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Posted: 6 years ago
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part 1:

awesome update

love it..

hmm suruwat toh kafi suspense me thi..

aayesha n liza are now teammembers..

is is ariya..?

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
Wonderful story. Read it from the beginning. I know you did send me pm but really sorry I was a bit caught up so I couldn't reply to those. I'm in love with the story, Arjun and the impact of the different ladies in his life. Please continue soon and don't forget to pm me. Sorry again.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello people update for lamhe is on the way... Its been a long time since I updated last one.. I got many feedbacks after first update.. Thanks alot everyone for immense love 🤗. Talking about couples this camee big question i can say a thing enjoy the present of the story without thinking about pairs and couples and i hope you will get the best justification for everything sooner.. So what i expect from everyone is patience.... And talking about riya i really cant show her as any wamp pr helpless one ( even i dont show anyother) so please don't worry and let it go with the flow... This is not the one same from the story i took my liberties to change it according to the plot point... Hope everyone understand it... Update will be posted by tonight or tomorrow

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shriyareddy

Hello people update for lamhe is on the way... Its been a long time since I updated last one.. I got many feedbacks after first update.. Thanks alot everyone for immense love 🤗. Talking about couples this camee big question i can say a thing enjoy the present of the story without thinking about pairs and couples and i hope you will get the best justification for everything sooner.. So what i expect from everyone is patience.... And talking about riya i really cant show her as any wamp pr helpless one ( even i dont show anyother) so please don't worry and let it go with the flow... This is not the one same from the story i took my liberties to change it according to the plot point... Hope everyone understand it... Update will be posted by tonight or tomorrow

welcome back dear waiting for update and as you posted in intro of storyIt is a story of a devastated man finding his solace with three girls at different stages of his life .. None of the women here used as objects(Just for irritating or bothering some other) which we consider..


so there no question of showing them vamp and make comparison between them.

eagerly waiting how story will be proceed :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Shree : please not again

Liza : mein toh wahi bol rahi hun

Shree : dekho aane se hi baraat Shuru hui

Liza : kisne shuru kiya

Sam : team behave yourselves

Sam to everyone : yeh liza.. Liza D Cruz our new forensic expert. I am Sameer.D.rathore, etf chief.. This is acp arjun rawthe, second in command, yeh ayesha, yeh shree...

Liza : specy sen

Sam : i think tum dono ek dusre ko kaafi ache jaanthe ho

Shree smiles awkwardly. Liza smirks at him

Shree : aisa kuch nahi sir... Ham ek college mein tha.. Waha we are always loggerheads.. Jaise aap aur arjun sir ki tarah (shree bites his tongue)

Sam : ok enough with the discussions guys get back to the work

..................

An asylum at the end of the city. Many people are roaming here and there. A man standing with a big overcoat and a cigar in his hand was listening to some one and nodding his head

A girl in the asylum was tied with chains to her hands and legs was struggling to remove them. She was shouting, screaming..

Attender : yeh maya hamesha aisa kyu chillatha hai

Nurse : she has been through so much trauma.. Sikander sir ne usko yaha admit kiya.

Attender : sir ne admit kiya.. Waise sir kaha hai

Nurse : sir uss doctor se baath kar raha hai..Koi cancer patients ki treatment ki funding ke liye

Attender : kash sab log un ki tarah hai toh.. bhagavaan use saikadon saal jeene ka aasheervaad de...

That man with cigar came inside and removed the coat.. He changed his clothes into normal white clothes. He is looking like a synonym for kindness and patience

Nurse : sar chai ya coffee .. aap kya piyoge

Man : tere haath se jo miltha hai wo lavo

Nurse goes and gets a coffee

Man : sab kaise hai

Nurse : ji sab ache hai

Man : ok main ja raha hun... Sabko sambhalo

Arjun was working on the case about a magicians death. Everyone are tired about their work. Shree and chotu are watching a horror flick. Suddenly ayesha enters and held them from the back. They both jumped out of their seats. Ayesha started giggling looking at them. Suddenly there was a power cut and a girl with a smile more than 1000 Watts entered the office..chotu was talking about reporter

Chotu : dekho ayesha kehne mein aur karne mein bahuth farak hotha hai chalo maan lethe hai koi aayega lekin wo kaisa hoga. Shayad koi budha, admara, jiski aankoh pei mota chasma aur kaano mein sun ne ke liye machine.. Hame jarur koi aisa hi milega

suddenly the girl enters. She smiles with that 1000 watt smile but chotu was dumbstruck.

