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Posted: 11 years ago
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~ The Game Of Love ~

{ SuVana | F a n f i c t i o n | Chapter One Promo }

Scene 1

"Present with dignity", said the man with a firm voice, authority dripping from his voice. Astonished by the deep voice, the announcer looked up and gulped when he realized who the man was, the boss.

Scene 2

Without any warning, he gripped her hair and twisted them in his hands. She shrieked with pain and tears started forming in her eyes, but her pain had no effect on him. Standing up from his chair, he dragged her towards their room and locked the door, just in case any neighbor decided to peek in. Taking a stick from the cupboard, he started to hit her, leaving red marks all over her body.

Edited by -NautankiAsh- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~ The Game Of Love ~

{ SuVana | F a n f i c t i o n | Author's Note }

Salaam Namaste APHGians! First of all, I am really sorry for the delay in posting my next installment in my fan fiction. I was a little caught up with exams and was just plain lazy. So here is the promo for chapter one and please tell me your views on how you like it. As always, constructive criticism is welcome and please list any specific concerns you have. Please hit like and comment.

Keep Smiling,

Ash

Edited by -NautankiAsh- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
omg
finaly promo out

sounds very intresting
who is the one beating?

intresting promo
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lil sis
i must say u r a true suvana fan
love u
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Lol.. its shocking.. Promo itna chota.. 😆

Excitement level increased 200%.. when is the update? Eager to read it.. lol..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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agree samy
perfect promo
increased excitment alot
cant wait 4 chap1
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: -NautankiAsh-

~ The Game Of Love ~

{ SuVana | F a n f i c t i o n | Chapter One Promo }

Scene 1

"Present with dignity", said the man with a firm voice, authority dripping from his voice. Astonished by the deep voice, the announcer looked up and gulped when he realized who the man was, the boss.

Scene 2

Without any warning, he gripped her hair and twisted them in his hands. She shrieked with pain and tears started forming in her eyes, but her pain had no effect on him. Standing up from his chair, he dragged her towards their room and locked the door, just in case any neighbor decided to peek in. Taking a stick from the cupboard, he started to hit her, leaving red marks all over her body.



Thank u so much for the promo & for PM...it'z getting more interesting but it'z quite disturbing as well...esp. d 2nd scene...but m super excited to know wat will happen next...plez. continue😊

As alwayz awesum job Choti👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: -NautankiAsh-

Thank you so much Sammy di! I am so glad you like the prologue and concept. Thanks for viewing it in a professional way. Mere ek fan, hai bhagwan!!
Ye lo autograph: Ash Singhania Horan Purohit Gothi Khan

Welcome Chutki..🤗
Haha... yeh kaisa autograph hai.. lol..🤣

Lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DEAR IT"S JUST TOO TOO ASSUMM...!😉!
i m talking bout the banner..n intro..!!😃
u r d best dear..!!❤️
muah muah muah.,,...ashjaann...!!😳

n name is too assum..!!
plz..do updae me wen u complete..!!
i hav becum ur fan dear...👏 like sammy..!!(o2c3luv)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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mona darling finally back wid an update!!!!!!! yahhhooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳
lekin mujhe patha tha *saas bahu look* mujhe patha tha ki tum chapter 1 itni jaldi update nahi karne waali hai. meri mona darling jo hai. of course main jaanti hoon tujhe😉
but what a promo yaar👏👏👏
d suspense level has increased😈
lekin itna chota promo😡?!!!!!
its okay, but i want u 2 compensate it wid d first chapter.
but woh 2nd part!!!!!!! uughh! its scary!
glued 2 my seat with d help of fevicol😆
i seriously can't get up🤪, so better update soon!!!!!!!

p.s. dis is my 400th post here! glad dat it is fr u😃

love u mona darling,🤗
ur aapu

Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 11 years ago

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