's death time
i wanted such a scene there but thankfully didn't witnessed such coz i don't trust FW
ur creation and so touching and at a point got tear in my eyes
lovely work

Edited by roopalgupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ adgadgadg and @roopalgupta, right with you both there😉. I feel the same way too.
Edited by tasharose - 13 years ago

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