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Part 1

Someplace in west Mumbai...


A girl and boy are driving their car. They are moving fast. They were also drunk. The boy was driving and the girl sat beside him and was already high in talli mode. The girl and boy stopped at a night club. They started to move inside the club but the guards asked them to show their id proofs for age.. That boy started yelling loudly at the bouncers at the entrance. The owner who listened about the mess came running there.


Owner : yaha kya horaha hai?


Boy : dekho mein business magnet smitha Patel ki beta hun... Be careful


Owner : sorry sir but age proof is necessary agar aap ek baar mummy ji ko call kiya tho mein use baath kartha hun


Boy : u bloody old man. U are asking proof of me.Wait i will see ur end..


Boy started to go into the fight. But the girl held his hand and stopped not to


Girl : they will find us if we do this here.. Plz hamare future kharab hojayega.Plz dont do this


Boy nods and leaves everyone there and went back to the car. Boy and girl left there hurrily. The night club owner found something fishy but choosed to neglect as it is the peak time for his business.


The boy and girl moved fast from there but soon they were surrounded by vehicles in the middle of the deserted road. They rounded them and suddenly hitted the front glass of the car...

(remember this story plz dont forget)

... Screaming background...


A man was moving moving front and back on his bed. He suddenly woke up and gulped a glass of water and moved to the restroom.. He was back with in 5 minutes in his officer uniform. He went near the white shirt which fell down in the process of picking one.


****flashback ****


A girl is moving here and there in a shopping mall and a boy was giving tired looks to her. Finally she moved near him and handed him over 30 shirts. He was tired and with dull puppy face


Boy : roshini please dont say i have to try all these


Roshini : arjun that's what i am going to say


Arjun : not again roshini.please we were here since morning and i tried nearly all the shirts here but u didn't even choose one. Look at the sales man how is he looking at me.. Please let's go


Roshini : no way. U are my would me husband. Aur wo acha hona mere pehla priority hai.. Leave about the world


Arjun: ok jaldi karo and this is the last round. I am going in


Roshini : ok.First start ur trails.


Arjun tries all and comes out with a white shirt. Roshini suddenly jumps at him. For which the customers over there suddenly gets frightened. She moves away awkwardly to arjun.She takes him to the trial room and closes the door


Arjun : what are you doing? Yeh mera ghar nahi.


Rosh : u look really cute.


Arjun : so...


Rosh : aisa koi rule nahi hai jo ladka ko hi karna hai.. Hain na?


Arjun : kiske baare mein baath kar rahi ho tum


Rosh : agar ladka use pasand hai tho puppy dene ki baath kar rahi hun..


Arjun :(excited) puppy.. Toh dedo..


He leaned forward and she slowly went near him, took his face into her hands went near him and turned the face aside and kissed in his cheek


*******end****


Arjun was out of his trance. He went downstairs to his mess in the lodge. It was a old lodge which is like a match stick in many buildings .he completed his breakfast and started to his work place


Narrator : His name is Arjun Suryakanth Rawthe. He is the second in command for the emergency task force Wing mumbai. He is stoner, man with or seems to be cold i mean absolutely no heart. The consequences made him stone kind. But whatever happens he has a mind which works at the speed of light. Those eyes reflect the remorse that he has been lifting all the days since a long time. He was on his journey to remove it soon. Hope he reaches there..


He moved inside the building. Parked his SUV. Suddenly saw a man on his motorbike. He waited for him to get inside. He came inside and wished him.


Boy : Good morning sir


Arjun : Good morning shree


Shree : how was your day sir


Arjun : not even completed a quarter of it and you are asking about it.


Shree : sir i have a request.


Arjun : ha shree ... Update chahiye yah naye software bolo

Shree : aisa kuch nahi sir.. Yeh hand aaj sprain hua.. Is liye please excuse me sir today i can't come to the crime scene


Arjun : no problem we can manage but ask ur khadoos chief once.. We cant get with his mood swings.


Shree :(inner voice) aap ka dosth toh aapki jaisa hi hogi na


Arjun leaves the place and enters the lift while shree makes an excuse and leaves from there waiting for chotu


Arjun is a man with no nonsense behaviour, but after getting into the team the only thing he got used to bear is shree's illogical things and questions which doesn't even make a sense.. Shree is man who is not just intelligent but also innocent.. If etf is any autimobile, he is the repair.. He may be a damage but that repair which gives boost to every one


As soon as they entered the etf building they were assigned with a case. They went around to the crime location. Arjun and chotu are running back for evidences while sameer was searching for the clues available on the spot. Arjun found someone suspicious so he started to follow her without her notice. She stood beside the victims father and kept hand in her back slowly. Arjun who was alerted by the situation , ran to that girl and snatched the bag and started to throw the things down. That girl who was standing in front of him started to yell at him


Girl : samzthe kyaa apne aap ko.. Yeh food dekho poora gira diya tune.. Y can't u give them time for themselves.