Shree : kya hua

Chotu : udhar dekh... Wo Ladki arjun sir se jagda ki

Shree : wo yaha kaisee

Girl : hii mein hun sakshi... Sakshi anand. Budhi admari jo aap ki team ko ladkadathi hui jo aapke team ke kaam ko cover karne aaye hai

Shree and chotu whispers : ab toh arjun sir ka band bajayega

Sakshi : i was really excited to meet you all. I just came direct from the meeting.

Ayesha forwards hand : welcome to the team. I am ayesha kapoor.

Shree : my shreekanth sen a. K. A

Liza came in between : specky sen.. hamare computer ki mechanic.. Bu the way i am liza... Liza. D. Cruz

Shree introduced chotu

Sakshi : tum bheem jaise ho aur naam chotu..

Chotu pouted everyone laughed. Sakshi further enquired about the remaining

Ayesha : baaki bache hai rathod sir aur arjun sir

Sakshi : arjun.. Arjun rawthe... Bohoth sunaya unke baare mein. Aur uske saath badi galthi bhi hogayi

Saying this she moved towards arjuns cabin. Arjun was twirling the pen. Sakshi forwarded the hand. Arjun forwarded it

Arjun : tum yaha

Sakshi : dekho i was frustrated that day.. And i really didn't wanted to say all those but see

Arjun : iss explanation dene ke liye did u come

Sakshi: nahi ab mein etf ki hiss hun

Arjun : what

Sam : jo suna wo sach hi hai rawthe. Home minister sir just informed about it. Welcome to etf sakshi. I am sameer Rathore

Sakshi : thanks sameer. Hope It will be pleasure to work together.

Arjun : kisko

Sakshi : nice one.. Ok sameer byeee.... Arjun.. Arey dekho arjun byee

Sam was pleasantly shocked by all these. Arjun just ignored about it and went further with the case. They cleared the case and sakshi sat alone in the office.

Sakshi types in her laptop about the case

Sakshi : pehla case.. Nayi shuruvat.. Nayi team.. Lekin yeh sab se jyaada nayi world.. Its making me think more.. Every thing seems to be fine while we are ok but if deeply observed every one here is already fighting with their own set of issues..ek chehare ko jaane bina chhaaya kee khoj kar raha hai.ek agyaat prashnon kee khoj kar raha hai. One is suffering from trust issues on his friendship....

DAYS PASS ON

....

A girl is moving here and there with a mobile in her hand. She was smiling looking at her phone. Arjun sakshi were there near the stall. Arjuns attention fell on her. That girl has long wavy hair, round big specs, wearing a white top and flowers embellished long skirt. Arjun was observing her keenly. She moved forward to take a selfie with beach view. Suddenly arjun saw a lorry dangerously moving on the road and got onto the footpath. She was not observing all these.

Arjun suddenly jumped from there and ran towards her. He pulled her along with him and both rolled down the road. Sakshi rushed near them. Arjun was down and the girl was above him still holding him tight. She shut her eyes tight but sakshi who was really jealous about it lifted her and forwarded her hand to arjun. But arjun got up without her help. The girl was cleaning her dress, arjun signaled sakshi to get a water bottle. After sakshi bought it he forwarded it to that girl. She was still same cleaning her dress.

Arjun : calm down.. Drink this water

Girl : why should i calm down. Did you see this.. Meri dress ki kya halath bangayi.

Sakshi intervened : he saved your life.. And here you are more worried about your dresss..

Girl : ohh so u are expecting a thanks

Sakshi : we are not expecting but i think those are basic manners right

Girl : turned to arjun : thank you.. Waise aapka naam

Sakshi : arjun.. Arjun suryakanth rawte... Naam toh suna hi hoga

Girl : maine nahi suna... What do you do MR. ARJUN

Arjun : i work in emergency task force..

Sakshi : tumhara naam

Girl : Saanvi

Sakshi : acha naaam.

Girl : isliye hi rakha tha

Sakshi : arjun sameer ka call araha hai. Hame chalna hai

Arjun turned back to leave. But the girl held his hand. Arjun turned and looked at her questioningly

Saanvi : dekho arjun.. How can i go home like this and see mera mobile bhi damage hogaya..

Arjun : chalo. ham aapako chhod denge

Sakshi : but arjun..

Arjun looked at her and signaled her to sit inside the car

Arjun in driver seat, sakshi in co driver seat, and back saanvi

Saanvi : achaa i am sorry. ( she says this holding sakshi's hand) i am very rude with you. I was really disturbed. Please don't mind

Sakshi :( smiled widely) no mention.. Even i will do the same if i feel like that..

