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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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part 68

both ariya sit opposite side of door .

after 10 min

ri - arjun jao yaha se

ar - mai kahi nahi jane wala samjhi tum ,tum sirf meri ho or ab koi bhi tumhemujhse dur nahi kar sakta.

ri - sab kuch badal gaya arjun sab kuch. hum bhi ,na mai wo mai hu na tum wohi tum

ar - nahi jiya kuch nahi badla , na mai badla hu na hi tum badli ho, ha waqt or halat jarur badal gaye hai. par ye waqt or halat bhi humare pyar ko kamjor nahi kar paye .wo aaj bhi waisa hi hai

ri - tum jao yaha se ,mujhe kuch nahi sunna

ar - nahi mai bat kiye bina nahi jane wala , darwja kholo

ri - mai nahi kholne wali samjhe tum

ar - nahi samjha mai, ab kuch nahi samjhna mujhe , kahi nahi jaunga mai yahi rahunga mat kholo tum darwaja .mai yahi ho.

ri - jo marji aye karo.

now both get silent.

half hour later

it start raining.he fully drenched in water n not moving to shade himself..its winter day also.ri look at him from window n he is all drenched.

he also look at her n she again close window curtains .n rush toward roof n sit on floor n she also drenched in water

he start singing n she is crying

jaane jaan jaane jaan

sune hai najare dil tujhko pukare

jane jaan jane jaan

bin tere kya jeena

sune hai najare dil tujhko pukare

meri to khushi teri hai ye jindgi teri

jane jaan jane jaan ,bin tere kya jeena

aise kaise honge pure ,mere sapne adhure sathiya sathiya

jaan bhi de du tujhe tere liye jeena mujhe oh riya oh riya

tanha akele kahi main na tujhe jane dunga priyatama priyatama

kasme nibahunga mai tujhpe lutaunga mai do jahan do jahan

na koi adchan hai na koi bhi ab mushkil

keh rahi hai ye aahien nadeek hai meri manjil

duniya se na harenge kismat ko sanwarenge

jane jaan jane jaan

bin tere kya jeena

sune hai najare dil tujhko pukare

meri to khushi teri hai ye jindgi teri

jane jaan jane jaan ,bin tere kya jeena

ho ooo hooo hooo hooo,,,aaa hooo...aaa

sadiyon purani hai ye apni kahani hai ye dilruba dilruba

geeton ki jubani hai tu saanso ki rawani hai tu ohh jiya oh jiya

nagme lutata rahu tere liye gaata rahu umar bharr umar bhar

vade kabhi todun na mai sang tera chodu na mai humsafar humsafar

le ke tere sab ansu tujhko sanam hasi de du

,bhar ke tujhko bahon mai main dard tere sab le lu

tu meri khudai hai nas nas mai samayi hai

jane jaan jane jaan

bin tere kya jeena

sune hai najare dil tujhko pukare

meri to khushi teri hai ye jindgi teri

jane jaan jane jaan ,bin tere kya jeena

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#562

both drenched in water plus both are in stressed n weak ..arjun sit on floor n fainted n here ri also faint..

scene shift

arjun home

sam - ye log aye nahi ab tak.pata nahi kya hua hoga

ai - dekhiye hum unhe space dena chahte the but ab bat aage badti dikh rahi hai .i tjink hume unhe dhundna chahiye.

sh - aisha thik keh rahi hai.

kar - yes mujhe bhi chinta ho rahi hai.wo ghar hi gayi hogi or arjun uske piche ,lets go.

all agreed n follow him.they reach ri's house. n found faint arjun there .they get shocked n take him inside home. karan has its kyes.

kar - mai dr ko call karta hu.

ai - riyu riyu kaha hai.

sam - dekh yahi kahi hogi,

sak - humare andar aane ki awaj sunkar wo jarur aati.

ch - kahi kuch gadbad to nahi.

they search for riya n find her unconscious on roof.

they get scared n shocked n take her to her room. aisha sakshi n lisa change her dress n here karan ,sam change arjun's cloth.n both of them will be coverd with duvet

sometime later dr arrived n check them.

dr - bahut tez fever hai dono ko. bahut der pani mai bhige.hai...n arjun wo to already ghayal the isiliye unki condition jyada kharab hai.

sam - wo thik to hai na

dr - hmm.par kuch din proper bedrest n medicine n food properly .unhe dekh kar lagta hai unhone kai din se thik se nahi khhaya

sam - dammit ye rjun ,apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhta. itna bada ho gaya bada etf ka second in command banta hai par jid or bachpana nahi gaya.kya jarurat thi pani mai bhigne ki.

