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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing CS
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Superb cs
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Superb cs
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello alll me again he he
Jiski kuch stories incomplete hai
Lol khair start with a new one so here is part 1 ...
Update depend on response only



Part 1
Small beautiful house ... geetanjali sadan
At 7.30am morning

Riya : ufff uthh jao abb sona its getting late
Sonakshi : uffo riyaa sone do naa 5 min aur bas 5 min
Riya : 5 min 5 min karke half an hour ho gaya he
Sonaaa : hummm 5 min aur
Riya : uthho ab its already 7.30 ... aur jaha tak mujhe yaad hai 9.30 ko aapko aapki job par jana hai ... jahan tumhara pahala din hai aaj ...
Sona : what ohhh god itna time ho gaya kyaa riya uthaya bhi nai
Riya : tum naa sona kab se uthaa rahi hu
Sona : chalo chhodo i m getting ready ... waise bhi aaj me wo red color ka tumhara suit pahnungi okkk
Riya : humm okk tum ready ho jao me breakfast lagati hu fir mujhe bhi nikalana hai
Sona : okk


Sona left


Riya prp breakfast. ... sona us ready
Sona : wowww luchhi my fav thanks riyu tum nahi hoti to mera kya hota
Riya : abb breakfast karo aur jao ... waise ye red dress kis khushi mai
Sona : waise bhi aaj special day hai naa ... laal rang hota hai pyaar ka passion ka aur kya pata aaj k din mujhe bhi koi mil jaate mera Valentine...
Riya : tum aur tumhari love stories ...
Sona : kyaa di kabhi to believe karo ... love bohot imp part hota hai
Riya : ohhh plzz tum ye sab baate mujhse dur hi rakhoo samjhi ... pyaar jaisi faltu baate aaj kal ki duniya me exist nahi karati samjhi
Sona : nahi di pyaar hai aaj bhi hai ... haa milna mushkil jarur hai lekin pyaar hai ... aur me apni love story jiye bina nahi marane wali
Riya : tum naa sonaa kitne baar kaha he ye marne ki baat maat kiya karo. ... maa baba k baad tum bhi chhod dena chahati ho mujhe
Sona hugs riya : ohhh di ... me hu naa humesha ... aur me durga maa se prarthna karungi ki aaj k din aapko bhi aapka pyaat jarur mil jaaye
Riya : pagal ho tum ...
Door bell rings
Sona : chalo me dekhati hu kon hai kya pata ... mera pyaar door k paar hi khada ho
Riya : haaa haa jao jao ...


...
Rawte mention ... very beautiful huge mention ...6.30am.
Dev : arjun yaar inn papers par sign kar de
Arjun : yaar kitne baar kaha he ... inn sabse mujhe dur rakh
Dev : i know lekin aap bhul rahe he rawte industries k owner aap bhi hai
Arjun : haaa lekin uske partner aap bhi hai ... aur power of attorney aapke hath mai hai
Dev : but bina aapke signature k me kuch nahi karunga
Arjun : dev tu naaa sudhar jaaa aur company apne naam kar le
Dev : ji nhi me aisa kuch nahi karungi tu malik hai aur me nahi
Arjun : yaar me naa ik din sab chhod kar chhala jaunga
Dev : yaar tu naaa ... my angry young man ... sign kar de
Arjun : tujhe abhi bhi lagta he ... ki malik hu ... tu mere liye employe hai ... left his room
Dev : areee yaar arjun sun tooo
Arjun : kyaaa sunu yaar ... tune hurt kr diya mujhe ye keh k
Dev : hummmn chal ab senti maaat ho ... me company ka malik hu aur tu ... tu mera angry bird hai
Now both laugh

Ishwari : tum dono itni subah subah kaha jaa rahe ho
Dev : maa me naaa golu ki class teacher se milane jaa raha hu uske ghar ... usne kal golu ko mara
Arjun : kyoo aisa kya hua ... tu uske ghar kyo jaa raha he school me mil le naaa
Dev : nahi yaar school timing par meri meeting hai ... aur tu kaha
Arjun : aur mujhe aaj sameer k ghar jana hai ... waha se hum dino ETF jayenge
Ishwari : tum dono pahale nashta karo fir jaha jana hai chale jana ...
Dev and Arjun : maaa
Ishwari: koi maa maa nahi ... ya to nashta karke jaoge yaa nahi jaoge ... waise arjun kal raat ko tum fir se late aaye the naa
Arjun : wo woo mai ...
Ishwari : arjun isse to tumhari health kharab ho jayegi beta
Arjun : wo maa me dhyaan rakhunga
Ishwari : tujhe koi problem hai to bata mujhe ... ya tu mujhe apni maa nahi samjhata ...
Arjun : aisi koi baat nahi hai ...
Ishwari : kaise bhul sakati hu mai ... jab sahab aur memsabhab ki jaane k baad tune mujhe aur mere dono baccho ko sahara diya ye ghar diya ...
Arjun leave his breakfast and hugs ishwari
Arjun : aap aisa kyo kehati hai ... mene humesha aapko meri maa hi mana hai aur dil se mana hai ... mene dev ko aur nisha ko apne bhai bahan hi mana hai ... mere parents k sath aapne bhi to apne pati ko khoya aur dev ne apne papa ko .. sach kahu to aapka sab kuch chinne wala me hi hu
Ishwari arjun k ansu pochaati hai ...
Ishwari : aisa maat bol beta mene tumhare ma baba ko wachan diya tha ki tumhara khayal rakhungi ... mene kabhi tujh me aur dev me fark nahi kiya ...
Dev : kyaa aap dono itne emotional baate lekar baith gaye
Arjun : accha aaj subah ye sab shuru kisne kiya
Dev : ok abbb khatam bhi me hi kar raha hu ... chal tu baith breakfast karke tujhe chhod dunga ... sam k ghar k pass me hi kahi rehati hai wo teacher bhi ...

Golu : are mere dono big chaa and big big chha ik sath
Arjun : kyo aaj school nahi jana kya
Dev : homework kiyaa
Golu : ohho aap dono bhi naaa subah subah shuru ho gaye
Arjun : waise kal kya hua school me
Golu : wo sab chodo aap dono koi kaam nahi he kyaa dadi me kya socch raha tha ki aap naa inn dono ki shadi karwa do
Ishwari and arjun dev surprise ...
Ishwari : kyoo
Golu : wo kyaa hai naaa shadi k baad ye dono meri big chhi and big big chhi me busy ho jayenge aur mera piccha chhutega
Arjun and dev : accha beta ruk batate hai

Arjun and dev chess golu in house last dono pakd lete hai
Golu : okk okkk abb aap log jao ... me school chala jaunga
Dev and arjun kiss golu and left ...


So this was first part

Howz was it
Next part depend on response only
Boring lagaa hoto bata do
I will discontinue this story

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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Wow soniya and devjun bond was so sweet
And ishwari she love arjun as his own and he too respect her a lot
Lol this golu part was so funny
Cont soon
thanks for pm
Bye take care
Edited by sana1819786 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Wow awesome part loved it ariya nd devakshiin same story.
Plzz continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Awesome amezing update
Loveit
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Nice starting..
Continue soon..
Waiting for next ..
Updated..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Nice starting Naina
Awesome part and CS
Sona is bubbly and Chripy her belief in love was nice
Why Riya sounds low
Dev and Arjun share a sweet bond
Even Eshawari is a loving mother
Waiting to read more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Sona bubbly character per Riya itni dull aur pyar mein believe nahi karti kyu Arjun dev bonding lovely ishwari loomloo nice character aage bhi aisa hi ho golu naughty boy fab start dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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