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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: aashi24
nice update
rosh is very sad n cry a lot
Sam come to meet rosh but he missed a chance to meet ishu n karan
ri sacrife her happiness for rosh n arjun safety
now ri become emotional less
all praise ariya relationship but arjun feeling guilty
thanks for pm.
waiting for next part

thanks dear

yup ri secrifice alot but its not only she

will update soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: neelpari
amazing update
painful one , every person bear alot
riya is really brave girl
ariya talk so nice
update soon

thanks dear

yesu said ryt every person bear alot

will update soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: bloomie
amazing update
bichaari roshni uski khud ki zindgi ki roshni hi cheen gayi use
riya jis haqeeqat se roshni aur arjun ko dur rakhna chahti thi
woh haqeekat unke piche piche bhag ayi
cont soon

thanks dear

hmm tumne bilkul sahi kaha

kabhi kabhi life mai hum jis cheej se bachna chahte hai wahi humare samne aakar khadi ho jati hai.

life is so unpredictable

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

part 60

consider this fb from both arjun n ri pov

after three month

its a dark room , only some moon light is peeping inside room from ventilation , which is showing a girl is sitting on chair n thinking something . her face is conveying absolutely no emotions .

girls pov

pure teen mahine ho gaye us rat ko ,kab maine apna har rishta har sapna ,jindgi or khud ko khoya tha. aj ye jindgi mujhe ek paheli si lagti hai jo mujhe har dam kai sawal puchti hai, jane kab mai inke uttar dhund paungi, pata nahi meri jindgi ki ye paheli suljhegi ya mai aise hi ye duniya chod jaungi,

maai kehti hai ab mai pehle se thik hu( she smile sarcastically ) , kya sach mai ? khair ab roshu pehle se better hai. thik nahi hai par apni riyu k liye thik rehne ki koshish kar rahi hai, apni riyu k liye. uncle ko mumai lautna pada. roshu aunty or karan ishu ek sath reh rahe hai. sab ek dusre ko sambhale ki koshish kar rahe hai. or yaha maai babu mujhe dekhte hai. teen mahine pehle karan ne bataya usi din arjun par bhi attack hua tha or wo coma mai hai. us ek rat ne kai jindgiyan badal di.

aayi baba ko jab humari family ka pata chala wo milne aayethe or karan ne roshu ko jiya bana kar milwaya. shayad waqt bhi yahi chahta tha jo maine kiya hai, abhi ishu ka phone aya tha ki kuch der pehle arjun hosh mai aya tha. uske hoton par pehla nam jiya tha. dr ne kaha hai kuch ghanton mai use hosh aa jayega, itne dino mai aaj kuch accha suna, wo ab thek hai . aisa laga jaise kai dino dhup sehne k bad ek sheetal hawa ka jhonka aya hai. par pata nahi wo uthega to kya hoga. plz arme apni jiya ki bat man lena ,khud ko or roshu ko sambhal lena use jiya man lena.

scene shift

mumbai hospital

( arjun's side story start)

arjun open his eyes slowly . ayi baba doctor n nurses are sorounding him,

dr - how are you feeling arjun

ar - fine,

dr check him n leave

ayyi - beta tu thik hai , kahi dard to nahi ho raha,

baba - are ye to babbar sher hai ,apna mission pura kar ke lauta hai , ansu na baha iske liye mithai baant.

ar - haa ayi mai thik hu. jiya kaisi hai . wo aayi thi mujhse milne , wo kitni ghabra gayi hogi ,pata nahi is bar kya kiya hoga usne, khud ko kitni takleef di hogi. are anurag dada ko to baby bhi ho gaya hoga , ladka hua ya ladki , pata hai aayi maine or jiyu ne to nam bhi soche the.

he is talking only abt his jiya n ayi baba look at him very sadly

aayi - beta hum bad mai bat karenge aaram kar le tu

n they forcefully make him sleep. its very hard for them to convinced him,but dr has advised them that for 2-3 day he is not ableing to handle any kind of shock

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#255

nextday

arj- ayi batao na jiya ne mujhse abhi tak bat q nahi ki,wo thik to hai na

ayi - wo thik hai beta . tujhe pata hai hum mile the usse , bahut pyari bacchi hai..uska naam

ar - nahi ayi mat bataiye ab mai usi se uska nam.sununga, or acchi q na ho akhir pasand kiski hai,ayi papa aye the.

ayi - hmm aya tha . life ne use aisa bana diya warna wo tujhe bahut pyar karta hai.

