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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: etfr

Superb Amazing update dear

Oh so they were simran n Kajal..
Feel bad for ACP Aman m
Anyways nicely written
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thanks deat
yup they were sim n kajal
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Taif.aru14

superb! Plz thora aur jaldi update kia karo.. Thanks 4 pm.. Update soon



thanks dear
will continue soon
yar time milta hai update de deti hu. kya karu job k sath thoda mushkil hota
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: smriya

Nice update dear Awesome Continue soon



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will give it today
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part 63





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one month later after aman mukharjee death.

delhi

sik - are waah dilip us aman ki maut ka bahut asar pada team par apna kaam bich mai rok diya unhone.

ra - ab hume koi khatara nahi.

sik - ab koi gawah koi sabhut nahi hai humare khilaf sare dushman khatam ho gaye.

ra - sare nahi. mumbai mai acp arjun suryakant rawte ne humare business mai dakhal andaji ki hai. wo humare piche hai.

sik - pata nahi use kaise pata chala.par ab wo khatarak ho gaya hai. tune kuch kiya kya

ra - mere admiyon ne koshish ki , wo na bikne walon mai se hai na darne walon mai se.

sik - koi kamjori to hogi uski

ra - maine pata kiya hai, wo apni family se alag rehta hai. ek hi dost hai wo bhi acp or uski biwi bahut pyar karta hai usse.

sik - to wahi to uski kammjori hogi.

they smile evilly...


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noida

its night

ri n ishu sleeping in one room n karan in other room, karan is passing by their room after drinking water. rishu room door is slightly open he accidently see riya is restless in her sleep. she is muttering something in sleep. she is all sweating. karan go to her.

kar - teddy teddy

he touch her cheek . she is in deep sleep. due to medicine effect.she stratch karan hand .

kar - aauch teddy

ishu wake up

ish - kya hua karan

kar - teddy . kitni restless lag rahi hai, kuch chilla rahi hai.

ishu put her hand on riya's head. n crease lightly. riya hold her hand in sleep. karan also do the same she hold his hand in sleep now. n now she look little normal.karan look at ishu


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karan look at ishu n she sigh

ish - ye roj ka hai karan. jab medicine nahi leti to jagti rehti hai. or medicine le kar soti hai to unconscious state mai aise hi behave karti hai. actually iske sath jo hua uske bad ye itni himmat rakh rhi hai wahi bahut badi bat hai. humari teddy bahut brave hai karan.par after all ek ladki bhi hai jiske sath bahut bura hua hai. par wo aaj bhi nahi bhuli wo sab or bhulna itna asan bhi nahi,

kar - pata nahi kya se kya ho gaya. humari puri family barbad ho gayi.par hum ri ki himmat banenge,


both nod.


10 days later

ri n karan are searching for some information against sikna on computer. karan try to hack his imp man accout.

kar - teddy ye sikandar mumbai ja raha hai.

ri - kya ?par q?

kar - uska waha bhi business hoga.

ri - to hume bhi chalna chahiye. wo kuch deal ya bada kam karne ja raha hoga. to hume bhi chalna chahiye.shayad kuch sabut mile.


kar - hmm. mai ishu ko bhi chutti lene ko kehta hu.

( karan n ishu are also attached at cbi branch noida so they have to take official leave for such operations )

two days later,

ish - ye sikandar yaha aya or koi deal nahi ki. iske dimag mai chal kya raha hai.

kar - pata nahi. teddy tujhe kya hua.

ri - kuch nahi.hmm dekhte hai kya karta hai wo,you guys carry on mujhe kuch kam se jana hai.


she turn to go

kar - teddy

ish stop him to say further .n ri left place

kar - ye kaha gayi.

ish - aaj arjun or roshni ki first marriage anniversary hai. shayad wo kuch time akele spend karna chahti ho.

kar - hmm. pata nahi use or kya kya or kitna sehna baki hai.

they call arni n talk with them

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riya is roaming on road n thinking abt her life .

ri mv ye jindgi kya se kya ho gayi. or mai kya se kya ho gayi.sabki ladli thi or ab kitni akeli ho gayi hu. ishu or kady hai warna or akeli hoti. pehle har pal ek tyohr (festival ) sa lagta tha ab her taraf matam sa lagta hai. ek soft si ladki jise ek chot bhi bardash nahi hoti thi aaj jakhmo ka ehsas bhi nahi hota. khun ki ek bund bhi nahi dekhi jati thi aaj khun se holi khelti hu. ladai jhagda gussa in sab se nafrat thi mujhe ab ye meri jindgi ka hissa ban chuke hai. wo riya apne rishton ko lekar itni possessive thi ki unka bantna bardash nahi hota tha( she remember incident when she think rosh is close to her classmate n love him ,n then when ishu ask wether she can sacrifice arj for roshu) or aaj maine apne hi haton apna pyar roshu ko saunp diya or apni hi roshu k liye mar gayi. us riya ko jindgi se kitna pyar tha or ye riya iske liye jindgi ek jung hai. apno k bina ek pal nhi reh sakti thi or aaj sabse dur kar liya khud ko. par jo bhi ho is bat ki tassali hai meri ek family jinda hai. kaka kaki(dustin-kiran) , maai babu , ishu karan. or meri roshu or arm arjun. arme nahi ab wo mera nahi. actually mai uski nahi.mai uske layak nahi hu.uski jiya nahi hu mai mar gayi wo us din .mar gayi wo do sal pehle.

she walk more senseless

ri - aaj arjun or roshni ki anniversary hai , unhe mil nahi sakti par dur se unhe khush dekh kar kuch or pal jee lun ...shayad fir kabhi na dekh paun .meri jindgi ka kya bharosa. is jung mai kab mit jaye.


she takeout a slip on which arni house address is written.

