#3# Ariya Ff: Agni sa pavitra- final part page 28 - Page 13

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Extremely sorry for being late, was out of town due to work. This is for all three chapters (13,14 & 15) I missed.

Riya & Barkha's dedication towards their duty and country and their bravery is much appreciated by their seniors & they are given rest as well as leave to recover soon. Riya's three wounds got infected and she has been advised to get a check up done with her personal doctor. Arjun told her to meet him in the hotel and she obliged. There at first, she got to meet her ETF team and then met Arjun. They were quite happy and emotional for their little reunion there. I loved Arjun being caring, understanding, protective, a little bit of possessive yet supportive partner for Riya in all situation of their life. Also, Riya being equally understanding & caring towards Arjun's worries for her well-being as well as comforting Arjun saying that she was also doing her duty as an officer like he does. Now, they both know & realized that, they are no more only friends and well-wishers of each other rather they both have fallen head over heals in love with each other.

Riya got the news of getting a leave of three days to go to Mumbai and have her check-up done from her senior, in fact, she has got permission to leave Nasik with Arjun & ETF. Arjun take her with him and they meet Riya's parents and after that he leaves for ETF saying that they will go to their house together at night. Riya's parents advised her to take a break after the training, to start her marital life with Arjun, in fact, to go somewhere for their honeymoon. But, Riya is scared because, her scars are still visible and she still is not feeling comfortable and confident enough for that matter. But, Riya's parents gave her hope and told her to have trust on Arjun and his love. They have seen him being equally restless for her well-being yet proud of her successful training session and mission, so they have complete trust on him that he will take full care of her in future too. Riya's father asks Arjun to stay with them when Arjun comes at night to take Riya back with him to their house but, Arjun politely refuses and tells him that he will again leave Riya at their house the next morning and hearing that Riya refuses saying she has to take care of their house as Arjun has no time for all that, so her parents must come to their house instead of her.

Finally, Ariya reached their home sweet home, but Arjun is scared of Riya's reaction seeing the messy condition of their house. Riya, being the ultimate cleanliness freak, started cleaning the house and even forced Arjun to help her in this by threatening him. Although it was late and he was reluctant, he did it for Riya's happiness. After cleaning session of 2 hours, Ariya got in bed being exhausted & finally called the night. Next morning, Ariya invited the ETF members and Riya's parents at their home to have breakfast and all of them spend the morning with a lovely breakfast made by Riya & their chitchat session. Seeing Ariya happily doing things together, the ETF team members are also happy and they're secretly planning for Ariya's honeymoon to give them as a surprise gift from the team before any case arrives again. Also, Sameer promises Ayesha to go for a vacation after Ariya comes back from their honeymoon for which Ayesha happily agrees. Due to over-exertion of her mission, training, journey, cleaning session of previous night and without having no rest again in the kitchen making breakfast in the next morning for the family and friends, Riya's back started bleeding and Arjun sees this. But, he kept mum and waited for leaving everyone as he didn’t want them to panic & worry for Riya. Riya once again started to feel low & guilty of her physical condition. He takes a great care of Riya and even decides to stay with her in this weak physical & mental state of her when she asks him if he can get a leave. Sameer grants him leave and even tells him to take care of her & come back to ETF only after dropping her to Nasik. Ariya spends some quality time and shares their inner feelings & worries with each other. Arjun comforted Riya very well this time and made her believe and trust that he is very much happy and proud to be with her and to be her husband even without making any physical relationship with her till now since he believes that they have grown an amazingly emotional as well as mutual understanding & attachment towards each other which is very much needed in a married life more than the physical relationship. They both promised themselves in mind that, they both will confess their true feelings for each other after Riya's completes her training and comes back to Mumbai from Nasik.

I just love all of these moments in all the three chapters. Keep writing like this only....and continue soon as I'm eager to explore more n more. Tnx for the tag once again.

P.S. - I have a doubt: Is Sanya working for any secret service group? Are they observing & monitoring Riya so that they can make her fulfill any of their special purposes?

Part 16

Etf .

Arjun took Sam along for discussion .

Arjun : Sam 2 baatein hai and there are disturbing me a lot .

Arjun : Pehle sanya .

Sameer: what about her ?

Arjun: she came her for operations n paper work but she is much smarter than this . Uska ana Riya ko achanak yeh training milna aur uska etf se Jana . Phir Riya jis mission par thi tab uska waha pochna. Bina tumhari permission ke aur phir bahana banakar nikal Jana .

Sameer : arjun uska Ana aur Riya ke Jane mein kya connection ? Aur Nasik Ana weird mujhe bhi laga but etf ke liye asign hue hai , qualified hogi tab hi na .

Arjun: no Sam there is something fishy nazar rakh .

Sam: ok I vl . Aur dusre kya kaam tha .

Arjun : pri ko raj se bachana hai

Sam : don’t worry ek informer ko lagaya hai wooh sari info de raha hai . Iss baar wooh bachke nahi nikal payega .

Arjun : Sam wooh bachna nahi chahiye. Riya ki toote hue confidence ke liye he is responsible. Aur pri ki innocence ke saath bhi khilwad kar raha hai .