ar - janta hu ayi.par ek bat to hai wo mujhe kabhi samjh nahi paye. jiya k papu ko dekho kaise jiyu ko samjhte hai.or uaki momi

n he stopped

arj - sorry ayi. mere pas bhi to ma hai or wo aap ho.

she lovinglyhug him

after 3 days

aayi baba tell arjun all things

arj- kya . aisa kaise ho saktahai aayi . cylinder blast.or jiyu uska kya ho raha hoga . wo to akele jee nahi pa rahi hogi. uske liye uski family se badkar kuch nahi, or ab wo family nahi rahi. baba mujhe usse bat karni hai.

baba.handover arj a phone.

baba - ye lo uska no changeho gaya.hai.

ar call on that no

ro - hello

ar - hello jiya mai arjun

ro - arjun

n she cry .

ar - mujhe aaj hi pata chala,i am sorry jiya tumharri itni mushkil ghadi mai mai tumhara sath nahi de paya,

ro - jo hua usme tumhara.kya kasur .kaise ho tum ab

ar - thik hu. or mai kal aa raha.hu.

ro - nahi. i mean plz try to understande. life mai itna kuch ho gaya mujhe sambhalne k liye thoda waqt chahiye.

ar - i understand jiyu. take your time n plz always remember i am with u jiya.

both cut call, n she cry alot. karan come

ro - karan wo jab jiya bolta hai na to bahut guilt hota hai. hum galat kar rahe hai.

kar - tum bas ye socho ki tum jo kar rahi ho apni riyu k liye par rahi ho. plz roshu,

she nod n he hug her

some more week passed like that. arjun get discharged n regularly talk with rosh. she daily feel bad n guilty . but karan n ishu console n encourage her. here ri is getting better dr vani is doing preparation for her next operation which will performed in London .

1 month later after arj get conscious

he call rosh

ar - jiya kaisi ho

ro - thik hu tum kaise ho.

ar - jiya kya mai ab aa sakta hu milne.

ro - arjun mai bahut jaldi aa rahi hu mumbai, or plz tab tak hum bat nahi karenge.kuch akhiri waqt us shaher ko dena chahti hu jaha humara bachpan beeta , jaha hume kai lamhe jiye hai,

ar - hmm , mai smjhta hu. i promise tumhe call nahi karunga. par plz tum apna khayal rakhna,

ro - hmm bye.

she cut call n look at karish.

ro - tum log mujhe akela chod kar london q jaa rahe ho.

kar - sorry roshu tujhe akele chodna nahi chahte par majburi hai.maai babu ka imp operation hai, or mujhe university mai kam hai. jaruri nahi hota to kabhi nahi jata . mom dad jaldi hi laut ayenge, dad ne sameer se bat kar li hai.

( actually all are going for ri's operation )

ro - hmm thik hai. n don't worry mai sab smbhal lungi. riyu k arme ko meri wajah se kabhi dukh nahi hoga. riyu teri roshu tujhe diya wachan har hal mai pura karegi.

here ri is crying seeing rosh.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

after 3-4 days

all take ri to London for her operation .

arjun enter his building

arj mv wow meri jiya aa rahi hai mumbai.par usne ye nahi bataya kab . yeor iske surprises. usne bahut kuch saha hai par mai ab usebahut khush rakhunga.

he enter his flat.n throw out his shocks n start playing his video game

his.phone rings he attend call

arj - haa sam bol jaldi se is waqt game ki bahut crucialstage par hu

sam - tujhse kuch kam tha

ar - tu hai kaha is waqt

sam - asusual diwali mana raha hu. sun meri college ki dost aa rahi hai or maine use tera address de diya hai..

( rest u all know how he convinced arj to let ro stay at his home for sometime)

arj door bell ring

he open door n look at rosh. hedirectly look into her eyes n get mesmerized .

