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Arjunasr thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wonderful update.
Finally!!
Firstly thank you so much for the update.
It's been so long.
Secondly please don't loose your motivation,
There are so many readers waiting for your updates.
And if that doesn't work keep in mind that this
Story is about to end so you need to complete it properly.
I guess it might help, it works for me.
Thirdly, coming to the update,
Loved it.
Arjun's plan is prim and proper.
Riya's support is awesome.
Ahana's contribution is praise worthy.
Sikander is actually in hell.
I just wanted to say it, may be it's offensive too,
That may be Sikander is bad, actually he's evil.
But one thing that doesn't change is he loves Ahana,
And that love is pure, what I felt through your story.
It didn't falter in so many years, neither did for
Once he behaved like Ryan.
Arjun killed his father, he could have punished her
For that but he didn't.
Yes I agree his way was wrong, creepy, and forceful.
But we can't deny the fact that he can do anything and everything for the ones he love.
Without thinking about his own life he went to save his love and that's commendable.
I know Sikander is wrong but in this update he gained my respect.
His crimes deserve a punishment and he too deserves death.
But now I'll not be that happy after his demise.
I just hope Ahana and Ryan don't end up being a couple,
both don't deserve each other.
Please please continue soon.
You know monthly updates are painful for the readers.
Please don't take so long to update the next part.
Continue soon.
And thanks a lot for pm.


Edited by Arjunasr - 6 years ago
bloomie thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjunasr

Wonderful update.

Finally!!
Firstly thank you so much for the update.
It's been so long.
Secondly please don't loose your motivation,
There are so many readers waiting for your updates.
And if th at doesn't work keep in mind that this
Story is about to end so you need to complete it properly.
I guess it might help, it works for me.
Thirdly, coming to the update,
Loved it.
Arjun's plan is prim and proper.
Riya's support is awesome.
Ahana's contribution is praise worthy.
Sikander is actually in hell.
I just wanted to say it, may be it's offensive too,
That may be Sikander is bad, actually he's evil.
But one thing that doesn't change is he love Ahana,
And that love is pure, what I felt through your story.
It didn't falter in so many years, neither did for
Once he behaved like Ryan.
Arjun killed his father, he could have punished her
For th at but he didn't.
Yes I agree his way was wrong, creepy, and forceful.
But we can't deny the fact that he can do anything and everything for the ones he love.
Without thinking about his own life he did he do save his love and that's commendable.
I know Sikander is wrong but in this update he gained my respect.
His crimes deserve a punishment and he too deserves death.
But now I'll not be that happy after her demise.
I just hope Ahana and Ryan don't end up being a couple,
both don't deserve each other.
Please please continue soon.
You know monthly updates are painful for the readers.
Please don't take so long to update the next part.
Continue soon.
And thanks a lot for pm.


Yess!! mad psychotic but still love
Well they do say that the best villain is the one the audience can empathize with...our dear writer has gone all out on this aspect here
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Posted: 6 years ago
super trap for sikky
hit him where it hurts the most his obsession for ahana
waiting to see if arjun and relationship with team becomes better after sikky death
Tumpa12 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
superb
loved it
thnx for pm
update soon
ariyabestfan thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awsome update
Love it

Wah.. Kya plan tha arjun ka..

Sikandar khud unke jal me fas gaya..


Ab dekhna he arjun kya haal karta he sik ka..

Please continue soon

Thanks for pm
Eka8 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
First Thanks for the brilliant update...
Its so exciting...glad to see sik getting trapped in the masterplan of arjun...he deserves that...
He needs to learn one right thing in his lifetime...never mess with ACP Arjun Rawte😎

Really excited for the action part...😃
Update soon please
armishra thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb update
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for pm
Mdmadona thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Omg nice plan by arjun
Finally sikky got trapped
Hope he won't escape this time
Awesome update
Cont soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Finally an update of my favorite story
Arjun was worried about ahana
But riya help him to come out from his fear
That sikander is very much trapped in arjun plan now
Arjun made a brilliant plan
Now sikander has to face the volcano
Altaf after seeing death so close in form of arjun
Speak everything like parrot
Lol
Thanks for pm
Sorry for late comment
Got stuck with studies
Continue soon
And don't loose interest in this story
Please
It's one of my favorite one
Bye
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: princessdivya

Awesome update

Nice trap for sikandar

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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