kar - or teddy wo bhi dekho kya hal bana rakha hai. meri to sunti bhi nahi. jiddhi kahi ki.dono ek jaise .ram milayi jodi..

ai - uthne do dono ko acchi khabar lungi mai.

trio in so much anger.all look at them

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#563

ri room

sakshi is sitting beside riya .karan come n give her coffee. she smile to him n take coffee

sak - don't worry she will be fine.

kar - pata nahi kya hoga iska sunti hi nhi kisi ki,khud ko dusra mauka dena hi nahi chahti

sak - dono bahut pyar karte hai na ek dusre se.maine aaj tak aisa pyar nhi dekha

kar - haa bahut jyada gehara pyar hai.or sach kahu to ye inka pyar hi hai jisne inhe is mod tak ane ki himmat di itna kuch hone k bad ,itna kuch sehne k bad.

sak - or dekhna ab yahi pyar inhe ek karega ,inke sare dukh dur karega,.bus kuch waqt lagega.

kar - sahi kaha . inka pyar hi inki jindgi ki paheliyan suljhayega .

sak put her hand on his hand n assure him.he tight his grip on her n kiss her hand.

scene shift

sam is sitting on corner of arjun's bed . aisha come there with coffee n give it to sam n take her coffee n sit on bed.

ai - sote hue kisi chote bacche ki tarah masum lag rahe hai.

sam - wo baccha hi hai aisha ,duniya k liye ek rough n tough , akdu sadu khadus.cop but dil se wo baccha hi hai.qki uska dil bahut saccha or masum hai. bachan se apno k pyar ko tarasta aya hai wo..ab uska pyar uske samne is condition mai hai to kaise ye sukun se rahega.

ai - sahi kaha. par riya ke pov se bhi dekha jaye to uske liye ye sab itna asan nahi.

sam - hmm janta hu. maine us ladki ko jana hai or believe me aisha ye wo riya hai hi nahi. wo jindgi se bharpur.,use jeene wali ,choti choti baton mai khushiyan dhundne wali or ek najuk dil ki ladki thi ,totally rockstar thi. ye to jaise koi or hi hai. kya kar diya un bloody criminals ne inka hal. dar lagta hai aisha kahi inhe kuch

ai - kuch nahi hoga .hum kuch nahi hone denge.

sam - sahi kaha..mai bada hu isse.ab mujhe ek bade bhai ki responsibility puri karni hai. mai puri koshish karunga ki inki jindgi ko inke pyar ko bikharne na du

ai - hum sab apke sath hai.

sa - i know.,after all we all are family..

next morning

ri room

karan n sakshi sleep there. sakshi with ri n karan on couch. ri open her eyes n look at both..she look at sky

ri mv - dekh ishu humare karan ko uski sacchi humsafar mil hi gayi. sakshi bilkul teri tarah hai na. par tu q chali gayi mujhe chod kar.i miss u ishu.

she clear her tear n abt to getup.but karish also getup

kar - kaha ja rahi hai

ri - washroom or kaha

kar - jaldi ja i need to talk

ri stand up n go to wadhroom n come in some mins.

kar - ye sab kya tha teddy.

ri - tum kis bare mai bat kar rahe ho.

kar - dekh teddy mai bahut gusse mai already hu or gussa mat dila.

ri - wo mujhse bat karne ki jid kar raha tha.maine gate nahi khola ,barish hui wo bhig raha tha. itni thand thi bahar . maine bhi khud ko wahi ehsas dilaya jo wo feel kar raha tha

kar - pagal ho dono ek no k. waha wo itna injured hokar pani mai bhig raha tha or yaha tu bina wajah. pata hai hum time par nahi pahuchte to uske wounds par kitna strng infections ho jate. n sr bata rahe the use bacha nahi ate hum.

ri - mujhe usse milnaa hai.

same time arjun room.

arjun wake up n look at sam who is glaring him.

ar - kya hua aise q dekh raha hai

sam - jan kar anjan q ban raha hai, wajah tu acchi tarah janta hai.

ar - wo door nahi khol rahi thi, mujhse bat nahi kar rahi thi. bat nahi karegi to mai use kaise samjhaunga.

