Arakshi OS - Far Away

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 9 years ago

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Yayyee.. Me dancing right now..

How do you do this?

Describing everything with so intensity that it nearly tore out my heart..

The swirling emotions, the moon, the chilly night, the cold..

I am never getting married.

You have turned me into a hopeless romantic.

Loved the last part most..

Arjun's confession and the description..

Distance doesn't matter..

Really superb..

Please con soonz..

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 9 years ago

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 9 years ago

Di! Very glad to receive your pm.The story of their longing for each other is not a secret but the way you did it;makes it feel all the more special.The story ends but the aftermath taste lingers.The setting is so beautiful and blissful.The metaphor of moon just adds a star to the already beautiful words and emotions.Though it is short compared to your other splendid pieces of art,still it compels to read it all over again. Thanks for the pm. Keep writing and Keep smiling

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

omg so romantic

i always say i want to be sakshi of ur stories

arjun omg i will really find my arjun

so romatinc dear plzzz write more

love to read ur stories

just love arakshi so much

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved It
Awwwsssmmm OS
Super Cute n Sweet

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PrettyRapunzel

@PrettyRapunzel

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Posted: 9 years ago

OH MY GOD. What a beautiful OS. Its awesome. Their emotions are described very skillfully. And the simple confession is always makes her heart swell with love. They are just adorable. Thank You for such a Amazing story. Keep writing dear.

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

awesome work
simple confession but with same intensity
thanks for the pm

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 9 years ago

Rituuu..🤗
What a beautiful OS.. I Loved it.. ofcourse and the night sky.. moon..stars.. I loved it all.
About Arakshi..they were just so adorable..😃
Simple..sweet chutku but lovely os.