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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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hello all

I am very glad with the response of all your for giving it a chance. so for you all i am post first part here. n will keep posting here till i get proper response n if you dont feel like connecting with it story will be either shifted to blog or will be pm updates who wanna read .

so here is first part..this part contain only introduction of childhood life of all characters . real story will start from next part. hope you all don't mind..

thanks

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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part 1

year 1988

location - Varanasi (previously banaras) UP India

a big house is decorated like bride n still preparation is going on. two foreigners precisely American come there n ask a servent

American man - hello

ser - ek min bhaiya ji hume angreji nahi aati

American women - par hume thoda thoda aata hai

( she said in American accent n broken words.)

ser - accha ji aisa hai to kahiye hum kya madad kar sake hai aapki

A W - ji hume sharstri ji se milna hai.kya unka ghar yahi hai.

ser - makan to e hi hai par ou ka hai na ki wo is wakhat bahut vyast hai.

(yes this is the house but he is very busy right now)

am w - busy hai kuch khas hai. house bhi decorate hai

ser - aaj shastri ji ke pote ka namkaran hai. or bachua ki kundli bhi shastri ji padne bale hai. suna hai bachua bada tejwan or sundar hai,

a m - unke beta karta kya hai.wo bhi pundit hai kya

ser - aapki janna hai unke bare mai rukiye are shankar jara chinu ko bula de wo inhe acche se samjha degi..then to couple ..chinu shankar ki bitiya padi likhi hai

chinu come

chi - ji namaste

a m - hum shastri ji k bare mai janne aaye hao

chi - shastri ji banaras ke jane mane jyotishi hai.wo bahut bade deah bhakt or freedomfighter bhi hai. unke bete parabhat bhaiya phd hai or university mai professor hai . prabhat bhaiya ne apni sath padi shalini bhabhi se shadi ki . sabne socha padi likhi bahu hai nakhre honge .par bhabhi ne bina lady k ghar ko itne acche se sambhala hai . or abhi 5 din pehle unke ghar chand se bete ka janam hua hai..aj usi ka namkaran hai.waise apko kya kam hai

a m - hum unke pas apni kundali le kar aaye hai..unhe dikhani hai.,

ch - accha aap aaiye abhi to wo ceremony chal rahi hai.

trio enter

shastriji is doing hawan n a young man n young beautiful lady is sitting infront of them .a cute baby is laying in her lap.after puja shastri ji take child in his hand n do tilak on his forehead

sha - humare pote ka naam aaj se hoga ayugdh. ayugdh shstri.

shalini - baoji is naam ka matlab

sha - bahu ayugdh shivji ka ek naam hai,. humara pota shiv ji ki tarah hi desh k dushmano ke liye mahakal hoga. acchai or sacchai ki pratimurti hoga. iske liye sewa or karm hi dharm hoga.

prabhat - par baoji iski apni jindgi ka kya.

sha - jo dusro k liye jeete hai unki jindgi mai koi aata hai or use jeene layak banata hai.ek sath ek viswas bankar..iski jindgi mai bhi wo pari ban kar ayegi. jaise shiv ji k jeevan mai ma parwati ayi thi. jo unke liye hi nahi pure vishw k liye ujala layi thi.

all get happy and bless child

some year later

location Varanasi

8 year ayugdh is playing with his friend.

one boy - ayu tu kitna accha cricket khelta hai . tu na cricketer banna.

ayu - nahi mai to soldier banunga or desh k dushmano se ladunga.baoji kehte hai desh sewa hi bhagwan ki sewa hai. humare deshwasi khush or safe hai to bhagwan bhi humse khush rahenge.

boy 2 - tere gale mai jo shivji ka locket hai bada accha hai

ayi - ye baoji ne diya hai mujhe , wo kehte hai ye meri raksha karega.

they again busy in their play.

scene shift

kolkata

KM orphanage

one 8 year boy is running cryingly n one lady in white sari run after him.

lad- nalin aab ruk jana nahi to maar khaoge

boy stop n look at her with fear

lad - nalin chalo khana kha lo

nal - kanta kaki mujhe nahi khana..apne kaha tha jab mai bada ho jaunga mere mummy papa mujhe lene ayenge. batao na kaha hai meri ma.

kanta sigh

kan - beta sun yaha jitne bhi bacche hai na kisi ki ma hai na pita or na hi honge, tumhe aise hi jeena hai puri jindgi.

nalin cry

nal - kaki meri maa kabhi nahi ayegi.mai kise ma bulaunga. kaun meri bat sunega kaun mujhe pyar karega

kan - ye le ye durga ma hai sabki ma hai ye. aaj se ye teri ma .

nal - sacchi

kan - ab khana kha le beta.

he agree n hug idol of ma durga

scene shift

location Chennai

one cute little girl is playing with gun. one old man come

o . m - shivya kya hai ye kitni bar kaha hai gun khelna ladkiyon ka kaam nahi. go n play with doll . ya fir dr dr khelo ..

shi - nahi thatha (grandfather ) mujhe gun se khelna hai mujhe gudiya khilone pasabd nahi.

om - accha humari gudiya ko gun pasand hai .

n he start tickling her n her laugh echoed in big hall

her amma come

madhu - appa jyada mat bigadiye ise

om - are bacchi hai shivi abhi. or ek lauti poti itne bhaiyon mai, bade hokar to ye bhi hum sabki tarah dr banegi .abhi gun se khel liya to kya.

madhu smile n left.

shi - amma thatha mai bade hokar dr nahi banungi.

