Ariya ff- THE UNCONDITIONAL LOVE [Thread 2 UPDATED - PAGE 114]

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

oh got scary chapter
what happened to riya? 😭
hope ETF will save riya 😭
arjun was devastated seeing riya in that state 🥺
continue soon
plz update long dear its so small

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Suzie

@etfr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

NOTE

Thanks everyone for waiting..

Sorry for this much late. It was my 1st semester exams of BA and It wasn't prepared . So I have too give my maximum time in studying..And I read the other stories even commented them because it hardly took minutes but not able to give time and mind to wrote my update..

So sorry for this much late..

Just today I got free from exams so I started my brain to come back to my story and here I wrote it..

I know update is small but promise no more gap like earlier now..

Give your precious comments and like if you liked..

Thank you buddies

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

awesesome update

loveit

thanks for pm

cont soon

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Awesome update

Plzz cont soon

Thanks for pm

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

awesome. hope riya is fine. loved arjun's reaction. continue soon. thanks for pm.

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

amazing chappy buddy but scary too

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: Naazrt
amazing chappy buddy but scary too

thanks for pm me

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#268

Loved it dear
Awesome and Scary update 🤢
Poor Rita got trapped
Good that Siki is dead but Around is in bad condition
That was justified too
Hope ETF save Riya on time
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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Shomaila khan

@hijabEfajr

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#269

oh GOD scary update. what happend to rii?? plzz usy kuch mat karna?? i knw our heros bacha lyn gy

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Mishthi_Shivsai

@Mishthi_Shivsai

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#270

Thanks for updating this story. I was waiting for the next part and checked the thread regularly.

Shayad yeh thori ajeeb laage apko ki phir isse pehle maine koi comment kyun nehi ki. Actually i rejoined forum after probably a year and was arbitrarily going through the stories when this one caught my eyes. But when no further update came i thought probably u discontinued it. Then i read the note regarding ur exams.

Anyways coming to the story first. Its really good. And the title of the story is quite apt. Simple yet expressing loads. Liked the crucial point of the story where team gets to know about riya being alive and their emotions. Loved sam riya new bonding which finally cut put an end to the monster sik. Arjun confused and trying to recognise ri and finally when they came face to face were beautifully penned down.

Now coming to this update. So finally the tested times r over. Arjun's breakdown was quite normal but it was a treat to read how shree liza helped him regain his composure so quickly and in return they got a shock too. He he he. Arjun Rawte is a fighter ...he proved it again.

But end is a shocking cliffhanger. Its quite scary too. Ri caged but dont tell that the cage can only be opened with the help of sik only. How on earth did she get caught in such a trap??? Everybody was busy fighting and samjun was with sik then what the hell was she doing alone ??? OMG too many qs and i need answers quickly. As u promised and like u used to do before pls pls update quickly. Aise point pe chod ke readers ko zyada tension dena acchi baat nehi. He he he he. Accha agar apne jaldi update di toh lambi comment karungi...pakka. he he he he .

Thanks for the pm. Have a gud day.