Sam : v r on it . Bas thode din aur .

This conversation got overheard.

Arjun went to the conference room . Though he was busy reading a file his attention was on sanya . His eyes and ears were focused on finding any clue against her .

Team was as usual finishing paper work and praying no new case comes till these get over.

Days passed and one day finally Arjun overheard a conversation.

Sanya -aur kitne din ?? Before any more doubts get aroused every thing should be completed “. I need full report of training .

And she walked away .

Arjun : sanya kisse baat kar Rahi thi . Aur usee kaunsi training ki report chahiye ?? Kahin Riya ke related toh nahi ?? But Uske related kyun?? Yeh Akhir chahti kya hai ?

Arjun was in his thoughts and he got a call from Riya .

Arjun : Riya kaise ho? Sab thik hai ??

Riya : mein Bilkul thik ho Arjun . Mujhe apse kuch baat karni thi .

Arjun : ha bolo .

Riya : aaj Jab mein Bahar gai kaam se toh I felt like I am being followed . Koi nazar rakh raha hai mujhpe.

Arjun got worried .

Arjun : tumhe esa kyun laga?? I mean

Riya : arjun itna toh apse Shikha hi hai aur jab se training join ki hai obviously i see things more minutely . I just thought to tell you coz apko aur etf ko koi problem na ho .

You know someone trying to revenge through me .

Arjun: don’t worry esa kuch nahi hoga . I will be more alert and Sam ko bhi bolta hoon.

He shared the conversation with Sameer and he too agreed to be alert . He informed Ayesha , chotu and shree and team as usual agreed to be part of it.

Here Riya’a training was getting over . She was the best cadet. She gave this training all she could . She wanted to be strong enough to handle her pains , emotions and her burnt girl image .

Etf office .

Arjun : Sam I m going to Nasik tomorrow. Riya ki training khatam hogai hai I m getting her back .

Sam : yes that would be good .

In a corner ,

Sanya : as you know riya is coming back tomorrow.. No she won’t be alone . Arjun is going to pick her up. This is our last chance .

Chotu was going to pantry when he overheard the last statement.

He immediately told the team .

Arjun : are you sure ??

Chhotu: sir meine sirf itna hi suna .

Sam: we can’t prove anything but rawte you take chotu with you tomorrow.

Arjun: nahi agar uska koi plan hai toh she will be alert . And she doesn’t seem to be alone .

Let her think . I vl be ready for whatever comes .

Next day , Riya parents were at Arjun home waiting for her return .

At the academy,

Riya was giving her final goodbyes to the family she made there .

Barkha was the emotional one . Riya these 2 months were the best months for my life .

I got a friend like you .

Riya : Barkha you don’t know how much this friendship means to me . I came here to learn to become strong . To fight my battles and without your support it would have been impossible.

At the training area , rajveer , Naina sikhavat and Mahir greeted the cadets celebrated the learning’s and appreciated them .

Arjun was waiting for the convocation to get over . He didn’t want to disturb her during her last moments with the cadets .

Once the ceremony was over , he met Rajveer , Naina and Mahir and gave a word of thanks to them too .

Riya saw Arjun waiting for him and ran to him .

Riya : I was sure you will come .

Arjun: you have no idea how much I wanted to see you . Specially after our last moments together . Your wounds are fine ??

Riya : better hai . Doc se bhi touch mein ho . Par why are you asking ?? Apko toh pata hai you are much in contact with doc asking about my health .

Arjun : ofcourse ab Meri wife ek commando hai so I have to make sure that she is taking good care of her .

Here Rajveer came to invite Arjun .

Rajveer : arjun come join us for dinner . Riya please apne husband ko dinner toh pucho .

Arjun: I vl have it . Rajveer I need to talk to you . Riya tum Chalo I vl join you .

After Riya went . Arjun discussed with Rajveer about Riya intuition of being followed.

Rajveer : what ?? Your wife i tell you.

Jhansi ki rani hai .

Both Arjun and Rajveer said it together and had a laugh .

Arjun : she has gone through a lot Rajveer and that’s why she is intended to become more tough to face the world.

Rajveer : I know but here she is our responsibility. If anything happens she should inform the academy.

Do one thing just take some backup with you while going back . Atleast we will know if there is something wrong

Arjun : we can manage .

Rajveer : I know Arjun you and Riya can handle situations. But this is for my surety. And I vl make sure Riya doesn’t know about it .

After dinner , Riya introduced everyone with Arjun .

Barkha : acp Arjun rawte is your husband ?? Tumne bataya nahi .

She started looking with dreamy eyes .

Riya hits Barkha hands

Riya : is liye nai bataya . Mere husband ke kuch zyada hi fans hai .

Giving him a glare. Arjun quickly held on to Riya .

Arjun : but mein sirf Riya ka fan hoon .

Finally they left for Mumbai . A team of 4 commandos following them at a distance .

Riya : arjun mere etf mein wapas ane ke kya chances hai ?? ABhi toh sanya is on work in my replacement.

Arjun : no body can replace you Riya .