she reach arjun house..n look at house from out side

ri - ye sikandar arjun k ghar se nikla.kuch gadbad hai.

she call karan n ishu n rush toward his house. she dont think anything n enter inside his house whose door is open already . n what she saw her leg freeze n she become numb.

there on the floor roshni is laying with so many wound of knives . she is laying in her own pool of blood. some distance ahead arjun is laying almost dead n there is stratch on his hand where roshni is written . she try to wake them n but both are not responding .

she call ambulance n luckily its very near so come fast,.

ri leave with arni ( she is in disguise) in ambulance .n call police to seal house

they reach hospital n dr declared roshni dead n arjun is in critical condition .dr is operating him,

riya is just numb n it is unbearable for her to digest that rosh her roshu is no more.

karaish come .n first time after that incident they see her cryng. she is crying alot. tears also flowing from karish eyes. they also love roshu alot. she is bff n sis of karan she tie rakhi on his hand. n for ishu she is friend n family.

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kiran n dustin also come . it is unbearable for them to bear roshu death. kiran condition is very bad. as she lost her daughter today. roshni is so close to kiran..she faint n dr attained her.

riya is sitting on bench alone. today she lost her sister. for whose life she.secrificed alot. she is no more. ri is not believing that her roshu is no more.she is crying alot, now she sit alone numbly. suddenly she hear sound of loud cry. she look at direction one aunty is begging dr to save her daughter . dr tell her something n left. she faint, ri rush to him. her husband also cme n call dr . dr attend her

ri - kya hua uncle

un - humari eklauti beti icu mai hai. wo police inspector hai. kal ek raid mai use goli lagi uske heart par. dr ne heart transplantation ka kaha. hum koshish kar rahe hai par uski condition bahut kharab hai. dr ne kaha aaj operation nahi hua to wo nahi bachegi. meri wife ye handle nahi kar pa rahi hai.

ri -hmm life hume kabhi aise.jakham deti hai jinhe hum seh nahi pate par fir bhi hume unhe jindgi bhar sehna padta hai. hum chahe ya na chahe.

ri left nsit on bench. ri think something n rush to dr.

ri - dr, kya hum roshu i mean mrs rawte k body parts donate kar sakte hai. actually unhone or unki family ne apne parts donate kiye the . aap check kar sakte hai .ye unka card no hai.un uncle ki beti ko uska heartde sakte hai.


dr - hmm abhi unki body life support se nahi hatai to kar sakte hai..but kuch test karne honge or family se permission . unke husband khud ot mai hai.

ri -aap test kijiye or wo dono roshni k foster parents hai. aap unki permission le sakte hai,

dr take dustin permission n perform some test. all test matches , rosh is perfect doner of that girl.

operation has been performed n ri hug rosh body last time n left with karish to catch sik.
today they just want to kill sik. they dont want any proof n not to arrest him ,just want to kill him.

here sam come after they left.

next day all nnewspaper , local tv spread the news of death of mrs arjun rawte n scattered acp arjun rawte. arjun come in sense n scattered to know abt rosh death according to him his jiya's death. sam break all tie with him n accuse him of roshni death.

ri karish trying all possible way to catch sikna but they left india for some time .

three days later

ri come to hospital . n meet dr.

ri - dr ab wo ladki kaisi hai,

dr - thik hai ab. kuch din mai bilkul thik ho jayegi, all thanks to you. waise mrs rawte apki kya lagti thi.

ri -roshu meri kya thi. ye samajh lijiye wo mera hissa thi jise badi berehmi se mujhse cheen liya gaya hai.

dr - mai samjha nahi

ri - wo chodiye ye bataiye mai us ladki se mil sakti hu.

dr - iske liye unke parents se permission lenihogi . ohh mr kapoor aa gaye . ap bat kihiye.

mr k - beta aap to humare liye farishta ban kar ayi hai. apne humari beti or hume nahi jindgi di hai.

ri - maine kuch nahi kiya uncle use jeena tha to wo bach gayi or use jaana tha to wo chali gayi. (abt ro) humare hath mai kuch nahi hum chahe jitni koshish kar le jindgi apna khel khel hi jati hai.


mr k- jo bhi ho beta humare.liye aap hi uske jeene ki wajah hai. thanku .bhagwan apko har maksad mai kamiyabi de or jindgi ki har khushi de.

he put his hand lovingly on ri head n she nod.

mr k - apko usse milna tha par wo so rahi hai.

ri - mai bas dekh kar chali jaungi. uski dhadkan mehsus karke.

mr k- thik hai beta.

ri - unka naam kya hai.

mr k - aisha kapoor.

ri nod n left for icu n she enter icu afer wearing hospitalgown n gloves

here aisha is laying on bed n machine is showing her heart beat.
she come near her n look at her with moist eyes.she put her hand on moniter which is showing her hear beat.

she remember roah words

ha meri riyu hum sath rahenge humesha . or mai kahi bhi rahungi mera dil meri riyu k liye dhadakta rahega or agar mai mar gayi na to waha se sitara ban kar tujhe roj dekhungi.tujhe kabhi chodungi nahi mai.

ri - roshu tu jinda hai. teri dhadkane jinda hai aisha mai..par mai tujhe bacha nahi payi. or arjun use jis dard se bachana chahti thi nahi bacha payi.
mai haar gayi roshu.


tbc.,,


precap


ri further struggle, ishu death.

present - all reaction after knowing truth that aisha has rosh heart.

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Posted: 8 years ago
hello all

so here is ri pov abt rosh death. you will know arj pov soon.
i think now you all clear why ri listen only aisha other than arjun .
n why aisha feel riya's pain.
n all the time neither sam nor arjun meet ri , ishu n karan.

hope you all liked it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the pm di...
Nice update di
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