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Posted: 8 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: sur1911

updating dear

hey dear plzz update waiting

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Posted: 8 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: Amirashah
hey dear plzz update waiting

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#333

part 62

location Delhi

sikna is sitting in a huge hall n has worry line on their face.

sik - kaun hai ye team jo hume barbad kar rahi hai. ye achanak humare dushman kaise paida ho gaye.

ran - dushman hai to hum bhi dushmani nivhayege, samar ali use uske anjam tak pahucha diya hai, ab aman mukharjee ki bari hai. dcp anurag mishra ka daya (right) hath tha wo. ab hume barbad karne chala hai

sik - dekh lenge use. ab ye aman mukharjee hi hume apni team k bare mai batayega, iski kundli nikalo,

they activate their sources against aman m ,

scene shift

noida office

SSA team sitting on chairs n discussing abt next plan of action .

kar - humare pas saboot to nahi hai par fir bhi humne unka kafi nuksan kiya hai . wo chup nahi baithenge.

ish - hmm sahi kaha wo chup nahi bethenge or hum bhi nahi baithenge, unhe har ek dard or cheekh ka hisab dena hoga.

ri - aap logon ko alert rehna hoga, or aman sir unhe apke bare mai pata bhi chal chuka hai.

am - mai unki dhamkiyon se nahi darta,.hume bas un jalladon ko saja dilwani hai , mai anurag sir ki mehnat bekar nahi jane dunga.

ri get emotional to see so much respect n dedication toward her bhaiyu.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#334

two days later

karan , ishita , riya n aman in office .

ish - aman sir aapki family mai kaun hai.

am- mere ma baba , mr anoop mukharjee or mrs neelanjana mukharjee . meri wife kajal or meri do pyari behne simran or anjali,

he show them his family pictures

kar - ye anjali to bahut cute hai.

am - hmm bahut batuni hai din bhar bak bak , boarding mai padti hai shimla.

just then aman's phone ring. he attend call n after 2 min he numbly sit on chair.

karishya come to him.

kar - aman sir kya hua.

am - ma ka phone tha, sik ne meri wife or behan ko kidnap kar liya hai . or kaha hai ki maine unki bat nahi mani , unka bahut nuksan kiya hai ab wo mera nuksan karenge.

he tell all things in shivered voice.

all get shocked , sad n afraid to know..

ri - nhi fir se nahi. hume jaldi kuch karna hoga,

she is shivering in fear n anger.

am - plz help meri family ko bacha lo.

kar - hum sab apke sath hai sir

rishi - yes sir.

they get up determined .

after 7 hour

they search alot but can't find them or trace them,.

am - damm ab mi kya karu

ri - those bloody people , chodungi nahi mai unhe.

she broke a glass table in anger n blood come out of her hand. she leave the place angerily.

after 1 hour

aman phone ring.

sik - hello acp aman kaise ho

am - sikandar

sik - are wahh pehchan liya

am - meri wife or behan kaha hai,.

sik - wo dono to meri khas mehman hai,bahut khubsurat mehman

am- unhe chuna bhi mat sik warna

sik - are are acp sahab apne dhamki dene mai der kar di.,

aman sit on floor numbly , he don't know what sik said later, he is just senseless .

call get cut. karish look at him worried.

3 min later aman received two messages from highly protected nunbers.

first mms contain video of kajal being assaulted by his goons.

n second message contain the video of fully drugged simran.

condition of both are worst.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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karish get shocked to see all this n condition of aman is worst, just then ri come n watch all this. she has flashes of that night,.

she control herself n go to aman

ri - hum haar nahi man sakte aman sir , hume unhe bachana hi hoga..

am - tum sahi keh rahi ho riya.

all take their guns n load them n some sharp knives n more arms.

sik call aman to meet him.

aman go to meet him while trio trace n follow him,aman reach their n team also very smartly without notice of sikna.

sikna inject aman , within 1 min aman feel immense n unbearable pain. he is bearingalot. sikna enjoy n left the place .

