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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

chutki
sub ko reply do 10+ page ho jaen gay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: 55shobha
wow finally chap 1
rutheless and rude suket- u perfectly described it. amazing selection of words
bhavna father was a shock
pillow mara na bomb to nai 🤣
why he is 2 face man? its intresting ques
poor anjali
waiting 4 next chap
acha 10+page.
chutki ne kisko challenge dia ;)
start writing next chap
im going 2 spam 2 get next chap

Thank you so much Mishti di. I know most people are surprised about Bhavna's father. Lagtha hain bomb he mara tha🤣 Ya anjali is a bechari in this fan fiction. Oh god, you finished my challenge. I have another one coming up 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: cuppypie121
superub update
loved it

continue soon

Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: nini06
TOTALLY LUVED IT..😉
asum blossom..
muah..keep updating..!!
luv nini😳

Thank you so much ninijaan!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Sammy11
Awesome update Chutki.. loved it..
Sorry for small comment.. extremely busy.. flying tomorrow.. lol..

See ya..

Edit.. second part made me sad.. subha bhi Vishu kI touching story pardhi thi terribly sad.. and now your touching story.. 😕

Full days sad story and now i'm writing a comedy part for my ff ... what a contrast.. lol... will make it dukh bhara comedy.. 😆 it maska chaska.. upar se APHG mein bhi sab sad sad.. bhavna sad.. savri bhi sad.. bas AvRaj ki smile se I'm feeling normal.. hahaha..

Thank you so much jiji! Aww, I am so sorry for making you sad. I promise there will be better parts in this fan fiction soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: -CrazyNiru-
finally!!!!!
finally mona darling back wid an update! dat too 1st chapter😃😃😃
me dancing!!!!! dinka chika dinka chika
woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳
waise, i'm very sorry fr d late cmnt
lekin, nw i'm back😉
now, comin 2 ur update...
i luvd it!!!👏👏👏
it was just awesome⭐️
luvd d way u portrayed suket n his attitude
oh my! it is hard 2 please suket
d khandewal industry's presentation must have been too good then😆
n comin 2 bhavana's place...
awww... bhavana n her mom share a very cute bonding😳
allah miya! what's wrong wid niranjan?😕😕
ek chota sa pillow fight ke liye itna gussa?😡
just because a pillow hit him, he is acting as if d pillow was a metal rod🤢
poor anjali! she is suffering wid a person who is mentally retarded😭
i hope dis torture stops soon🤔
overall, d update was just wonderful👍🏼

my rating fr dis update - ⭐️ (12/10)😉
update soon mona darling, me waiting

luv u lots,
ur aapu❤️

Oh god, itna bara comment. Mereko marr dalne ki koshish karahi ho?😆 I am glad you loved it and are dancing 😆 Suket is a very hard man to please especially in business. Ya, Bhavna and Anjali's bond is a strong and cute one. Shayad ek metal rod ne hi niranjan ko maara tha 😆 Don't worry, the torture will be over. Thank you so much for the extra rating. Love you too!

Edited by -Zindagi- - 11 years ago