Thread 2 ariya os: dil pe jor nahi.. epilogu

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mubash1607

@mubash1607

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Ufff Finally epilogue mil hi gaya... Kitnaaa wait karaya but ki na intazaar ka phal bahot meetha mila happy ending se...

Zabardast ending...

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gauri

@ariya143

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mubash1607
Ufff Finally epilogue mil hi gaya... Kitnaaa wait karaya but ki na intazaar ka phal bahot meetha mila happy ending se...
Zabardast ending...

Hahhahah thanks dear..

For u com.. yes or ek epilogu baki hai.. wait for next..

Hope u like.

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gauri

@ariya143

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Epilogu 2..

arj: dekha rahi ho rosh jab se tum ne meri shadi ri se ki hai tab se ye haal hai.. meri baat he nahi manti.. ab tum he kuch bolo use..

rosh: dad aap bhol kyu jate ho ab mera naam bhi roshni hai..(4 old girl ) aap badi maa ki photo se baat karte hai but mujha lagta hai mujha se.. but yaad rakhiye aap mom ki shikayta nahi kar sakte bcoz badi mom n mai bhi mera mom se bhot pyaar karte hai or hum humesha mom ke side mai rahe ga..sys..

arj pout n look rosh pic n he's daughter..

arj : gudiya tum ne bhi party change ki.. tum to mera side thi na..

rosh : dad mai to aap ke he said hu.. but mom sahi hai aap humre sath bhar jane ka plan kar ke cancel kar chuke ho ab aap ko punishment to milegi he na esliya mai mom ke side hu.. smjha..

ri : ab smjha tum mr rawate... or arva 10 min mai tum freshe ho ke nahi aye to dad ke sath tume bhi punishment..

arva : mom mai to aap ke sath hu.. bus abhi aya.. n bhag jata hai..fresh hone..(4 year old boy ariya are twins..rosh n arva.)

arj : what ri mera dono bacho ko apna tarf karliya tum ne this not done yaar...

ye to survat hai mr angry man.. tum ne apna promise toda hai..ab dekho mai kya karti hu..

5 years before..

rosh do no ko kush dekha ke wo bhi ab khush he.. but us ke pass time nahi tha..

jab wo jada he week ho gaye tab ariya painik ho gaye une bhi smjha nahi aa raha tha kya kare..but rosh un dono ko smjha rahi thi..khuda pain mai ho ke bhi usa apna arj n ri ki chinta thi..

rosh bus ek he baat bolti thi..tum do no paresan mat ho.. mai mar bhi gaye to tum do no se jada dur nahi reh sakati... mai bhagwan se jhagda ke phir se avugi.. but esa bar tumhari beti ban kar humesha ke liya tumre sath rehna..or ariya bus ankhon mai asu le ka usa dekha te rehate.. smile karte.

esa he kuch din baad.. rosh do no ko chod ke chali gaye.. ariya or sam bhot dukhi the une unki jindagi ka eaham ensan jo khoya tha..

6 month esa he gaye.. ariya esa he the..but sam ke smjha ne par arj smjha gaya.. leikin ri ko kesa smjha na hai usa smjha nahi aya..

jab wo ghar gaya tab ri bas apna kam kar ke dining mai bethi thi.

arj us ke pass ake ri kab tak esa rahe ga ab..rosh to gaye.. lekin us ki kami hame humesha rahegi but hume age badhana hoga.. tum bhula gaye..

rosh kya boli thi.. wo phirse ayegi humare life mai humari beti ke roop mai.

ri arj ko hug kar ke toot jati hai..arj us sambhal ta hai..

esa he sub normal chalta hai ariya ke bich..

us ke 6 month baad

arj jab gahr aya.. pari kaha ho tum ..plz mera liya chai lav..

ri reply na kar ke bus apna aap mai smile de rahi thi..

arj : ri jaan plzz do na..

ri : not reply..

arj : ab ri ke pass ake kya hua dear tum reply kyu nahi de rahi ho..

ri : arj ab tume apna kam khud kar ne hoge.. n us ka haat apna Tami pe rakha ke.. di ane wali hai..arj

arj bhot khush hota he or ri ko god mai utha ke ghum ne lagta he ..

ri khushi se ro ne lagti he..or arj bhi..dono apne ane wale kal ke liya wait kar rahe ...

fb end.

arj jab khoya tha apne thought mai tab us pata n chal te he us ke anhko se asu aa rahe the..

rosh ye dekha ke.. arj ke god mai ake..us ke asu phochti he us se arj fb se bhar ata he or usa dekh ta he..rosh dad aap ro kyu rahe hai .. mai hu na aap ke pass..

arj rosh ki baat se jat se usa hug karta he n bolta he mujha pata he meri rosh mujhse or ri se dur nahi rehsakti..love u bacha..

tabhi ri or arv.. we love u too..n hug both.. 4 group hug karte hai..

happy ending..

I know bhot emotional tha but bardash karlo .. HahahaaaH..

sry for spilling mistake.. n yes any one heart .

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ShriRukminiKrishna

@RainOfDew

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Yay 1st comment

Nice and emotional ending

Rosh un dono ki beti bankar wapas aa gayi

Lol.. riya ne dono bachho ko apni side kar liye

Thnx for pm

Edited by Ariyatogether - 7 years ago

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mubash1607

@mubash1607

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Superb ending nd emotional too but bahooot badhiya perfect ending mmmuuuaaahhh...

Thanks for PM...

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ruhi1985sheetal

@ruhi1985sheetal

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+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Emotional and beautiful ending congrats for successfully completed ur story

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Suzie

@etfr

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Amazing lovely story

Beautiful ending

Love the way you reunite ri arj n rosh.

Nicely written

Thanks for PM

Keep writing

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

So lovely ending dear
Ri apne dono bacho ko apne team me karliya aur arj hai ki rosh ki photose complain kar raha hai...lol
And fb was soo emotional
Loved it dear
Thank u so much for this lovely story and also for giving epilogue
And congrats for completion of your story successfully
Do write more on ariya
Thanks for pm
Bye take care

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

nyc update .. emotional epilogue ...
Thanks for pm..

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gauri

@ariya143

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sana1819786
So lovely ending dear
Ri apne dono bacho ko apne team me karliya aur arj hai ki rosh ki photose complain kar raha hai...lol
And fb was soo emotional
Loved it dear
Thank u so much for this lovely story and also for giving epilogue
And congrats for completion of your story successfully
Do write more on ariya
Thanks for pm
Bye take care

Thanks to u to dear.. agar tum msg na karti to complete na kar pati ... N yes glad u like my story ..