Originally posted by: manasvi..
hi dear ...thanks for all your pms..but i am really sorry i was not able to read stories because of my busyness . but your this story i have read till here.. its really an awesome piece of yours,,,waise aapki har story acchi hoti hai...but i like the most jisme arjun riya ko takleef nahi deta..he is my hero to i like his this side .
n about this one
it is really nice , the way you defined all characters ..i think rosh ye sab shree ko bachane ke liye kar rahi hai. or rohit bhi kuch to kar raha hai.. hope aisha ko jald ye samjh aa jaye ki sam usse saccha pyar karta hai rohit nahi . or hum usi ke sath khush rehte hai jo hume chahe ..hope arj ri ki life mai saviour ban kar aaye or use bad habits or phobias se protect kare..
plz continue soon ..I'll be waiting
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