awesome update
love it..
hmm suruwat toh kafi suspense me thi..
aayesha n liza are now teammembers..
is is ariya..?
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Hello people update for lamhe is on the way... Its been a long time since I updated last one.. I got many feedbacks after first update.. Thanks alot everyone for immense love 🤗. Talking about couples this camee big question i can say a thing enjoy the present of the story without thinking about pairs and couples and i hope you will get the best justification for everything sooner.. So what i expect from everyone is patience.... And talking about riya i really cant show her as any wamp pr helpless one ( even i dont show anyother) so please don't worry and let it go with the flow... This is not the one same from the story i took my liberties to change it according to the plot point... Hope everyone understand it... Update will be posted by tonight or tomorrow
welcome back dear waiting for update and as you posted in intro of storyIt is a story of a devastated man finding his solace with three girls at different stages of his life .. None of the women here used as objects(Just for irritating or bothering some other) which we consider..Originally posted by: Shriyareddy
Hello people update for lamhe is on the way... Its been a long time since I updated last one.. I got many feedbacks after first update.. Thanks alot everyone for immense love 🤗. Talking about couples this camee big question i can say a thing enjoy the present of the story without thinking about pairs and couples and i hope you will get the best justification for everything sooner.. So what i expect from everyone is patience.... And talking about riya i really cant show her as any wamp pr helpless one ( even i dont show anyother) so please don't worry and let it go with the flow... This is not the one same from the story i took my liberties to change it according to the plot point... Hope everyone understand it... Update will be posted by tonight or tomorrow
so there no question of showing them vamp and make comparison between them.
eagerly waiting how story will be proceed :)
Shree : please not again
Liza : mein toh wahi bol rahi hun
Shree : dekho aane se hi baraat Shuru hui
Liza : kisne shuru kiya
Sam : team behave yourselves
Sam to everyone : yeh liza.. Liza D Cruz our new forensic expert. I am Sameer.D.rathore, etf chief.. This is acp arjun rawthe, second in command, yeh ayesha, yeh shree...
Liza : specy sen
Sam : i think tum dono ek dusre ko kaafi ache jaanthe ho
Shree smiles awkwardly. Liza smirks at him
Shree : aisa kuch nahi sir... Ham ek college mein tha.. Waha we are always loggerheads.. Jaise aap aur arjun sir ki tarah (shree bites his tongue)
Sam : ok enough with the discussions guys get back to the work
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An asylum at the end of the city. Many people are roaming here and there. A man standing with a big overcoat and a cigar in his hand was listening to some one and nodding his head
A girl in the asylum was tied with chains to her hands and legs was struggling to remove them. She was shouting, screaming..
Attender : yeh maya hamesha aisa kyu chillatha hai
Nurse : she has been through so much trauma.. Sikander sir ne usko yaha admit kiya.
Attender : sir ne admit kiya.. Waise sir kaha hai
Nurse : sir uss doctor se baath kar raha hai..Koi cancer patients ki treatment ki funding ke liye
Attender : kash sab log un ki tarah hai toh.. bhagavaan use saikadon saal jeene ka aasheervaad de...
That man with cigar came inside and removed the coat.. He changed his clothes into normal white clothes. He is looking like a synonym for kindness and patience
Nurse : sar chai ya coffee .. aap kya piyoge
Man : tere haath se jo miltha hai wo lavo
Nurse goes and gets a coffee
Man : sab kaise hai
Nurse : ji sab ache hai
Man : ok main ja raha hun... Sabko sambhalo
Arjun was working on the case about a magicians death. Everyone are tired about their work. Shree and chotu are watching a horror flick. Suddenly ayesha enters and held them from the back. They both jumped out of their seats. Ayesha started giggling looking at them. Suddenly there was a power cut and a girl with a smile more than 1000 Watts entered the office..chotu was talking about reporter
Chotu : dekho ayesha kehne mein aur karne mein bahuth farak hotha hai chalo maan lethe hai koi aayega lekin wo kaisa hoga. Shayad koi budha, admara, jiski aankoh pei mota chasma aur kaano mein sun ne ke liye machine.. Hame jarur koi aisa hi milega
suddenly the girl enters. She smiles with that 1000 watt smile but chotu was dumbstruck.
