Ariya SS: Aashnaa [ON HOLD]

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: swaasp
loved it
thanks for the pm
update next part soon

Thanks a lot dear 😃

I'm glad you liked it...keep reading.

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: piya2812
awsm.

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing. Continue soon. Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😃

Keep reading...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: Bristy75
Superb update

Thanks a lot dear 😃

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: anishk_dashika
Hii dear!!
I recently happen to get aquainted with your stories. I read few of your previous works on Ariya and I am already your fan. You have superb writing skills atop of your beautiful theme and plot selection for the story. I love reading your works. I have got addicted to it plus being an Ariya fan who can resist such heart-throbbing and mesmerising stories from you.
Due to shortage of time I am not able to comment on each of your update but to be honest, each word from each update just hits straight to the heart.
As far as this SS is concerned, I am truly looking forward to see the chemistry btw our Ariya couple. The father-daughter bond is described flawlessly and with full emotions. All the characters have their special place in the story and you have described everything perfectly.
Please send me the PM of your stories from now onwards.
Add me in your buddy list.
Will eagerly wait for the next update.
Keep up your wonderful writing!!
Take care.
Bye.

First, welcome to my story.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear 😃

Wow you have really complimented me more than I deserve. And a fan? Whoa that's a huge thing for me. I never thought someone could potentially be my fan, so this is a blessing for me. I'm glad my stories could interest you to this extent. Your comment truly made my whole week. Arjun is the first forum where I have expressed my thoughts in stories so this comment really means a lot to me as a writer.

I'm really glad you liked this story. It was just an experiment with a different storyline so it's overwhelming to see you guys receive it with such love. I have no words to express my gratefulness.

Thank you very much once again dear!! This is definitely my most cherished comment ❤️

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
So children will provide the proofs she is innocent
How will team make up for her ordeal ??
Sometimes situation create a havoc on mind
Wounds heal but mental scars never

The team isn't truly at fault because they never did any harm to her.

Once the children expose the truth, everything will be alright.

Riya has many deep, painful mental scars than this incident.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: kesha4
Nice update !

Thanks a lot dear 😃

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: IfritAmbrose
Wow..
I loved the update.

but did not liked the Violence part a bit, understood it was needed in the situation but still not liked seeing Riya like this without any of her fault.

Itni Critical situation mein bhi Hormones are activated for Ariya , Kamaal hai 😆

the kids are Cutie-pies, hoping they will atleast be at Riya's aid.

Update Soon.

Thanks a lot dear 😃

I can understand that seeing Riya like this was probably hard but then again, like you said, it was necessary in the situation.

The kids will definitely be at Riya's aid if she is innocent.

Keep reading...

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: MAMONIGUHA
hiii... good morning... I'm new... AMD totally in love with this story... plzzz continue the story dear... read all 3parts and FL in lv wth this...

First, welcome to India Forums and Arjun. 🤗

Thank you so much for reading my story. 😃 It truly means a lot.

I'm really glad you like this story...I will update it soon.

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: cuteangel32923
Awesome update...
Oh nooo...
Ye inhone kya kia...
Bechari bekasoor riya ko bina baat ke itna torture kia...
I just hope riya unhe aasani se maaf na kare...
Finally shaurya and ananya identified riya...
I hope ab etf ko realise hoga ki vo kitna galat the...
Pls continue soon...

Thanks a lot dear 😃

Riya ko torture ETF ne nahi kiya. Police waalo ne use maara hai.

Yes, ETF will realize their fault when kids reveal the truth...keep reading.