Arjun was observing that girl, she was looking outside the window. Observing everything carefully. Arjun suddenly didn't noticed a car and jerked the vehicle which hit her hard. She winced in pain. Sakshi turned back and kept hand on her shoulder with concern.

Saanvi : sadak aur driving par dhyaan lagao please..

Sakshi chuckles. They reach saanvi's place with the help of her directions.

Saanvi : sir please come along with me you both please one coffee

Arjun : its already late

Saanvi : isliye hi bol raha hun its already late... Thoda aur hojane do

Arjun was convinced with that.. They got down the car

Arjun and sakshi went upstairs. They went upstairs. Arjun remembered the same apartment. He visited it some point of time. He went inside the house, sat reading some magazine over there and sakshi along with Saanvi went into the kitchen to get some tea to arjun and coffee for them.

Arjun started moving round the house. He suddenly recognised a small frame with boy photo along with her. He was astonished. He silently captured that pic in his mobile and kept it in the same place. He was ok but not peaceful at that place. He is feeling something wrong but he is not able to get them. Nor his soo called active senses are working at that point of time.

He has seen her somewhere but he is not able to remember her. By the time he was immersed in thoughts, sakshi is back with his tea. Saanvi went for freshup while sakshi sat beside arjun and started observing him

Sakshi : kya hua arjun.. Kuch problem

Arjun : kuch nahi. I was thinking about the case

Sakshi : arjun Acha yeh batao na.. Aaj ka case mein.

Arjun : sakshi behave... Its neither office nor crime spot.. So please lets don't start it her

Sanvi : ji tumhare coffee aur chai..

Arjun : yeh glass

Sanvi : yeh glass se kuch problem hai kya

Arjun : kuch nahi

Sanvi : arjun aap itna bada cop hai na agar aap ko kuch hua tho ( bited her tongue) i mean incase toh.. Ghar me log pareshan ho jayegi na

Arjun stiffens.. Sakshi nods a no with her head. Saanvi observes the tension over there.. After some pause arjun gets back to normal and turns to saanvi

Arjun : aap kya karate hain

Saanvi : main jeene ke lie koee khaas kaam nahin karata hun arjun... Bas odd jobs... But i used to work as crime articles and stories publisher and cartoonist in mumbai Times.

Arjun :(pointing towards wall) but tumhare degree toh psychology mein hai

Saanvi :kabhee-kabhee hamaari padhai aur hamari naukaree ke beech koee sambandh nahin hota hai. It just goes with the flow.

Sakshi : psychology mein bas degree yah PhD bhi

Saanvi :PhD kar rahi hun.. But u see project complete karna hai... Lekin mujhe itna intresting project nahi mil rahi hai mujhe. Isliye umeed chod kar crime article writer aur cartoonist job kar rahi hun

Arjun : what is your project about?

Saanvi : a case study of a person... I mean usske behaviour, charecter arc etc

Sakshi :arjun its sameer... I think we have to leave

Arjun just had a look at the house once again and checked it clearly. Arjun found a bracelet on her desk. He found it similar to the one he brought earlier.

Arjun : saanvi if u don't mind.. Can i use the restroom

Saanvi : yess..

Arjun moves to that room only to find the jameen hilane wala thing.. Saanvi and the photo with a man and other girl

He was shocked and astonished. But he went silently and returned back. He felt some connection, like he was there before or listened or visited it earlier.

Sakshi : arjun comeon

They left the place

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He was thinking restlessly about the address he saw there. He remembered it writing somewhere but it's not striking right in his brain. He was restless as he was feeling something in that house has connected to him. Saanvi was not any suspicious, but he was finding something fishy in her. He was moving around thinking about it. Suddenly this was disturbed by Rathore's call

Rathore : rawthe where are you. I was calling you from past 1 hour.

Arjun : bas kuch soch raha hun

Rathore : are you ok( concerned)

Arjun : i am absolutely fine SIR

Rathore : agar itna problem hai toh leave le sakthe ho.. Yaha pe aake hame kyu trouble karna

Arjun : sorry sir.... I am leaving

Rathore : exclamation ❗ : what...

Before he replied arjun left that place and moved away from there. He started his suv and moved to a college in the outskirts of Mumbai.

Arjun closed his eyes and rested his head on the bench.

...... Flashback........

TBC

Edited by Shriyareddy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Awesome update


Love it..


Arjun sanvi KO kaise janta he..


N who is in asalyam..?


Please continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Nice part dear

Just loved it 🙂

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Nice update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Hello people there are you there...

As i almost completed half of my first story so I thought of restarting this again

How about that

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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Superb plot..

Update soon..

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