Riya : arjun but she is good at her work . Apke dekha nahi kaise mission time aa gai aur she handled it quite good .

Ek achchi officer hai wooh .

Arjun : Riya tumhe sablog achche hi lagte hai .

Suddenly a bus passed their way and the driver was riding very rashly . .

Arjun : yeh kaise chala raha hai ??

Riya : arjun there is something wrong with the bus or the driver .

Arjun : Riya come on the driving seat . I vl climb on the top n see .

Riya : are you sure ??

Arjun: yea . He silently signalled the commandos behind that there might be a threat .

Riya got the car very close to the bus and Arjun carefully climbed on it .

Riya again created the distance so that there is no doubt .

Arjun went till the bus driver place and saw he was threatened by a gun .

He understood that this bus was hijacked .

He messaged it to Riya and commandos .

Riya: oh my god .

Riya now understands the car following them was none other the commandos .

She got in touch with them .

Riya : team I know who you are. Now we have to save this bus and my husband too .

Commando : yes Riya we are going in front to stop the bus .

The commandos tactfully stopped the bus but the passengers were very scared. As soon as the bus door opened the terrorists opened fire on the commandos. It took them by a bit of shock but they are always alert to tackle the situation. Riya meanwhile climbed on the bus tried to break through any windows as Arjun was there in the front.

Suddenly a passenger saw her and was about to shout when Riya assured they are here to save them . There was one terrorist in the front with the driver and other was there in the bus .

Arjun tactfully handled the first one and Riya entered in the bus and sat as a passenger . Unfortunately the terrorist caught hold of her.

Riya : kaun ho ?? Kya chahte hoo?? Kyun Masom logo ki jaan ke piche ho?

Terrorist: inke badle hamari mange puri honi chahiye . Warna .

Riya : ok kya chahiye tumhe ??

Arjun entered in the bus

( driver cabin and seating was separate so arjun didn’t know Riya is inside . )

He pointed a back of terrorist but he turned with Riya on gun point .

Arjun got a bit scared but seeing in Riya eyes he knew she is just playing and buying time till the others are taken care of by commando .

Arjun :chodo use ..

terrorist: tum peche Raho warna yeh jaan se jayengi ..

Arjun smirked at Riya . Riya slammed on his foot and turned his arm to get hold of the gun . It happened so suddenly that terrorist didn’t understand.

Shooting noise also stopped n commandos came in to inform them .

Commandos: every thing is under control .

Arjun : any casualties?

Commandos : none sir . all good here??

Arjun: yes . you can take him to the academy . I vl talk to major Rajveer .

Commandos got hold of the terrorist and took him to the academy.

The passengers thanked Ariya and they headed for the journey .

Arjun : why did you come in ??

Riya : how could I leave you alone ? Don’t know why but you always attract trouble .

Arjun : me or you ? Pehle human trafficking aur ab yeh terrorist .

Riya: I have become a magnet now to attract trouble . Being a rawte you know .

Arjun : trouble and you are best friends . Mukherjee or rawte doesn’t matter.

Finally they reached Mumbai .

Arjun briefed Sam about what happened in the journey .

They reached home greeted by Riya’s parents and a lovely family time .

Riya : I am so happy aap log aa gai.

Gautam and Reema: we are proud of you Riya.

Reema : come dinner is ready .

Arjun and Riya mutually decided not to tell any thing about terrorist incident to them .

After the dinner , Riya parents left and Ariya just called it a day peacefully snuggling in their home.

Precap :

Arjun : how dare you do this ?? Who are you ??

Dear naaheean ,

First of all , I am so so grateful to you for reading the parts so thoroughly loving the story engrossing in every bit of it .. I am privileged to have readers like you don’t just read the story for the heck of it you live the story . Just like I do when I write it .

No thank you would ever be enough. But still a big hug and a big thank you

For sanya identity it’s coming soon . Wait for it . Hope you like it .

Arjun is super supportive husband

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Amazing chapter...specially, the action scene on the hijacked bus was mind-blowing to read & imagine. Riya sach mein hi trouble ki best friend, magnet and jhasi ki rani hi hai, chahe uska surname Mukharjee ho ya Rawte, isse koi farak nahi padhta, barbar aur har bar woh khud hi trouble ko magnet ki tarah hi attract kar hi leti hai aur jhasi ki rani ki tarah hi daatkar har mushkil situation ka samna bhi karti hai.

However, now almost everyone in the ETF except Riya has formed a clear doubt on Sanya and her motive behind coming to ETF in place of Riya. Let's see, what you have stored for us regarding all these suspicious behaviour of Sanya Against Riya and Ariya's relationship. Tnx for the tag...continue soon.

Loved it dear Pinku 🤗🤗

Awesome update 😁

I really loved how that person who broke Riya from inside is under constant watch of ETF also Sanya seems more suspicious now & good that she is being handled accordingly 😔

🤔 Hmm so Sanya is giving information which means something really grave & good that Ariya were already alert. ... & Finally Ariya were back home safe and happy

The incident of the terrorist shows that things are quite deep & Ariya will not let go like this so easily

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Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

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Superb update

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