team also come there n see aman in very bad condition

riya get flashes of her faher death who died similar death.

ri - aman sir

am - ka..ja..al..s..si,ii.m..ra...n,,

kar - sir hospital chaliye

am - na..hi kuch nahi ho sakta .ye bahut khatarnak drug hai. sikna ne ise specially banwaya hai. maine unhe kuch nahi bataya . unke piche jao or meri family ko bacha lo.

ri run from there n karan follow her. ishu stay there with aman n call ambulance .

kariya reach the place where kajal n simran are kept. she look at them n remember that night. she is verge on breakdown but she control her self n rescue them very bravely . just then karan reach n both take both girls at safe place. n reach hospital

ri - aman sir kajal bhabhi or simarn thik hai humare pas hai.

am - t..th..aa..n...k..uuu

n he died.

trio has tears in their eyes but ri hide them.

scene shift

sik - kaise bacha liya uski team ne un ladkiyon ko.

goon - pata nahi boss jab hum waha pahuche pura adda blast ho chuka tha.

ra- wo acp aman mar gaya, ek dardnak or bhayanak maut.

sik - is team ka kuch na kuch karna hoga. pata lagana hoga is team ki takat.

one month later.

riya help alot to aman family . they stop their operation for some time due to official pressure bcoz they lost their two brave officers .

riya send kajal to woman's care ngo n simran to rehab center. psychological treatment of both is also continuing . riya spent time with both n bring them back to life, make them strong.n ask them to live life n fight against that type of evil. kajal get courage to see riya. she also face similar . simran is determined to take revange of her n her dada boudy.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#336

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sh - ri tu bahut brave hai tune kajal or simran ko bachaya hi nahi unhe nayi jindgi bhi di hai,

sak - kahan se lati ho itni himmat ria.

ri - in ankhon ne tabahi k kai manjar dekhe hai. or itna sab dekne k bad insan ya to tut jata hai ya bahut strong ban jata hai . tutne ka to mere pas option hi nahi tha to mai strong ban gayi.

aisha hug her. n ri also hug her.

li - fir un dono ka kya hua.

ri - us din maine kajal boudy or simran mai khud ko dekha. un jalladon ne boudy ko assault kiya or simran ko drug addict bana diya. uncle aunty tut gaye the.pehle unka beta nahi raha or unki bahu orbeti ki ye halat . i must say boudy or simran bahut brave hai mujhse bhi jyada. unhone apne liye apno k liye fir jeena sikha.or aaj boudy usi ngo k sath judi hai jinhone unki help ki thi or simran ek normal life jee rahi hai ab to uski shadi bhi ho gayi hai.

ar - mai to simran k sath itne dinraha hu , mai soch bhi nahi sakta usne sab saha hai,

ri - waqt sab sikha deta hai arjun, us din court mai mere sath jo do ladkiyon ne gawahi di thi wo boudy or simran the sik or rana k dusre alive eyewitnesses . or humne sabut k taur par wo video or pics jo sikna ne threat k liye bheje the to submit kiye the. unhe ye nhi pata ki blast karne k pehle humne sare sabut le lye the,

ch -kaise ye itna asan nahi raha hoga.

ri - asan to nahi tha par karan jaisa tech exp humare sath ho to mushkil bhi asan ho jati hai.

all look at karan with so much administration .

ri - or fir wo hua jo maine apne bure se bure sapne mai bhi nahi socha tha.maine use kho diya. meri roshu ko kho diya.

all has tears in their eyes.

tbc...

precap - roshni death

arjun side story

one surprise

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#337

hello all

thanks for ur luv n support for jep n me. hope stroy jyada stratching nahi hai, actually sabhi situations explain karna jaruri hai..mai koshish kar rahi hu ye jyada se jyada precise ho. hope you are liking it. plz give ur valuable comments .

now you all are clear that what happened in court that day. who was two other victims n what was proffs that they submitted that day.

hope i clear all properly

thanks