Shree : kya hua
Chotu : udhar dekh... Wo Ladki arjun sir se jagda ki
Shree : wo yaha kaisee
Girl : hii mein hun sakshi... Sakshi anand. Budhi admari jo aap ki team ko ladkadathi hui jo aapke team ke kaam ko cover karne aaye hai
Shree and chotu whispers : ab toh arjun sir ka band bajayega
Sakshi : i was really excited to meet you all. I just came direct from the meeting.
Ayesha forwards hand : welcome to the team. I am ayesha kapoor.
Shree : my shreekanth sen a. K. A
Liza came in between : specky sen.. hamare computer ki mechanic.. Bu the way i am liza... Liza. D. Cruz
Shree introduced chotu
Sakshi : tum bheem jaise ho aur naam chotu..
Chotu pouted everyone laughed. Sakshi further enquired about the remaining
Ayesha : baaki bache hai rathod sir aur arjun sir
Sakshi : arjun.. Arjun rawthe... Bohoth sunaya unke baare mein. Aur uske saath badi galthi bhi hogayi
Saying this she moved towards arjuns cabin. Arjun was twirling the pen. Sakshi forwarded the hand. Arjun forwarded it
Arjun : tum yaha
Sakshi : dekho i was frustrated that day.. And i really didn't wanted to say all those but see
Arjun : iss explanation dene ke liye did u come
Sakshi: nahi ab mein etf ki hiss hun
Arjun : what
Sam : jo suna wo sach hi hai rawthe. Home minister sir just informed about it. Welcome to etf sakshi. I am sameer Rathore
Sakshi : thanks sameer. Hope It will be pleasure to work together.
Arjun : kisko
Sakshi : nice one.. Ok sameer byeee.... Arjun.. Arey dekho arjun byee
Sam was pleasantly shocked by all these. Arjun just ignored about it and went further with the case. They cleared the case and sakshi sat alone in the office.
Sakshi types in her laptop about the case
Sakshi : pehla case.. Nayi shuruvat.. Nayi team.. Lekin yeh sab se jyaada nayi world.. Its making me think more.. Every thing seems to be fine while we are ok but if deeply observed every one here is already fighting with their own set of issues..ek chehare ko jaane bina chhaaya kee khoj kar raha hai.ek agyaat prashnon kee khoj kar raha hai. One is suffering from trust issues on his friendship....
DAYS PASS ON
....
A girl is moving here and there with a mobile in her hand. She was smiling looking at her phone. Arjun sakshi were there near the stall. Arjuns attention fell on her. That girl has long wavy hair, round big specs, wearing a white top and flowers embellished long skirt. Arjun was observing her keenly. She moved forward to take a selfie with beach view. Suddenly arjun saw a lorry dangerously moving on the road and got onto the footpath. She was not observing all these.
Arjun suddenly jumped from there and ran towards her. He pulled her along with him and both rolled down the road. Sakshi rushed near them. Arjun was down and the girl was above him still holding him tight. She shut her eyes tight but sakshi who was really jealous about it lifted her and forwarded her hand to arjun. But arjun got up without her help. The girl was cleaning her dress, arjun signaled sakshi to get a water bottle. After sakshi bought it he forwarded it to that girl. She was still same cleaning her dress.
Arjun : calm down.. Drink this water
Girl : why should i calm down. Did you see this.. Meri dress ki kya halath bangayi.
Sakshi intervened : he saved your life.. And here you are more worried about your dresss..
Girl : ohh so u are expecting a thanks
Sakshi : we are not expecting but i think those are basic manners right
Girl : turned to arjun : thank you.. Waise aapka naam
Sakshi : arjun.. Arjun suryakanth rawte... Naam toh suna hi hoga
Girl : maine nahi suna... What do you do MR. ARJUN
Arjun : i work in emergency task force..
Sakshi : tumhara naam
Girl : Saanvi
Sakshi : acha naaam.
Girl : isliye hi rakha tha
Sakshi : arjun sameer ka call araha hai. Hame chalna hai
Arjun turned back to leave. But the girl held his hand. Arjun turned and looked at her questioningly
Saanvi : dekho arjun.. How can i go home like this and see mera mobile bhi damage hogaya..
Arjun : chalo. ham aapako chhod denge
Sakshi : but arjun..
Arjun looked at her and signaled her to sit inside the car
Arjun in driver seat, sakshi in co driver seat, and back saanvi
Saanvi : achaa i am sorry. ( she says this holding sakshi's hand) i am very rude with you. I was really disturbed. Please don't mind
Sakshi :( smiled widely) no mention.. Even i will do the same if i feel like that..