her tata again tickle her n her laugh echoed in hall again

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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scene shift

location - Ahemdabad Gujarat

one nine year girl wakeup n take her doll n search for her parents. she come to their room n asusual see them fighting . his dad slap her mother n she take bag n left home. she cry a lot n ask her to stop but her mother left n her father hold her.not to let her go with her mother.

gi - dad mom

dad - bhumi beta ab mom nahi ayegi .hum nayi mom layenge,.inse bhi acchi

bhu - nahi dad mujhe apni mom hi chahiye,

they discuss n her dad slap her also. she cry a lot n faint.

scene shift

location mumbai

two boys are playing in a garden

boy 1 - bhai ball mujhe do aaj mai ise dur tak pahuchaunga.

a 8 year old kid said to his 2 year older bro.he give his younger bro ball n y kid throw it far

boy 1 - bhai mai lata hu

boy 2 - nahi anuj mai launga. waha kante hai tujhe chub gaye to.

anuj - par bhai aapko bhi chot lagegi na,

abeer - mujhe jo bhi ho tujhe kharoch bhi nahi aana chahiye. ruk mai lata hu.

he take ball n injured too

anu - bhai. dekha chot lag gayi. humesha aisa hi karte hai. meri chot apne par le lete hai.

ab - kuch nahi hua mai thik ho jaunga. teri hasi dekh kar hi to mujhe khushi milti hai. chal ab khelenge.

both play again..,

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jaipur rajasthan

one 8 year boy is searching for someone

boy - meera meera kahan ho tum

a 6 year old girl come from behind n climb on his shoulder . he smile n carry her in haweli.

boy - bas meera mai thak gay.

mee - he he par hume to bahut maja aya.

she clap n he look at her amused.

mee - sharad aap kal humse milne q nahi aye.

sha - kal hum baba sa k sath factory gaye the. fir thak kar so gaye.

mee - jaiye hum gussa hai ap factory gaye or humare liye wo khatti meethi goli nahi laye.

first she.make cute face while remembering khatti methi goli then make angry face.

sha - are aisa ho sakta hai hum apni best friend ki fav khatti meethi goli na laye.

he take out a small packet from his packet, n she greedily look at packet n snatch from him..n start eating cutely .n he look at her smile.

mee - aap na humare best friend hai..or ye khatti meethi goli ..

she eat n again make cuteface,,

scene shift

location bhopal MP

one girl is playing with her doll .combing its hair . she hear soft sob. she try to find source of sob n outside her home she find a girl of her age is crying .

girl 1- tum ro q rahi ho..

girl 2 - mujhe bhuk lagi hai kal se kuch nahi khaya

g1 - q nahi khaya

g2 - mere pas khane ko nahi hai na hum gareeb hai

g1 - ye gareeb kya hota

g2 - pata nahi.bas ma kehti hai.hum gareeb hai to humare pas khana nahi.

g1 - ruko

she run inside n come with food.

g1 - ye lo.kha lo .or jab bhi bhuk lage aa jana ..or ye meri doll bhi.le lo.

girl 2 left happily n girl1 look at her back happily .she hear

anu...,

she turn n run inside

her mumma mrs priya sharma pick her n she kiss her mom cheek

pri - anu kaha thi baccha kab se dhund rahi thi.

she tell her mother whole story

pri - very good anu tumne use.khana diya. par wo doll tumhari favorite thi na.

anu - mumma mere pas to bahut sare toys hai uske pas kuch nahi .to maine use doll de di. wo kitni hasne lagi mumma..

her mother hug her n think how can a six year old girl is so sensitive . she is blessed to have such a gold heart daughter anwita. she is truly an angel.

tbc...

precap - a glimps of all life after growing up...

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Mishthi_Shivsai

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Very beautiful and meaningful update di.

Loved the way u portrayed a glimpse of their childhood which will eventually justify them, their passion , emotion, and how they react to a situation in the near future.

Felt like reading an extensive character sketch.

Finally hamare hero ka namkaran ho gaya. Loved the uniqueness of the name. Let me add this to my fav list. Ayugdh is born with a fighting mentality otherwise its not possible to choose a career like this at this tender age with such a passion.

The childhood pic of nalin moved me to tears. Its a very realistic view of all the kids who r tagged as orphans and left to live a life in the care of ladies like kanta. Not so often they r sensitive and caring like her which increses their sufferings manifold.

OMG shivya is a daring girl toying the gun at such a tender age. He he he. Lets see what has future in store for her.

Bhumi's condition again left me teary. Very pathetic. Children of broken marriage usually suffer a lot and bore a scar so deep in life that often it overshadows their emotions. And parents like this should be given a severe blow ek toh pehle bacche ke bareme , uski future ke bareme nehi sochte, just tread on their heart and mind mercilessly aur jab sawal karo toh physically hurt them. Arey bacche hai agar agar sab samajh hi jayenge toh bado ke saath farak kya rehega. Shame on parents like this.

The sibling bond b/w abeer and anuj is not only cute but very pure, deep and unconditional as well. Abeer is ready to bear almost anything and everything for his kid bro. Its gives a shudder to think how will he be able to cope up with the news of anuj's death and bear the pain of the immense loss.

Oh great. Meera and sharad are a sweetheart. They r so adorable and cute. Hope they remain with each other for support through out their life.

And last but not the least anu. A cutie girl with a big heart which can easily accomodate others pain. She is matured beyond her age and sensible too. Never step a way back to contribute her part in helping others.

Lets see how each of them connects with each other in the future and how these kids of today grow up to become the SAAT. Thanks fo the pm di. Will wait for the leap. The journey has just started and its an interesting one, no doubt of it.

Edited by utsha - 8 years ago