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Posted: 1 years ago
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OMG!!! This is absolutely excellent chapter, I just loved Riya's entry scene & Arjun's reaction on meeting her for the first time. Is Riya an UC officer or, working for any secret force? And, what is her relationship with Raghu Sir?

I must say that, the new version of you as a writer, is really damn good.....👌👌👌👌👌👌👏👏👏. Please keep writing like this & do update regularly & try not to vanish again, without completing your story.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Please check this story out, if you all can get some free time.

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Please check this story out, if you all can get some free time.

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Please check this story out, if you all have some free time to read.

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Please check this story out, if you all have some spare time to read.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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I'm so glad you've decided to write again. Always appreciate a new writer❤️


I wouldn't lie and say I'm a fan of your stories because I don't remember if I'd read any of your stories. So, I guess I'll be a fresh pair of eyes for the new you and your stories.


If this prologue is anything to go by, you'll do just fine because thus prologue was captivating and mysterious. We know nothing about the characters yet so the readers might end up scratching their head to guess if these two troubled souls are a victim who's case etf will take or one our beloved etf family themselves.


Waiting eagerly for more. Do share PM and if you have any updating schedule or anything like that. Will be here to read❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 1 years ago
#19

Beautiful

Nila was absolutely right on this one. Sakshi was insensitive and this matter didn't need "tact" as Sameer so formally deemed. It needed empathy and compassion.

Arjun taking that step forward so openly was a bit surprising. I always thought he was a "do good in secret" kinda person.


So let me just say I adore this Arjun of yours who took their hands and went on to solve the case.


Now coming to the story. I see everyone's there except Riya. Nila, Aryan, Mimi and Choco seems like a relative character. Seeing how they mentioned their masi. I'm guessing for her to be Riya. But this is just the start so I won't go speculating.

Well done with the chapter.

I'll be waiting for more.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Yessss YESS YESSSS!!

I LOVE IT WHEN RIYA IS THE BADASS 🔥🔥🔥🔥


FANTABULOUS. So Riya is the famous masi but she has no prior connection to ETF. Her entry was firee. She saved Arjun. When she delivered her dialogue, my mind started chanting "Riya" 🤭


Arjun totally fell for her. Ahhh love at first sight. I'm curious what Riya felt though Arjun wasn't his usual self and for a change he was the Damoiseau in distress.


I like this dynamic. Nila and Aryan are a nice fit and though it was implied she was away on business, something tells me she's much more than that.


Waiting for more.

Do PM

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