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mina

@minamma

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Such a cute is

Loved it

Arjun was so sweet...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#22

What a beautiful OS 👏

I loved it so much!!

First, the title is apt for the story. I had a feeling it will be about Riya bringing Arjun to the home he is always running away from.

You've written this so beautifully that I'm running out of words to praise you. The emotions, the romance, the conflict of feelings, the teasing...everything was perfect.

Arjun left ETF in guilt but Riya is adamant on bringing him back.

The team is overjoyed to see him again.

Riya's jealousy/insecurity of Sakshi did the trick.

Hayee...the way Arjun confessed to her and the kiss at the end Everything was just magical.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please keep writing more beautiful stories.

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ramshaasrar

@ramshaasrar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Waah dabang riya bht mazedar os tha ...

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nicronyariya

@nicronyariya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Wohooo so so so so so cute yaar...

Tum na bilkul lively updates deti ho. .

Which I love the most.. ..

And coming to the story. ..

So sweet dude.. .

I was totally into it.. .

And I'm blushing. ..

Reading first half i was bit sad that arjun left police force.. .

But later when riya approached him I got some hope...

And literally even I jumped on my bed when arjun returned back to etf...

Loved the way etf once again made him realize that even he is a part of etf family and they love him alot. ..

I loved this arjun who was carefree and didn't take too long to confess his love. ...

So cute and romantic proposal. ..

I mean thoda funny bhi tha, the way arjun was driving riya crazy was too funny. ...

Finally riya brought her love back to home...

Lovely lovely lovely story... .

I loved it...

And love u too for such a wonderful idea.. .

Do write more stories on ariya soon

I'll be eagerly waiting...

Thanx for pm

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sanjanareddy670

@sanjanareddy670

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#25

aww nice

really superb

i loved it

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Shalvisharma97

@Shalvisharma97

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Very nice update dii

Loved it

Do write more

Finally riya is able to bring arjun back to etf

And ate hi us n case bhi solve kat diya

Wow

Y riya kko misunderstanding ho gyi

Finally arjun n sab set kar diya

Thanks for pm

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Amazing os sharu

Loved it

It's so cute and adorable one yaar

OS lamba tho tha par kya karu dil hi nahi bhara

Arjun ke resign hone ki news se ri bechain thi

She searched him everywhere but mila nahi

Par Kehte Hai na agar kisi cheez ko shiddat se chaho tho sari kaha at use tumse milane ki koshish karti hai

Finally ri ko arjun mil gaya

Par ow usse mile bina chale gayi

Aur ofc jaate hi usne sasha ke moment kharab kardiya

Aur uparse unhe itna tease kiya lol

Next day uska dabang avtar in principal office was so awesome

Usne sidhe Jaake details mangli

Aur arjun ke ghar tapak gayi

Bechara arjun sonch raha tha ke ri use bhul gayi par wo tho sidhe ghar pahunch gayi

And seedhe Keh diya use fark padta hai and kiss

Uski ek sentence ne arjun ko clean bild kardiya

And arjun ki dhamakedaar entry sam ko aur bakoyo ko shock lag gaya

Sakshi ka flirt karna dekhke poor ri insecure hogayi

But arjun noticed it and gave her forceful lift

And last but not least that proposal

Lol ri se advice li aur usi pe azmaya

Too beautifully written dear

It's a mood changer update for me

Thanks alot for such a cute story

Thanks for pm

Do write more

Bye take care

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Beautiful os

Loved it

Will read it again later:)

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treta

@tr_eta

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#29

Awesome os loved it

Ariya moments were beautiful

The proposal was lovely

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cuppypie121

@cuppypie121

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#30

Superb os
Par sakshi ka kya hua 😆

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