Arjun was observing that girl, she was looking outside the window. Observing everything carefully. Arjun suddenly didn't noticed a car and jerked the vehicle which hit her hard. She winced in pain. Sakshi turned back and kept hand on her shoulder with concern.
Saanvi : sadak aur driving par dhyaan lagao please..
Sakshi chuckles. They reach saanvi's place with the help of her directions.
Saanvi : sir please come along with me you both please one coffee
Arjun : its already late
Saanvi : isliye hi bol raha hun its already late... Thoda aur hojane do
Arjun was convinced with that.. They got down the car
Arjun and sakshi went upstairs. They went upstairs. Arjun remembered the same apartment. He visited it some point of time. He went inside the house, sat reading some magazine over there and sakshi along with Saanvi went into the kitchen to get some tea to arjun and coffee for them.
Arjun started moving round the house. He suddenly recognised a small frame with boy photo along with her. He was astonished. He silently captured that pic in his mobile and kept it in the same place. He was ok but not peaceful at that place. He is feeling something wrong but he is not able to get them. Nor his soo called active senses are working at that point of time.
He has seen her somewhere but he is not able to remember her. By the time he was immersed in thoughts, sakshi is back with his tea. Saanvi went for freshup while sakshi sat beside arjun and started observing him
Sakshi : kya hua arjun.. Kuch problem
Arjun : kuch nahi. I was thinking about the case
Sakshi : arjun Acha yeh batao na.. Aaj ka case mein.
Arjun : sakshi behave... Its neither office nor crime spot.. So please lets don't start it her
Sanvi : ji tumhare coffee aur chai..
Arjun : yeh glass
Sanvi : yeh glass se kuch problem hai kya
Arjun : kuch nahi
Sanvi : arjun aap itna bada cop hai na agar aap ko kuch hua tho ( bited her tongue) i mean incase toh.. Ghar me log pareshan ho jayegi na
Arjun stiffens.. Sakshi nods a no with her head. Saanvi observes the tension over there.. After some pause arjun gets back to normal and turns to saanvi
Arjun : aap kya karate hain
Saanvi : main jeene ke lie koee khaas kaam nahin karata hun arjun... Bas odd jobs... But i used to work as crime articles and stories publisher and cartoonist in mumbai Times.
Arjun :(pointing towards wall) but tumhare degree toh psychology mein hai
Saanvi :kabhee-kabhee hamaari padhai aur hamari naukaree ke beech koee sambandh nahin hota hai. It just goes with the flow.
Sakshi : psychology mein bas degree yah PhD bhi
Saanvi :PhD kar rahi hun.. But u see project complete karna hai... Lekin mujhe itna intresting project nahi mil rahi hai mujhe. Isliye umeed chod kar crime article writer aur cartoonist job kar rahi hun
Arjun : what is your project about?
Saanvi : a case study of a person... I mean usske behaviour, charecter arc etc
Sakshi :arjun its sameer... I think we have to leave
Arjun just had a look at the house once again and checked it clearly. Arjun found a bracelet on her desk. He found it similar to the one he brought earlier.
Arjun : saanvi if u don't mind.. Can i use the restroom
Saanvi : yess..
Arjun moves to that room only to find the jameen hilane wala thing.. Saanvi and the photo with a man and other girl
He was shocked and astonished. But he went silently and returned back. He felt some connection, like he was there before or listened or visited it earlier.
Sakshi : arjun comeon
They left the place
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He was thinking restlessly about the address he saw there. He remembered it writing somewhere but it's not striking right in his brain. He was restless as he was feeling something in that house has connected to him. Saanvi was not any suspicious, but he was finding something fishy in her. He was moving around thinking about it. Suddenly this was disturbed by Rathore's call
Rathore : rawthe where are you. I was calling you from past 1 hour.
Arjun : bas kuch soch raha hun
Rathore : are you ok( concerned)
Arjun : i am absolutely fine SIR
Rathore : agar itna problem hai toh leave le sakthe ho.. Yaha pe aake hame kyu trouble karna
Arjun : sorry sir.... I am leaving
Rathore : exclamation ❗ : what...
Before he replied arjun left that place and moved away from there. He started his suv and moved to a college in the outskirts of Mumbai.
Arjun closed his eyes and rested his head on the bench.
...... Flashback........
TBC
Awesome update
Love it..
Arjun sanvi KO kaise janta he..
N who is in asalyam..?
Please continue soon
Nice part dear
Just loved it 🙂
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
Nice update
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Continue soon
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