( rest same as show he lost in her n she tease him over his dirty room n sam come n ask forgiveness from rosh n rosh tell him she will stay at arj's place. arjun enjoying all this. sam left after some time)

arj mv ky ye meri jiya hai . iski ankhe awaj bilkul waisi hi , ye sam ki dost hai or commissioner sir ki niece . dimag kehta hai yahi jiya hai par dil wo q nahi man raha, mujhe wait karna hoga,

ro mv mujhe yaha rukna hoga arjun ko direct nahi bol sakti. qki wo apni jiya ka wait kar raha tha. jiya uska pyar hai or mai jiya nahi hu. sab awkward ho jata, i will wait. par mijhe jiya banna hoga apni riu k liye.

here ri operation complete n its successful . kiran n Dustin returned mumbai n roshni shifting their house.

arj - tum kaun ho tumhari awaj ankhe.usse milti hai. tum sam ki dost comm sir ki niece ho kya tum

ro - m,,mai jiya hu.

arj happily hug her n she mechinecally hug him n a tear drop from her eyes.

some days later

mumbai beach

ar - jiya

ro - arj ab to tumhe mera nam pata hai na plz mujhe roshni bulao

arj -par tum jiya bhi ho na

ro - plZ arj mujhe roshni bulao mujhe jyada accha lagega.

ar - ok baba. roshni khush, waise tumhe sam ko batane se q mana kiya

ro mv qki agar use sab pata chala to wo sach jan jayega , qki usne roshni or riya dono ko jana hai ortum sirf apni jiya ko jante ho.

ro - qki use sach jankar dukh hoga ki humne use chupaya . use lagega hum use trust nhi karte. or jo sach kisi ko takleef de wo na hi samne aye to accha,. wo khush hai use lagta hai ki uski wajah se hum mile n fall in luv. to theek hai

ar - okie mam samajh gaya. pata hai mujhe lagta hai tum jiya ho hi nahi balki banne ki koshish.kar rahi ho..

ro - haa sahi kaha wo jiya kahi kho gayi hai. mai jiya banne ki koshih kar rahi hu. par mai nahi ban pa rahi. itna kuch ho gaya. plz arj mujhe roshni hi smjh lo . ye tumhari jiya ki iccha hai.

ar - meri jiya ki iccha sar ankho pr. accha wo dekho

ro look at red n white flower n arjun give her flowers. n she remember ri dairy entry n

ro - red n white flower

ar- ye sab ful hi to hai rango mai kya rakha hai,.tum ladkiyan bhi na

ro - qki romentic sub mai tumhare marks thode kam aate.hai buddhu

( rest u know)

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#257

after some days arj proposed rosh for marriage she says yes.its their wedding day

arj mv aaj meri or roshni ki shadi hai. par mujhe iski khushi q nahi hai. dil ka ek kona kehta hai kuch galat ho raha hai or dusra kona kehta hai sab thik hi to hai.mai itna confuse q hu.mera dil q itna ghabra raha hai.

ri in London

ri.mv i know arj tumhara dil tumhe rok raha hoga par plz beh jane do apne dil ko is waqt k dariya mai. apni jiya ki bat man lo or sab chodkar roshu se shadi kar lo. qki ab yahi shi hai . plz arjun tumhare dil or jindgi par mera hak hai na to meri bat man lo apni jiya k liye kar do.

aj - mai bhi na kya soch raha hu. shayad ye shadi k pehle ki ghabrahat hai.

ros mv riyu aaj meri or arj ki shadi hai . yahi chahti thi na tu. mujhe bilkul ye sab accha nahi lag raha par tere liye mai ye kar jaungi. jo bhi hoga dekha jayega.

she sit in mandap. n her phone ring.

ro - karan .tum or ishu q nhi aye

kar - sorry roshu par sach mai majburi hai warna mai tujhe akela nahi chodta

ish - sorry roshu but sach mai hum tera sath dena chahte the.

ro - its ok. tum apna khayal rakhna.

arj snatches phone

ar - angel its not right tum humari life k imp din par nhi ho.

ish - sorry buddy par sach mai majburi hai

ar - tumhe is waqt apni teddy k pas hona chahiye

ish - mai to usi k pas hu

ar - kya

ish- haa uske dil mai

ar - mere bhi, or jaldi aana,

n they cut call n arni get married . here riya pass her time holding ganesh murti send by arjun whole time..

tbc,,,

precap

some present scene n riya fight against sik n aman mukharjee join her in mission

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#258

hello all

so here is next part of jep akp

as i said first day this story is based on serial n it is continuation part of that story.so i include all incidents that we watched in serial . but not totally bcoz it take more time to write all so i write them in precise . plz bear it n tell me how you feeling abt story.

if u hv any doubt feel free to ask me n if hv any suggestions plz share it with me

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Ariya Kazi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#259

no doubt! Story to super duper wowsowe he.. Mein bht mahine se story padha nahi, par last 2 days me pura cover kar lia. It's really painful story, but superb! Thanks 4 pm.. N sorry story me lyk na dene k liye..