Sam (interrupting) sorry for the inconvenience caused.. Actually we are doing our duty here. And see after all we are police people.


Girl : toh kya mein bhi journalist hun... Sakshi.. Sakshi anand.. Tumhare jaise insaano ko mein hazaaro mein dekha.


Arjun : ok thats very good..


And looking seriously at her


Arju : can u please allow us to do our work


Sakshi : eyy khadoos dekh idhar... Yaha mein aunty ji ko help karne ke liye aaye hu... Aur tum kabab mein haddi ki Tarah aaya tha aur ab tum mujhe bata rahe ho ki i am disturbing u...


Chotu : tumhe arjun suryakantha rawthe.. Patha hoga na ye hi hai wo


Arjun glared at chotu. Sakshi turned towards chotu folded her hands and raised her eyebrow


Sakshi : Arjun... Meine bahuth kuch suna... Khadoos ek number ka... Akdu aur sadu bhi... Ab dekha bhi.. (looking at chotu) ab khush..i hate people who step into others works

Sam came in between and stopped the war there. Arjun left the place seriously while chotu behind him. While sakshi stood still and anger is evident on her face


...


Days flew away


After seven days


Etf has got a case which is related to the drugs and underworld in it. So arjun was really happy as he wanted to find the one. And it is his most awaiting chance he has been waiting for. Sam knew if they get that man caught who is back of all these then they can stop the usage of drugs among the kids. Shree had also resolved something. Chotu was also looking forward bcz it makes etf proud as they are going to save many kids and youngsters life


Sam : iske liye hame ek waste fellow chahiye jo student jaisa dikhna hai


Chotu : i will bring one


Arjun : chotu why are getting hell confused (sternly looking at shree) iska getup badlo.. Everyone believes even if we say them he is a school boy


Shree : lekin sir


Sam : shree jo rawte ne kaha wo hi sahi hai.. Kyuki tumse jyaada kisi par bharosa nahi kar sakhthe


Arjun: saloon lechalo ise aur makeover karo


Sam : shree u arrange ur luggage and id card. You are going to stay there for a week


Arjun : aur dekho kisiko bhi tumhare baare mein koi doubt nahi hona chahiye (after a pause) agar yeh case mein wo admi mil gaya toh kisi ka muh se shabdh nikalna bandh hojayega


Sam : jo tum peecha kar rahe ho wo ek saaya hai.. Jisko roop bhi nahi hai


Before they got into a heated argument. Shree and chotu interferred in the name of work and separated them. They went ahead in their works and At evng they got a call from commissioner office about the case


***7.30pm***


Com : dekho yeh case bahuth important hai.. Har ek cheez ko ache tarah dekho and waha hamari ek informer hai uske paas sara information hai.. Take it from her


Arjun(exclaimed) : a lady


Com : ha... Aur dekho be alert yeh bahuth sensitive vali case hai and be careful.. Don't leave any clues behind.


****week passed away***


Shree got some passes through some boys in the college. And he went to the rave party along woth arjun while chotu and sameer were waiting outside. Arjun went near the bar counter while shree moved to the dance floor.


Shree was tired after some time and once he was tired he went to the counter.


Shree : bhai peene ke liye kuch dedo na


Waiter gives a glass. Shree gulps it in hurry. It is so hard and he starts to cough.


Shree : yeh kya hai... Itna strong...


Waiter: raw vodka sir


Shree grabs another glass from a girls hand thinking it to be water. He drinks it in hurry and again coughs as it is even more stronger.


Shree : yeh yeh


Girl : takkila..


Shree : wont i get water here..


Suddenly every one moves towards him. Har ek ko us par shak hone laga kyonki voh alag tarah behave kar rahe hai.. I mean not like a spoilt brat. So they moved towards him all together.


But suddenly a man entered and started shouting


Man : naadiyaaa aagaya


As soon as they listened him every one started to run that side. Shree signaled arjun and arjun too moved that side.

A girl in her middle twenties was dancing on the floor. All boys and girls are waiting for her with much happiness and forwarded their hand to dance with her


Shree grabbed a boys hand who is running towards that girl and stopped him


Shree : bhai yeh peddler kaha hai yaar


Boy : waha dekho naadiya tho aagayi na. Lekin dekho bhai she doesn't give anything easily we have to impress her.. Agar use acha lag gaya toh woh tumhe ek note degi... Use exchange karne se tumhe woh drugs milega


Arjun understood the scene. He removed his jacket and moved towards nadiya. He stood amongst the crowd.. Nadiya while dancing gave him her hand.. Arjun smirked and accepted it and moved towards the big dance floor..


Nadiya (smiling and went near his ear) : kya chahiye tume... Dekho aap jo chahthe hai wo nahi miltha hai.


Arjun : mere paas paisa hai.. Aur tumhe pata hi hoga ki paison se hame kuch bhi kar sakthe hai.


