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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

res.. but I'll give my feedback on Wattpad...😊

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Swati

@swaasp

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Posted: 7 years ago

#232

amazing update

thanks for the pm

waiting for next part update soon

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RiyaA123

@RiyaA123

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#233

So riya knows about everyone...

Everyone has a past... I'm glad you thought of writing this warna in the show...all that was shown was arjun...

Every one of the member makes a team... nit only one

I love your writing and long updates

The relationship between ariya right now is cute

The shirt scene was adorable... I could never imagine arjun crying over a shirt like this... but this makes him more human...

I loved the way all the feelings were described and I love it when you write multiple povs

Keep writing

UPDATE SOON

Thanks for the pm

Sorry for late comment

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon

Edited by zubiya92 - 7 years ago

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#235

awesome

don't have words to express it.

can't wait for three punishment, ariya plan for rathod

continue soon

all of your parts are superb

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KrazzyGirl

@Krazzy_Girl

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal
Wow yaar Kya mast update tha samajh mein nahi aa raha kya comment du Sam ko riddhi se baat karta dekh ayesdA aur abhi uneasiness feel karte hai ariya Sam pe gussa hotel hai ki Ayesha ko impress karne ke chakkar mein woh zyada hi friendly ho Raha tha riddhi se mehta case shut drug overdose suryakant ke office mein illegal work etf ko case milta hai and after that u beautifully described everu p.o.v. Riya ko aise dekh Kar bahut achcha lagta hai all rawte family stunned hai etf aur especially Riya ko dekhkar my God yeh case ekdum roller coaster ride ki tarah tha fantabulos update dear eagerly waiting for nxt thanks for wonderful update per pm nahi mila

Sorry guys this time I can't pm anyone. But from next time I will pm everyone, promise😊😊