Two Shot: My Stubborn Yoja

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my first time writing for the Asian Shows forum. This is generally inspired by the crap ton of melos I have been watching. Some early melodramas *cough missing you cough* left a bad taste in my mouth and I gave up on the genre but secret, that winter, and some other shows have made me hopeful again.
This is a short & sweet piece with one more part till conclusion. Hope you all like it :)

Click. Clack. Ruffle. Repeat.

Her firm steps reminded him of the ever ready presence behind him. Dancing just a few steps after her man, the woman's rhythm carried a story to tell. Conscious of his drunken state, present to guide his path, quick to clear the obstacles, agile to hold him as he fell, she was his sole protector tonight. Like many other nights. But.

He didn't want her there. A constant force lurking in the shadows, pressing his buttons was getting too burdensome.

"Quit it, won't you?"

He screamed kicking the first grey object in his path. It could have been a dog or a landscaping rock. It was hard to tell in the dark. Plus, what use was the woman behind him if not to apologize for his childish tactics.

Click. Clack. "I am sorry. He's not usually like this. He's drunk". She bowed to strangers passing by, begging for forgiveness on his behalf.

Ruffle. Repeat.

There she went again. The cobalt blue of her military coat fighting his hunter green suspenders, like a captain lugging his low-rank lieutenant on the tail.

Click. Clack.

"Stop following me".

Pause.

His footsteps grew quieter but she stayed put. He was pulling away but she had stopped holding. His neck turned a subtle turn and that was her hint. She sprinted at light speed to catch up to him, braking just behind his heel.

Ruffle. Repeat.

One second her slender fingers slipped underneath the elastic on his shoulder and another, his suspenders were straightened back from where they fell. He shrugged her hand away in frustration and turned around, his flaring eyes staring into her hopeful ones.

"Just how much do you like me?"

"Don't know", she answered coyly.

"Why? Why don't you know?"

His grip on her wrist was gentle but strong, both aware of her delicate touch but wary of the metal in her core.

"Because"

"Because?"

"You test me so much, you sadist, that every time I build a wall to contain just how love I have for you, you make me break it".

He bit his lip like nothing happened. Then, sighed in frustration. Finally, he wiped her nose with the back of his thumb and started walking away.

Click. Clack. This woman sure was persistent. No matter how much he attacked her pride. She fought back. When his heavy insults pulled her down, she dusted her coat, got right back up, and followed him again.

Ruffle. Repeat.

"Oun. It's blood".

He glazed down at his palm and noticed a bloody thumb from having wiped her snort. He reached for his silk neck tie and waved it in the air until she caught it.

"You must be really happy today. You hated that tie from the minute I eyed it in the shop".

He smiled remembering her pleadings not waste money on such ugly things. But he was adamant. "My way or the highway. If you're going to live with a man like me", he said, "you better give up on arguments now. I don't budge".

"Really? Then I am in for a fight because both me and my words stick like glue. I don't leave easily".

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sweetsorrow18 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting, like to see what happens next and know more about these two people...good work Donna =)


P.S are an avid fanfic reader? and if so, have you read/seen the works on Soompi? there are some amazing writers on there lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsorrow18

interesting, like to see what happens next and know more about these two people...good work Donna =)


P.S are an avid fanfic reader? and if so, have you read/seen the works on Soompi? there are some amazing writers on there lol


OMG, they have fanfictions on soompi!! Where? Can u please share the link?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kshows_fangirl


OMG, they have fanfictions on soompi!! Where? Can u please share the link?



Yes! lol you need to be a member and then under their "forums" go to "fanfix" - there are two sections, "ongoing" and "completed"

I highly recommend two fanfics - one called Banana Pancakes and the other Conversations Between Us...both by user Solangel...she won fanfic of the year in 2007 and 2008 and has gone on to publish those as books (but the fanfics are more detailed, so read those)...you'll find those both under the completed sections...

Another good one is Welcome to the Underworld - by Con.Template
Edit: So upon searching, I've found out Conversations Between Us has been pulled from Soompi by Solangel to be edited for another book - I know there are some people had a chance to download it years ago and I wish I hadn't deleted it when I had it cause I totally would have uploaded it for you...I suggest looking around online for a download link..its absolutely amazing if you're into fanfics


Edited by sweetsorrow18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsorrow18



Yes! lol you need to be a member and then under their "forums" go to "fanfix" - there are two sections, "ongoing" and "completed"

I highly recommend two fanfics - one called Banana Pancakes and the other Conversations Between Us...both by user Solangel...she won fanfic of the year in 2007 and 2008 and has gone on to publish those as books (but the fanfics are more detailed, so read those)...you'll find those both under the completed sections...

Another good one is Welcome to the Underworld - by Con.Template

Edit: So upon searching, I've found out Conversations Between Us has been pulled from Soompi by Solangel to be edited for another book - I know there are some people had a chance to download it years ago and I wish I hadn't deleted it when I had it cause I totally would have uploaded it for you...I suggest looking around online for a download link..its absolutely amazing if you're into fanfics



I am addicted to reading so much!! I love novels w/ Young Adult, Romance, Contemporary, Suspense, Thriller, Fantasy basically any genre of novels!! And, I have read great great stories on Wattpad as well! So, I am totally going to attack these fanfics now in my Winter Break!😆 TFS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kshows_fangirl


I am addicted to reading so much!! I love novels w/ Young Adult, Romance, Contemporary, Suspense, Thriller, Fantasy basically any genre of novels!! And, I have read great great stories on Wattpad as well! So, I am totally going to attack these fanfics now in my Winter Break!😆 TFS!


Haha, join the club~! Love to read as well...hope you enjoy those!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a beautiful update. Hoping to see some more.

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