Naadiya : paisa zameen par padne dhool hotha hai use sar par math chadne dho


Saying this she left from there. Suddenly police enter the scene and everyone started rushing outside nadiya defeatedly ran towards the backdoor. Arjun ran back of her. Sam shree and chotu covered her by all sides


Arjun: yo pakad gayaa.. Ab bhaagke koi faida nahi.. So u cant even try it.. Hands up.


Nadiya raised her hands but the next instant she beat shree black and blue pointed gun towards him


Nadiya : what are you thinking? Kya main bevkoof dikh rahe hoon who just surrenders so soon and easy


Sam : dekho naadiya lets sit and talk shree ko chodo


Nadiya : jiske paas yudh karne ke himmath nahi hai.. Use shanti ke baare mein baath karne ka adhikar nahi hai


Arjun : himmath tumhe kaise hui.. Ek ladka ke life se khela.. Aur ab theories aur quotations bol rahe ho


Nadiya : what.. Wo mere aage peeche ghoom rahe hai aur wo ab bhi mere paas hi hai..


Arjun advanced towards nadiya.. Both thier guns fell down so they started hand in hand combat suddenly commissioner entered the scene.. Naadiya became alert and saluted him as soon as he entered. Arjun and Sam saw this shockingly


Nadiya : sir yeh log mera mission par paani dala sir


Commissioner : why are you fighting with each other.. Just listen.. Meet your new officer ayesha kapoor and she is the one i have told you earlier.


Arjun : lekin yeh


Commissioner : Rathore tum sab nikalo yaha se.. Iska ID open hoga aur dekho yeh tumhare nayi team member hai.


Sam : lekin sir


Commissioner : it is final


Sam : yes sir. Jai hind (he saluted)


...next day...

Ayesha was in the office before anyone is there.. Arjun who is generally early was astonished by seeing her that early. He sat in his chair while ayesha neglected him.


He brought his coffee and sat down calmly. He looked at her she is playing with her pen


Arjun : waise bhi u are not that lame as i thought.


Ayesha : i think so u never saw a girl who is independent confident and with trained police skills i think so... Isliye aap itna surprise horaha hai..


Arjun : dekha maine lekin tum se bhi jyaada independent.. Tumse jyaada confident aur tumhare jaise trained Ladki ko... Hamari ex team mate thi... I praised u that doesn't mean i am back of u.. As an officer i appreciated u thats it


Before they got back again into a combat all members entered and they started discussing about the case. Arjun was infact felt drawn towards ayesha due to her independent behaviour her treatment for criminals and her tomboyish behaviour..


Ayesha also got adjusted with the atmosphere of the office. She got used to the shree's antics, chotu's food, arjun's mood swings and rathore's discipline. She is treated very carefully as she is the only lady in the team. But one day there came another girl.


Chotu : shree suno


Shree : are yaar kyu itna chilla rahe ho..


Chotu : ek aur Ladki aane wali hai aaj office mein wo ayesha ki tarah boss nahi.. Junior hai


Shree : wow thats great lets wait


Suddenly a girl enters the office. Shree who is laughing with chotu suddenly turns that side and gets shocked seeing that.


Girl : shree????


Shree : tum... Liza... Not again


Liza : u idiot... God plz bot again


Shree : y she no plzzz

Edited by Shriyareddy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it dear
Awesome part
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Awesome update
Love it
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Awesome update
Continue soon Eagerly waiting for next part
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Awesome update
loved it
shuru mein kaunsa couple tha?
lol...Roshni shopping ke chakkar mein Arjun fas gaya
milte hi Sakshi aur Ayesha se jhagda bhi kar liya
cont sooon
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Awesome update
But you didn't pm me
Liked intro of arjun n shree
Lolz arjun calling Sam khadoos chief
Look who saying this 😆
But you didn't gave Sam intro he is etf chief n chhotu also
First girl n boy met an accident
Hi profile case
Fb is cute so boy n girl was roshni childhood friends
Lolz shree is their fav Bali ka bakra for undercover mission
And both Acp had mutually agreed on this decision 😆
Poor shree want water and ended up drinking takila and vodka
arjun and coffee? no cutting chai!😲
Loved all three ladies entry
Ayesha's n liza's just like show
I disagree with arjun! I didn't saw any strong and fighter lady like ayesha in the show 👏usase jyada toh koi ho hi nahi sakti😆
Though Sakshi's little loud not like show but rocking as usual!😃
But loved her showing arjun mirror calling him akdu sadu😆
So teen deviyaa will be rocking at ETF
And you posted on women's day
Happy women's day

Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice update 👏
I love it
hope it's Arakshi story
i love to read Arakshi stories only ❤️
Please continue
Thank you for pm 😊

Edited by Arakshi234 - 6 years ago
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Welcome back dear
Who are the people in the starting
You start the update with a mystery
Nice
So arjun is having nightmares of roshni
But the fight of arjun aand rosh is cute one
Shree always have to play the college boy role
Lol
Team exposed nadiya
And her mission also got spoiled
Arjun fought with ayesha also
Than with sakshi also
Lol
Liza got appointment in etf
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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