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nicronyariya

@nicronyariya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

I just want to say one thing

Please kaise bhi karke make riya once again fall for arjun... .

I can't say anything else as I'm badly crying...

Arjun had enough suffering...

Hope everything will go fine. ..

Cont soon

Thanx for pm

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Wowww its really a nice yaar

Arjun flashback superb

Riya lost her memory

No one knows about arjun and riya

Sam and etf were thr aisha nahi he kya

Continue soon

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nitris23

@nitris23

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

awesome update

love it

plz continue soon

thnx 4 pm

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Nyc start.. Plz use any other font n colour for fb.. It's really hard to see such a small font alphabet.. It's also painful too for watch... Use some little dark colour too..

Btw superb update... U can pm me Now coz I'm started reading all my pending stories..

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Nice CS .

Lovely update .

Cont soon .

Thanks for PM

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Arjunasr

@Arjunasr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Thank you so much readers those who commented on the previous part. Your valuable remarks really means a lot. It is the response that keeps us going. Thanks again to them.

However I find many are not responding to the updates. If you don't like it please let me know. I send pms to many and get response from less than half of them. If the standard is not up to the mark then let me know in some way so that I can stop bothering you all. I'll post one last chapter of Bepanah soon. I can't say about the next parts. If you want me to continue let me know else I'm leaving this forum as a writer. But as a reader I'll be their and please do not stop sending me pm.

Thank you all of you.

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Shalvisharma97

@Shalvisharma97

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Awesome update

Just loved it

How will arjun will live now

Without riya

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

And sorry for late reply

Actually i m busy with my studies

Because i am having my exam

Today only i got time

So i reply it to u

Continue soom

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Awesome update dear 👏

Wait...what?! Riya had a partial memory loss? She forgot Arjun and all the memories with him. How could you do this?

Arjun has suffered enough in this lifetime. He doesn't deserve any more pain

The flashback is too painful. Sameer really screwed up big time. And if he dares to show concern for Arjun now, I will flip.

Arjun is getting ready to break this painful news to Riya's family. Nobody knows the truth and I don't want to imagine what storm will be created after he reveals it.

Thanks for the PM

Please update the next part soon

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Before reading the update mein ye puchna chahti hu ko tim always 1st page ka link q bhejti ho?? Update page chor k?? I mean yaar ye keise pata chalega hume ki update konsa page pe hai?? Aage se dheyan rakhna.. Kisi ka nhi pata paar aab taak jitna v pm mila saab yehi same mila tha so update ko ignore karte gaya coz tym nhi tha na dhundh k nikalne k liye...

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Awesome update!! Aab ye namuna kon hai?? Jisse aapna ashiyana dkhana hai!! Kya riya ka memory lose nhi hua?? Ya usski memory wapas aane ka chances hai?? Jo us idiot diwane k vaja se rukawat aaya!! Jaldi update dena... Thnx for pm dear.. ( jo ki kuch kaam pe nhi aaya!! Hihihi!) aage se dheyan rakhna...