sam - waah tum dono hi samjhdar ho baki pagal ek tu jo itna injured hone k bad pani mai bhig raha tha qki usse bat karni thi. or ek wo chat par pani mai behosh padi thi

ar - kya .uff ye ladki bhi na,mai bhig rha tha to wo bhi khud ko bhiga kar mera dard sehna chahti thi.pagal hai puri

sam - tu kaunsa kam pagal hai..abhi bat karni hai to karni hai. kal nahi kar sakta tha.

ar - thik hai na. or tu na dost hi thik hai ye big brother mode mai mat ja.

sam -mujhe ana pada is mode mai tuharkat hi aisi karta hai.

arj - mujhe jiya se bat karni hai.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#564

as arjun complete his sentence ri enter his room

ri - sammy mujhe arjun se.bat karni hai.

sam - hope tum dono matter sambhal loge or kal rat jaisa kuch nahi karoge

ri - i promise

he look at arjun .

ar - i promise too

sam - ok..now talk

ri come to him n check his fever ,he is still burning in fever.

ri - kitna tej fever hai tumhe..kya jarurat thi tumhe barish mai bhigne ki . par tum or tumhari jid.

ar - tumne door nahi khola.mere liye khud ko barish mai bhiga sakti ho ,dard sahen kar sakti ho par door nahi khol sakti bat nahi kar sakti.

ri - bat karne hi ayi hu arjun.dekho.

arjun sigh

ar - tumhe kya lagta hai mai nahi samjhta, mai sab samjhta hu tum kaisa mehsus kari ho..par kya kru tumhe khona nahi chahta ,par ab maine faisla kiya hai..mai tumhe kisi chij k liye force nahi karunga. tumhe kya lagta hai tumhara mujhe arme na bulakar arjun bulna maine notice mahi kiya ya mujhe uski wajah pata nahi,

ri.- i know tum jante ho. mujhe tumse accha kaun jan sakta hai.

ar - isiliye i decided ki mai tumhe waqt dunga.tum jitna chaho .chahe puri life q na beet jaye.i hope ek din aisa jarur ayega jab tumhe ehsas hoga mera pyar tumhare liye har majburi se har pure impure se bada hai.humara pyar kisi condition mai nahi har sakta. or jab tak tum ye ehsas nahi karti i won't compel u .jab tak tum mujhe arme nahi bulati mai bhi tumhe jiya nahi bulaunga.

ri - mujhse nahi hoga arjun

ar - mujhe yakeen hai.tum apne kadam jarur aage badaogi ,or mera ye yakeen jarur sach hoga.

ri - khud ko itni takleef mat do

ar -.ye.takleef to mere naseeb mai usi din likha gayi thi jab isne tumhari jindgi mai kadam rakha tha. mai or tum alag kaha hai .

ri -tum jaisa thik samjho.

ar - but u promise me hume chodkar kahi nahi jaogi.

ri.- hmm

ar - or humara dosti.ka rishta kabhi nahi tutega. wo hak tum mujhse nahi chin sakti.

ri.- hmm..

ar - good girl

ri.take.his prescription n glare him

ri - ye kya hai

ar - ab maine kya kiya

ri - tumhari medicine ka time ho gaya tumne li nahi

ar -.lao

ri.- aise khaoge.pehle kuch kha to lo.

ar - tumhe bhi khana hoga tabhi mai khaunga

ri - nahi mujhe bhuk nahi

ar - jaise mere pet mai to chuhe marathon kar rahe hai, mujhe b bhuk nahi,

ri - tum nai sunoge na

ar - janti ho to q puch rahi ho

ri - yeah yeah.. ayu di ( she shout)

ai - haa riyu

ri - arjun k liye breakfast la dengi inhe tablet leni hai

ar - aisha bhabhi riya k liye bhi la dengi , actually mujhe tablet leni hai,

ri glare him n he ignore her

aisha smile n go to take breakfast for both..both ariya take it .ri give him medicine n ask him to sleep . he sleep again n she stare him in sleep.

tbc.,..

precap. - etf in action again. one case n after 3 days etf will be on one month leave.

will ariya come closer with time ,,will their love win.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#565

hello all

firstly , sorry for making u cry with my emotional n pain ful updates ..but its story demand .

now back to story , as u know before starting fb arjun was injured .n ri tell her story after dinner..she take 1/2 day time n after that she rush to her room .so arjun is injured n when he drenched in rain his wounds get hurt.

n for ariya its not easy for ri to behave normal .hope u understand . but i promise i will try my level best to satisfied all of you.

thanks